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Post by Gront on Jun 4, 2009 13:11:38 GMT -5
the guy jaoob dj is kicking looks abit like axey-man,lol I see absolutely no similarities, and even if there were, Jacob was a character before even I was here.
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Post by Psibat on Jun 4, 2009 13:15:02 GMT -5
the guy jaoob dj is kicking looks abit like axey-man,lol I see absolutely no similarities, and even if there were, Jacob was a character before even I was here. I misunderstood this too but what he means is Translation: The character that Jacob is kicking looks like Axey Man" not Jacob himself but the character being attacked.
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Post by Gront on Jun 4, 2009 13:18:06 GMT -5
I see absolutely no similarities, and even if there were, Jacob was a character before even I was here. I misunderstood this too but what he means is Translation: The character that Jacob is kicking looks like Axey Man" not Jacob himself but the character being attacked. What!? I swear that word wasn't there when I first checked... Anyways, I still don't see a similarity, aside from the fact that they're both generic stick figures.
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Post by madvideogamer on Jun 4, 2009 13:38:38 GMT -5
FILTER RAPE.
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Post by llllllllllll on Jun 4, 2009 16:56:50 GMT -5
POST WHOREING. Actually its mostly glow and blur.
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Post by llllllllllll on Dec 8, 2010 17:27:51 GMT -5
Bumping for minor updates. behold
I feel like creating a new character but I can't quite put my finger on the power he or she will have. I'm not sure if I actually want to make one but I got a slight urge to. Just keeps bugging me, well anyhow.
Reason for Editing: Man reading my earlyer posts makes me think "Man I was a fucking inmature dick back in the day"
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Post by llllllllllll on Dec 31, 2010 0:53:42 GMT -5
I guess this counts as an update so bumping. Name change from Jacob to Ruthless JD. The name has been claimed by its rightful owner
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jacobdg
Newbie
I like Pie. The End.
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Post by jacobdg on Dec 31, 2010 1:00:59 GMT -5
Like Rialto the best, hes so simple in a good way.
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DaringVonContra
Saintly
ONLY THE MANLIEST MEN WEAR PINK!![M0n:-4658]
I will fucking murder you
Posts: 2,583
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Post by DaringVonContra on Dec 31, 2010 6:42:40 GMT -5
I am not sure if thats Jacob or not.
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Post by llllllllllll on Dec 31, 2010 7:04:50 GMT -5
I am not sure if thats Jacob or not. It is and don't raise hell about it.
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DaringVonContra
Saintly
ONLY THE MANLIEST MEN WEAR PINK!![M0n:-4658]
I will fucking murder you
Posts: 2,583
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Post by DaringVonContra on Dec 31, 2010 7:09:41 GMT -5
Im not.
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Post by llllllllllll on Dec 31, 2010 7:23:37 GMT -5
Oh good cause the last thing we want is someone trying to piss him off and getting him banned again. Yes this includes making fun of his ability to draw, thats user hate
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Post by John12346 on Jan 7, 2011 14:43:29 GMT -5
Nitro, not for nothing, but you need to re-create your roster.
Everything's too vague. :/
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 7, 2011 15:21:33 GMT -5
Nitro, not for nothing, but you need to re-create your roster. Everything's too vague. :/ I know there are flaws and stuff, but tell me so I don't totally mess up everything. What am I missing? Am I missing any details or should I put in more thought?
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Post by John12346 on Jan 7, 2011 15:56:08 GMT -5
Well, the main issue is that, from what I've seen, the characters you HAVE used so far(Rialto and Malice) have been using powers not listed down on their profiles. Their weaknesses don't seem to be developed enough either. And in addition to that, spelling and grammar problems exist.
Even if your characters have a lot of powers, it's your responsibility to let us know what they are.
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 8, 2011 13:30:41 GMT -5
UPDATE, RIALTO'S ROSTER HAS BEEN ADDED. EXPECT FUTURE UPDATES[/b]
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MANstorm
Apprentice
Sandykins :3[M0n:300]
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Post by MANstorm on Jan 8, 2011 13:50:34 GMT -5
Not entirely sure if i'm reading this right but it kind of confuses me that flashbang has the power to shoot light at you that has the ability to go slower than the speed of light
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Post by Metal Chao on Jan 8, 2011 14:07:59 GMT -5
"Weaknesses: Can take damage" ? That's a pretty rubbish weakness :V
Especially when it's immediately followed by "Strengths: Heals most damage instantly"
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 8, 2011 14:26:25 GMT -5
"Weaknesses: Can take damage" ? That's a pretty rubbish weakness :V Especially when it's immediately followed by "Strengths: Heals most damage instantly" Heals most damage Nearly instantly. Being in the void has an effect that heals most brawlers anyway if they receive damage. With his ability plus this add on ability its almost like a quick 10 second heal, but in truth his ability takes over 5 minutes. Not just a quick snap like that. There's a limitation to what can be healed though. Not entirely sure if i'm reading this right but it kind of confuses me that flashbang has the power to shoot light at you that has the ability to go slower than the speed of light Ok its Fixed.
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Post by Metal Chao on Jan 8, 2011 14:45:28 GMT -5
I still think you need a more detailed weakness than "not invincible" because honestly that's pretty lazy and also obvious
Second.
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Post by Grimscott on Jan 8, 2011 14:46:35 GMT -5
"Weaknesses: Can take damage" ? That's a pretty rubbish weakness :V Especially when it's immediately followed by "Strengths: Heals most damage instantly" Heals most damage Nearly instantly. Being in the void has an effect that heals most brawlers anyway if they receive damage. Where'd you get that from? If a Brawler heals it's probably cuz someone healed them or someone forgot to draw the wound. |:C With his ability plus this add on ability its almost like a quick 10 second heal, but in truth his ability takes over 5 minutes. Using time references on a site where we mainly use comics is a bad idea. How long is 10 seconds? A couple of panels? An entire post? There's a limitation to what can be healed though. Then say so. Like if he can heal like slash wounds and bruises but not removed limbs. I think a Brawler should only have an official healing factor/ability of some sorts when they have very little offensive capability, or if there's some kind of catch to it. Here, I would suggest throwing it out entirely. Also, I think you should pick between keeping dragon or snake form, both seems like too much IMO. He can already fly, does he really need teleporting too? I don't like the spheres going to Rialto either. It sounds more like it would be the sole ability of a completely different Brawler, not a secondary power of an already strong one. Seriously. Don't let him keep that power. It's even worse because you say "different colors mean different abilities" and then you don't even say what colors mean what. So basically you can just pull stuff out of your butt whenever you want. Not cool.
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 8, 2011 16:42:31 GMT -5
The spheres is one of the original powers hes had and I wouldn't feel exactly comfortable giving it up. The Snake and Dragon will stay. Teleportation is necessary if you want to get some place fast. Flying takes a bit longer. Plus he has wings to signify his heritage. I even put a limit on how far he can teleport. I know its very selfish of me to have the ability to fly and the power to teleport, but I feel I can be flexible with this. I also have ideas. Flying is just so he can be more maneuverable in the air, teleporting is just so he can get from place to place fast. Now if you'd feel comfortable with me coming up with a different way for him to teleport like a device or something sure I'm up for it. I'm not just going to abuse the hell out of both powers because I have them. He's just going to fly alot, maybe teleport every now and then, then continue flying. Its like using a shortcut whenever he needs to. If you consider it cheating then fine hes cheating, but bottom line I have ideas for these powers and I need them. As for the spheres, the colors mean NOTHING unless its not a sphere but something else. Like a quadrilateral or something that can summon a laser. Any shape that's not a sphere is special, and yes special shapes can be destroyed. As for the weaknesses I've updated it again.
You know I'm going to put up a fight when it comes to the powers he has. I'll accept the advice, but only so much. If I feel I can be flexible with it then I'll adjust myself accordingly. I'm not being a smartass or anything. I'm just defending myself to give a valid argument. Fuck everything here it's all old and pointless dribble.
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Post by destructin on Jan 8, 2011 17:06:32 GMT -5
"I can be flexible with these powers"
Pfft. More like:
"I want more advantage than any other character, so let me give my characters shitloads of abilities."
I also hate the "Oh I won't use this power (teleportation) so much, he'll do this (flying) instead more often" excuse
What's the point of having teleportation when you will fly around more, What's with you and overpowering your characters?
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Post by Metal Chao on Jan 8, 2011 17:09:04 GMT -5
Now you've just changed his weakness into a strength! It's gone from "Not invincible" to "Invincible in certain circumstances" BEING ABLE TO TAKE DAMAGE IS NOT A WEAKNESS, if your brawler is so strong that you need to specify that he is actually invincible then you are doing something wrong!
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 8, 2011 18:25:19 GMT -5
"I can be flexible with these powers" Pfft. More like: "I want more advantage than any other character, so let me give my characters shitloads of abilities." I also hate the "Oh I won't use this power (teleportation) so much, he'll do this (flying) instead more often" excuse What's the point of having teleportation when you will fly around more, What's with you and overpowering your characters? So he has a few extra abilities. BIG, WHOOP. There's been WORSE then me. Lasers, can breath fire, teleportation, flying, spheres, discharge of energy, can morph into a dragon or snake. All this gripping won't get nowhere. It'll just keep leading down this road till I either prove why I have so many powers for one brawler, I get banned for seemingly smartassing someone, or till someone else wins the argument and we all go at peace. Go ahead slander me cause of the powers I have. But let me tell you this. I'm not going to change a damn thing. I'm sick of it, I really am. Always getting chewed out cause of the power set I choose. I make editations and shit, but people continue to nag me about it. Bottom line. I'm being fare. Even if I have a weird way of being fare, atleast I'm BEING fare. This is my fun brawler, and I intend to have fun using him. You guys act like I stole every single power in the book and put it in this one brawler. Just chill out. There's nothing wrong with a slightly over powered brawler whose in the hands of someone who doesn't have any evil intentions to abuse him in the first place. Stop over reacting seriously. Its not something to bring the house down on me about. When I feel comfortable with his powers and feel like I don't need some of them I'll ditch them. Hes a multipower brawler. They're rare nowadays anyway. Better then just causing more clutter by separating the powers into individual brawlers making even more problems arise. Now you've just changed his weakness into a strength! It's gone from "Not invincible" to "Invincible in certain circumstances" BEING ABLE TO TAKE DAMAGE IS NOT A WEAKNESS, if your brawler is so strong that you need to specify that he is actually invincible then you are doing something wrong! Hes not invincible. Please reread the roster. If you could've noticed it said "Melee attacks do more damage then lasers or explosions, but that doesn't mean it doesn't have an effect." If he looses his head, he dies, but if he looses an arm or leg, he can keep fighting.
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Post by Metal Chao on Jan 8, 2011 18:42:11 GMT -5
Yes but that's just common sense! If you're going to make a weakness, please make it something that doesn't apply to everyone :V
Your current weakness says "takes reduced damage from certain attacks". This is not a weakness, it is a strength. Weaknesses and Strengths aren't necessarily different, a brawler's special ability can double as both a strength and a weakness if it can be used against them, but yours is ONLY a strength because you are taking reduced damage from energy weapons and normal damage from being punched in the face. You can't use a higher than average tolerance to energy weapons against someone. Does he take regular damage from melee attacks or more damage than a person usually would? If he takes regular damage, that is not a weakness. If he has a weaker than average skeleton, that's a weakness.
Here are some more examples of things that are weaknesses:
Easily fooled Becomes irrational when angered Easily inflammable Slow moving Dim witted
Here are some examples of Weaknesses that can also be Strengths:
Ranged specialist (Powerful fighter at long range, nearly useless at close range) Melee specialist (Vice versa) Involuntary transformation trigger (Owns an alternate form that provides its own unique strengths and weaknesses but can be triggered by an opponent if it gives them an advantage) Flame body (absorbs heat based attacks to heal, takes extra damage from water)
Here are some examples of things that are not weaknesses at all:
Not having super strength Not being able to take sixty bullets to the head Not being invincible Feeling pain when wounded Moving slower than light speed Not being resistant to magic
Now please either just scrap the weaknesses section and let us work out our own in fights or think up some real ones that aren't just loosely disguised strengths ;)
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 8, 2011 18:55:04 GMT -5
I wanted him to have weaknesses like a regular human but you guys acted like it was going to be a bad move to do that. So now hes vulnerable to melee attacks, can take only a bit of lasers and some explosive damage. If you looked at John vs Rialto 2 on the next page near the bottom you'll see him braving the lasers but hes getting ripped to pieces while doing it. I don't want any creativity I just want originality to the weaknesses. Thanks for the advice and all but I'm sticking with what I have.
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Post by Metal Chao on Jan 8, 2011 19:03:06 GMT -5
But that's NOT A WEAKNESS! That's just being normal, it's neither strength nor weakness ):
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Post by llllllllllll on Jan 8, 2011 19:17:03 GMT -5
But that's NOT A WEAKNESS! That's just being normal, it's neither strength nor weakness ): Exactly. UPDATE, MALICE HAS BEEN ADDED, NO COMPLAINING, BABIES.[/b]
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Post by Icebrigade on Jan 8, 2011 19:22:12 GMT -5
I think nitro means he has the resistance of a normal person, unlike most brawlers who have a higher resistance then most.
Either that or I don't know what I'm saying.
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