Post by Icebrigade on May 25, 2010 23:53:36 GMT -5
Well after reading some of the different stories posted in this here section, I decided I'd try my hand at it.
I'm not the best writer, my grammar might be off a bit and I have a feeling I used to many commas, but I think its ok enough to post here.
NOTE: I was most inspired by Balto's Factory Finale story so far, so expect for some things (like Brawl HQ) to be the same, or at least slightly the same.
ALSO: this first chapter is obviously not about Ice, I'm going to be introducing most if not all of my roster some time during this story if I continue it.
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It was about 9:00 at night, all the shops were closing down, owners selling the last they could before nightfall. Brawl city had never been more exciting than in the last few days, and what caused that excitement was about to walk straight through Brawl City Headquarters doors. See, the last few days there had been reports of strange assurances all throughout the city, and no, these weren't your normal Brawler fight kind of strange, these were the kind of strange like, "Hey! did you see that wall just transform into a cat!?"
Yeah that kind of strange, and it only gets worse from there....
A girl was sitting behind her desk at the brawl city HQ, she was laying back in her chair, the green hat that overflowed her head tilting almost to the point of falling off, yet somehow staying on. It had been a slow day, definitely not normal for Brawl city, and everyone was about ready to pack up and go home. At around 9:15, she walked through the doors to Brawl HQ. Grimscott looked down from her stare at the ceiling as the girl nearly busted the doors off of their hinges.
A smile suddenly came across Grimscott's face as she realized it was finally going to get exciting. Her smile quickly became a look of confusion when she noticed the girl was obviously younger than most people who have entered the HQ, and as she walked up to the counter Grimscott had to wonder what she was doing here.
"Let me cut to the chase, I need to see Balto-Boy, stat!" The girl said sternly, a slight quiver was in her voice, barely noticeable but definitely there.
Grimscott was a bit surprised by the Girl's courage. She played along.
"Whoa whoa whoa!" exclaimed Grimscott, "and who might you be? not just anyone sees Balto these days"
"It isn't important! I need to see Balto-Boy now!" her voice slightly louder and a tad bit annoyed, still quivering slightly.
"Listen, I don't know who you are but it's almost time for us to close for the night, we all need some sleep." Grimscott was obviously enjoying her first real talk today.
"I'm not going to say it again, I need to talk to him." The girl seemed angry now.
"I'm tellin' ya there's nothing I can do" Grimscott lied, this was a lot of fun, and besides, did a little girl really need to see Balto?
Suddenly the Girl's posture changed, she looked down to the ground and her hair cast a shadow over her face. Raising her arm up to the side, she seemingly aimed at the wall.
"Let me demonstrate why I have to see Balto-Boy..." She said, obviously pissed at this meeting so far.
An orb of inverted light appeared around the area of wall the girl was aiming at, changing the wooden surface into a kind of light blue color. The section of wall ripped apart into chunks, which then ripped into smaller chunks until it was almost invisible.
The Atoms of the wall had broken apart and were re-shaping in the Girl's outstretched hand. Grimscott watched, not expecting what had happened in just a matter of seconds. Almost instantly the girl was pointing a sword at Grimscott.
"The name's Jess. I need to see The Boss"
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So SPB, shall I keep going with this?
I'm not the best writer, my grammar might be off a bit and I have a feeling I used to many commas, but I think its ok enough to post here.
NOTE: I was most inspired by Balto's Factory Finale story so far, so expect for some things (like Brawl HQ) to be the same, or at least slightly the same.
ALSO: this first chapter is obviously not about Ice, I'm going to be introducing most if not all of my roster some time during this story if I continue it.
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Chapter 1: A peculiar girl
It was about 9:00 at night, all the shops were closing down, owners selling the last they could before nightfall. Brawl city had never been more exciting than in the last few days, and what caused that excitement was about to walk straight through Brawl City Headquarters doors. See, the last few days there had been reports of strange assurances all throughout the city, and no, these weren't your normal Brawler fight kind of strange, these were the kind of strange like, "Hey! did you see that wall just transform into a cat!?"
Yeah that kind of strange, and it only gets worse from there....
.........
A girl was sitting behind her desk at the brawl city HQ, she was laying back in her chair, the green hat that overflowed her head tilting almost to the point of falling off, yet somehow staying on. It had been a slow day, definitely not normal for Brawl city, and everyone was about ready to pack up and go home. At around 9:15, she walked through the doors to Brawl HQ. Grimscott looked down from her stare at the ceiling as the girl nearly busted the doors off of their hinges.
A smile suddenly came across Grimscott's face as she realized it was finally going to get exciting. Her smile quickly became a look of confusion when she noticed the girl was obviously younger than most people who have entered the HQ, and as she walked up to the counter Grimscott had to wonder what she was doing here.
"Let me cut to the chase, I need to see Balto-Boy, stat!" The girl said sternly, a slight quiver was in her voice, barely noticeable but definitely there.
Grimscott was a bit surprised by the Girl's courage. She played along.
"Whoa whoa whoa!" exclaimed Grimscott, "and who might you be? not just anyone sees Balto these days"
"It isn't important! I need to see Balto-Boy now!" her voice slightly louder and a tad bit annoyed, still quivering slightly.
"Listen, I don't know who you are but it's almost time for us to close for the night, we all need some sleep." Grimscott was obviously enjoying her first real talk today.
"I'm not going to say it again, I need to talk to him." The girl seemed angry now.
"I'm tellin' ya there's nothing I can do" Grimscott lied, this was a lot of fun, and besides, did a little girl really need to see Balto?
Suddenly the Girl's posture changed, she looked down to the ground and her hair cast a shadow over her face. Raising her arm up to the side, she seemingly aimed at the wall.
"Let me demonstrate why I have to see Balto-Boy..." She said, obviously pissed at this meeting so far.
An orb of inverted light appeared around the area of wall the girl was aiming at, changing the wooden surface into a kind of light blue color. The section of wall ripped apart into chunks, which then ripped into smaller chunks until it was almost invisible.
The Atoms of the wall had broken apart and were re-shaping in the Girl's outstretched hand. Grimscott watched, not expecting what had happened in just a matter of seconds. Almost instantly the girl was pointing a sword at Grimscott.
"The name's Jess. I need to see The Boss"
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No, Jess doesn't have control over what she makes yet, she just got lucky with the sword. This will be explained soon.
So SPB, shall I keep going with this?
