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Post by Stuphfers on Mar 25, 2012 14:02:32 GMT -5
Name: Router Age: [?] Gender: Male Powers: Scan: Has the ability to quickly scan an enemys attack and use it right back at them! H4x: Basically like using hacks but in real life, obviously. He shouts out his H4x command and well, does it. (Pretty self explanitory) Weapons: He rams his opponent with the large spike on his forehead. He has a laser hidden in his lower compartment. He has medium strength armour. Weakness: Water. Electricity. (Would over charge his system) When he rams his opponent, he ends up confusing himself as well Scaning then using the enemys attack uses 10% of his battery Has a battery. Its solar powered but slowly regens. Heat. His system core is vulnarable(shown as the blue oval on the picture) While he's in no-clip mode, he can't be hit by physical attacks, but can still be hit by energy attacks (And there's a simple body for those who dont want to spend time on the full body) (He's still in a questionable stage to me, but I wanted to post him on here for feedback. AKA feedback would be appreciated.)
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Post by Shackles on Mar 26, 2012 8:39:02 GMT -5
Most of the powers seem pretty nice, the character seems cool. Only thing I'd say you might want to reconsider would be the hacking ability, or maybe make it more defined like give a few specific things he can do with it. Just giving him undefined reality-hacking abilities means he could potentially do anything, sort of like just having undefined 'magic' abilities. Otherwise, the power-scanning thing is a cool idea, the lasers and other things are always fine, so really I'd just work on the hacking thing and give it more specific abilities.
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Post by DJGrandPa on Mar 26, 2012 9:06:56 GMT -5
I like the character too, but he looks like a mess, it looks like something a 5 year old would do if he was let loose in MS Paint, make it better and you'll have a cool first character
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Post by Spawner on Mar 26, 2012 9:13:00 GMT -5
I dunno, I think it looks good, but like I said on Steam most people aren't gonna want to keep looking at your roster every 5 seconds to get all the details right. Still, if you're a lazy douche like me, you can draw him once and use that all the time.
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