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Post by rabiesisme on Aug 17, 2009 18:05:49 GMT -5
Fine what ever, lets go with your idea. I do like the idea of some remnants of an ancient civilization being on Brawl. Maybe you should explore that idea further?
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Post by madvideogamer on Aug 17, 2009 18:06:38 GMT -5
it'll add more of a veriety on how you fight in the arena as well. I wouldn't say variety with just a bunch of levels of crumbling floor.
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Post by Zarth on Aug 17, 2009 20:02:11 GMT -5
Fine what ever, lets go with your idea. I do like the idea of some remnants of an ancient civilization being on Brawl. Maybe you should explore that idea further? Alright, i'll see what I can come up with then.
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Post by Gront on Aug 18, 2009 2:12:55 GMT -5
PROTHEANS. IT WAS THE FRIGGIN PROTHEANS.
POSTED 2 TIMES FOR GRRREAT JUSTICE NOT ANYMORE -destructin
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Post by Kromax on Aug 18, 2009 2:31:45 GMT -5
PROTHEANS. IT WAS THE FRIGGIN PROTHEANS. AND THEY WERE KILLED BY THE REAPERS! CAN I HAS COOKIE NOW?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 30, 2009 19:55:29 GMT -5
Hey guys, the Arena needs an alternative to roman lions.
Any suggestions?
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Post by destructin on Aug 30, 2009 20:02:37 GMT -5
Hey guys, the Arena needs an alternative to roman lions. Any suggestions?
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Post by Kromax on Aug 30, 2009 21:28:06 GMT -5
Hey guys, the Arena needs an alternative to roman lions. Any suggestions? Dumbass Yes. This. Win.
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Post by madvideogamer on Aug 30, 2009 22:23:40 GMT -5
Alright stop editing the picture in quotes, have you ever thought it's fast since it's in the same post?
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Post by ghost on Aug 30, 2009 22:38:19 GMT -5
Destructin...you have officially won Brawl for the week. How many MORE of these monstrous lion concoctions can you give us? We could use some of them for Midori and CC's wedding...
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Post by Hat Salesman on Sept 8, 2009 15:56:41 GMT -5
We need a Brutal Legend-esque kind of place. Know what I mean? Amps and guitars and shit sticking out of the ground, in an epically huge size of course.
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Post by thedryman on Sept 8, 2009 17:31:47 GMT -5
We need a Brutal Legend-esque kind of place. Know what I mean? Amps and guitars and shit sticking out of the ground, in an epically huge size of course. Doesn't sound too bad. It's a way better idea than making a place that is devoid of any logic. You know, like and acid trip turned into a stage.
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Post by ghost on Sept 20, 2009 0:18:31 GMT -5
So let me get this straight....Glossary with some Ghost-modified definitions and speculation taken from the variously unorganized locations so far... The White Void A planet-dimension-rip in the space-time continuum that has sucked in a number of original and not-so-original cultures, powers, and peoples into its fold. The White Void is said to contain an infinitely-expanding region of empty, white-colored (duh) landscape, which was not-so recently populated by the super species, the Brawlers. A. The CavernA massive landscape that makes up the most densely-populated (at least on record) area of the White Void, home to Brawl City and most registered Brawlers. It consisted of originally only a flat white landscape with a black line dividing the clear white sky from the ground, but gradually numerous battles have torn the world asunder and spawned such areas such as Faultline and Volcanic Islands, resulting in a variety of different landscapes and utterly f**king up the ecosystem of just about every last bit of wildlife that existed here. Brawl City - A city designed to accommodate the "civilized" species of the White Void, including the Brawlers, Voidians, and other hosted creatures. Over time, with the hard work and partnership of Balto, Zarth, and a team of private investors (cough Moneybags), the city has evolved into a metropolis with skyscrapers that are demolished practically everyday and rebuilt just as fast. The city's original proprietor was Mr. Moneybags himself. The city's districts include: The Rough District, The Urban District, The Chill District, Downtown, and the City Centre. The Arena - A coliseum commissioned by Rabies Grimscott (You were the last person I remember having the throne *checks the thread* whoops) inside of Brawl City long ago to bring attention to the more brutal, primitive, exciting points of close combat. The arena was designed with the idea of powerless fighting in mind, using an artificial power-tampering generator to automatically nullify any special Brawler abilities within (the only known exceptions to this being Illidon and Elementell). The primary means of defense are weapons and firearms scattered around the area that constantly respawn to make up for the lack of substantial powers. The Arena is also the throne of the self-proclaimed Emperor, who can be dethroned at anytime if he is not wearing the Crown and holding the Scepter of Champions, or simply not acting "Emperor-ly". The Brawl City Wildlife Preserve - A park built by... well, it kind of just came with the city. There aren't any animals...or kids. Or attractions. Its really just been sitting there...collecting dust. WAIT - there is a pony! Wait...somebody was supposed to feed that thing...right...Anyway, this was for holding a lot of our exotic creatures. But they're all extinct now probably. I'm too lazy to check. The Really Tall Tower (Bottom) - The government never really revealed the blueprints, purpose, or construction plans of this place. Nobody's ever truly reached the top...not from the bottom. We know it goes PAST THE CLOUDS (which have simultaneously appeared around the tower for dramatic effect) and it ma even be visible OUTSIDE of the White Void's atmosphere! Some famous comments from Brawlers include: " I had my first kiss there!" ~ Pilot. " Its really beautiful at night. I can't wait to blow it up in the morning!" ~ Bazooka Bro. " Its never too cold or too hot - Its just right for soul-searching." ~ Frost Lizard. " We always try and make it to the 200th floor for our morning workout!" ~ Astro and Ortsa. The Docks - A quiet - well actually loud shipping dock where ships make port with their deliveries from overseas. The company in charge of the Docks recently went bankrupt because NOBODY ships important items or packages OVERSEAS anymore, considering most Brawlers are either superhuman athletes, fliers, capable of instant transmission, or simply telepathic. From the docks you can OBVIOUSLY enter Lake Brawl, which takes on a far different appearance compared to the rest of the City. Brawler Cemetary - A sad place to confront your grievances and pay your respects to those who gave their lives in the names of carnage and script less fighting. There's no punchline to this place, just come and say goodbye to unused or old, deleted characters. And of course those who were lost during the Great Deletion. " Remember, remember, the Fifth or Sixth of November, the Profile Deletion and Plot. I know of no reason why the Profile Deletion should ever be forgot." ~ Those In Remembrance Of Their Loved Ones. Brawl Queens - A down-trodden area of Brawl City that is as down on its luck as it is rich full of values, morals , and ethics. Its probably the most realistic location in all of the White Void. There's poverty, graffiti, and people get SHOT and SHANKED here. Not a nice place to bring junior Brawlers, but pretty sweet for GTA. The Big Delete - A very tall, very scary cliff indeed where the corpses of deceased Brawlers are thrown in to become either deleted or simply thrown onto the compost heap'. Once you make it here, you can't make it anywhere else but down. That's right. You NEVER stop falling. It makes for quite an interesting battle scene by the way, a grudge match that occurs WHILE FALLING, the winner getting to use his or her parachute to slowly climb back to safety while the loser gets ROMPED SSB-style! Ace City - A ruined city that was once the home of the Voidians before the White Void, in a most shocking development, literally GREW OVER THEM, condemning them to life in darkness and without sun. It is assumed that through this process the Negasphere was formed, and its' an ever-lurking fear that Brawl City one day soon share the same fate. Ace suffered the most damage, as the world literally PLOWED over it, it softened the blow the city beneath it sustained. Beta City - The former "sewer system highway" that was transformed into a survivor's city for the Voidians that weren't killed during the destruction of Ace City. A number of them began pitching tents and lighting lanterns, hoping for the day another race would save them. They are also terrorized by a race of evil, sentient robots beneath them who were built in the center of the Void. Cree City - A machine city operated by the Master Program, an ominous entity who powers and controls his own legion of robots against the Voidians who he seems to hold a bitter grudge against. Cree City has never been explored, though it is rumored that the machines are hoping to one day outlast the Voidians and invade so that they may tunnel to the surface. Dare City - A vastly unknown neighboring city to Brawl, consider it the White Void's "Gotham City" to the mainstream "Brawltropolis" for now. Faultline - A long time ago, McJesus opened hundreds of fissures during his grudge match with Team Destructin member - Markus. The fissures divided the Void into thousands upon thousands of sharp, rickety stone pillars that became what we know today as the Faultline of Brawl City, replacing the city centre. It has appeared exclusively in the grudge match and has not been seen since (though it is unlikely the government actually fixed it). _________ B. Aerial AssaultA location identified by the fact that it lingers far above the White Void's "surface" via multiple floating islands, archipelagos, and strangely a gigantic floating castle the owner of which is lost to Brawl's history. The Assault Zone is also known for its incredibly low gravity levels, as the Brawler's internal matrix is curiously weakened at high altitudes. Rumor has it that a gravity-manipulating Brawler was responsible for removing sections of the Void and loosing them into the sky. The Castle - a structure that was famously demolished in the McJesus vs Rabies grudge match, where one of the competitors tore away half of the Castle and brought it down on his foe, apparently ending the match, remains only in shards of its former glory. The other half of the Castle is not to be forgotten though, as it was later used as a ploy against its destroyer in a future battle. The Floating Islands - Chains and chains of individual and sometimes joined islands that float meaninglessly around the Castle and sometimes away from it, they serve no purpose other than for treasure-hunters, background material, colorless surroundings, and for pile-driving your opponents. The Really REALLY Tall Tower (Middle) - It continues to rise to the heavens even up past Aerial Assault, though its been reported by science teams that hallucinogenic relics appear to fabricate visions that the Tower is actually MOVING, or that the there is more than one tower. These rumors have yet to be confirmed. Nobody has gotten this high either, because nobody fights as high as Aerial Assault anymore. Cubix Zone - A zone of multi-colored floating cubes located whilst MVG was toying around with his portal gun and "leaping over the entire map". Think Quebert. Every space you land on changes to your player - I mean Brawler's - current color, and the zone is basically a humongous battleship-sized floating cube that has its own gravitational pull unlike the Floating Islands. However, the pull is equivalent to that of Earth, and once on you will need to be BLASTED OFF. It floats somewhere in the ruined islands of Assault zone. _________ C. The NegasphereA sightless, negative opposite twin to the Cavern. Not much information has been recovered or recorded about the Negasphere as few Brawlers have ever actually brawled here due to its complete pitch blackness rendering most fights there pointless. An update has occured! As it turns out, the Negasphere is actually the "Twilight Zone" or "Xen" of the White Void, hosting a number of different kinds of Brawler dimensions and possibly even ALTERNATE TIMELINES OR UNIVERSES - SOME UNFINISHED GRUDGES HMMM? Though it seems a lot of these alternative dimensions are based around the color spectrum and the elements! Neon Zone - The Negasphere is known to contain its own sub-areas, one such was deemed as the Neon Zone. The Neon Zone is the singular "illuminated" section of the Negasphere, where an ancient city of mysterious Voidians once existed before an unknown cataclysm caused them to disappear. In the Neon Zone, every Brawler's appearance is inverted from skin color to hair color, as well as any objects they may be carrying, though this mainly is seen to be a distinctive "glow" that forms around every Brawler that enters. Volcanic Islands - A curious area of different-sized lands that John fell into after a strenuous grudge match with an unidentified opponent, causing him to endure the superior heat of the constantly active volcanic area. Its much like the Floating Islands, except that rather than simply falling a humongous river of MOLTEN LAVA runs underneath you and the cliffs you stand upon, leading into a gigantic lava waterfall. No one's ever battled here except for in occasional allusion, but you can find it by making a deep hole in the ground and letting the White Void's strange gravity fluctuations suck you in. The only reason this is listed here is because...John never said where he was when he found it, but there was a BLACK HOLE in the ground like the kinds you see in cartoons so it can be hypothesized you probably use the Negasphere as a kind of "slingshot dimension" like in Half-Life to shoot yourself into the Island Zone. Fab Zone - As it turns out, the Negasphere even possesses a zone entirely obsessed and painted with color pink, and all of its inhabitants are well...FABULOUS. Home of Megay and supposedly FAB, this place is...hell, nobody ever brawls here. It is said that some of the FAB immigrants migrated from here to FAB island where they began a...well, you get it. Acid Zone - We all remember this wonderful place. Let's light up boys and girls - Cause its' the only way to ACCESS this zone! Oh, and the drugs HAVE to be illegal! *click* Once you get in, you don't get OUT for at least 24 hours. Darn it, I'm seeing double...oh wait...oh god mah' FINGAH'S BLEEDING!? _________ D. Lake Brawl - A large, crystal blue lake (freaky) that is surrounded by evergreen trees and offers an untold bounty of creative opportunity for up-an'coming Brawlers. Its never been used that much, but there are some sub-sections... Pirate Bay - a bay controlled by the followers of Atomsk, the Pirate King, long deceased but still praised by a number of Pirates who own fierce-looking ships and horde great treasures from the mainland. Recently, some hooplah about an "inter-clan war of pirates" has been going around due to some disagreement over an alleged "King of the Pirates" or some kind of nonsense. Let's just hope the bay is still in one piece, it would make a GREAT tourist hotspot if it were ever secured! ( As an important note, consider the Pirate Bay the "PVP Area" of the White Void, there are no limits as far as the sea and there sure as heck aren't any here!) Demon's Temple - This is where all of the Satanic Brawlers come to worship the Brawl Devil (character created by me a long time ago...ring a bell?) as well as various other demonic entities such as Abigor, Chortle, Anglorkien, and Grimpresence (Noticeably, Illidon is not considered a "demon" that can be worshiped in such a shrine). It is located in the far northeast corner of Lake Brawl, which has been purposefully ignored by the Brawler hierarchy despite their vast military power (Oh wait a minute...) _________ E. Orbit - The very inner and outer breathing space of the White Void Planet (huh?). Brawlers seem to travel to this place a lot these days despite many lacking the ability to survive such conditions, though maybe its a result of the Omnipresence's recent physics-altering science experiments going on up there, few of which have also resulted in the Void's orbit becoming configured to resemble a TRIANGLE so that the Pollution Moon and all nearby stars are moved in an irregular motion. Earth - One step for mankind. The Brawlers will never get here ever - because if they did...it would be the end of humanity. And no sane humanist publication would ever print such a gruesome tale without triumph over the alien threat: The Brawlers. And we can't have all of the Brawlers getting killed. May occasionally intersect in an AU if we ever finish those comic books we were doing. The Solar System Much of the galaxy still needs to be charted, and so there is the least amount of information about the planets here. Scary Living Planet - A terrifying, disgusting planet that appears to be very much sentient and very much alive. Its also rumored that is the birth planet of Illidon. A planet is that all life on it is bonded to it psychically, like one giant hive mind. Those that are unfortunate to land on the planet are slowly consumed by the psychic power. And theres a cult somewhere there too. To quote the Question - Its true purpose is sinister. 01001001011100100110111101101110011100 (etc, its the original Omni version) - A robot planet, decades ago it used to be a completely automated mining colony. But the machines that worked there eventually became self aware and had a revolt. Now they own the planet and renamed it to "0100100101110010011011110110111001110011011100000110100001100101011100100110010100100000". We're pretty peaceful with them now, but since many of the planets inhabitants harbor hatred for organics and the environment is extremely toxic. You won't find many organics there unless they have some important business to attend to. Planet 0100100010111010010011101 - A kind of "glitch" world that irrevocably is responsible for SOME KIND of crisis or event in the White Void. Notable records include Grimscott's hat removal (PMS - Bad Fur/Hair Day - Hat hair!?), McJesus's error fragmentation, Jacobdg (what a failed being), DryChris's power decrease, Zarth's subsequent deaths and returns in the Brawl Galaxy, Illidon's "Astro and Ortsa-killing" abilities, BaltOmega, time disruptions, and hell, probably even the Great Deletion. More information is to be recorded...though none of our researchers have been able to return in physical form...
Lava Planet - A planet whose surface is made up ENTIRELY of lava! Well...at least none of our research teams have been able to get close enough to prove it ISN'T lava without burning up. Supposedly, this planet contains a hollow center (WTF?) and there is actually a perfectly natural ecosystem of rock lobsters, lava men, mole man, Composite Supermans, and other fire-based creatures living inside of it on top of an ancient civilization of "Sun People".
Flat Earth - A one-dimensional plane planet, where momentum and overall gravitational stabilizers rule. The minute you step foot here, you'll begin sliding OFF OF THE PLANET, so you'll need to fight fast! Of course, nobody's ever fought here...
Dead Planet - A dead planet. Nothing new ever develops here... A planet made up of ghost from wrecked spaceships and destroyed planets, for some reason the dead like to gather here.
The Volatile "Do Not Shoot Lasers" Planet - This place is your generic "giant exploding rock" background object, comically labeled with the sign DO NOT SHOOT LASERS HERE. Like its going to stop anyone. It was first and is thus far exclusively seen when DryChris blasted FAB into outer space and sent him rocketing through this planet, triggering an instant meltdown and explosion.
The "Glitch" Planet - A kind of "glitch" world that irrevocably is responsible for SOME KIND of crisis or event in the White Void. Notable records include: McJesus's error fragmentation, Jacobdg (what a failed being), DryChris's power decrease, Zarth's subsequent deaths and returns in the Brawl Galaxy, Illidon's "Astro and Ortsa-killing" abilities, BaltOmega, time disruptions, and hell, probably even the Great Deletion. More information is to be recorded...though none of our researchers have been able to return in physical form...
Supernova - An odd, distant star eruption that has focused itself faraway from the White Void planet. This is actually an anomaly caused by the Living Planet in tandem with the "Glitch Planet", which upon realization that they would be destroyed by an oncoming wave of solar energy warned the Glitch Planet to wrap the supernova inside of a time-slowing bubble so as to regress the amount of time it would take for the explosion to afflict and destroy the ENTIRE universe by several centuries, centuries in which the Brawlers evolved in the White Void. The Supernova appears as a GIANT GOLDEN HAND similar to the sun, and no matter what ANYTHING KNOCKED INTO IT will be either MELTED or OBLITERATED. Use it as a helping hand for finishing moves, we won't have to worry about the supernova hitting us until about...let's say 5 million years after WE'RE ALL GONE.
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Post by drychris1337 on Sept 20, 2009 0:41:50 GMT -5
The Volatile "Do Not Shoot Lasers" Planet - This place is your generic "giant exploding rock" background object, comically labeled with the sign DO NOT SHOOT LASERS HERE. Like its going to stop anyone. It was first and is thus far exclusively seen when DryChris blasted FAB into outer space and sent him rocketing through this planet, triggering an instant meltdown and explosion. We should totally have this in the solar system.
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Post by Grimscott on Sept 20, 2009 0:56:28 GMT -5
1. The Arena - A coliseum built by Grimscott inside of Brawl Citt long ago to bring attention to the more brutal, primitive, exciting points of close combat. The arena was designed with the idea of powerless fighting in mind, using an artificial power-tampering generator to automatically nullify any special Brawler abilities within (the only known exceptions to this being Illidon and Elementell). The primary means of defense are weapons and firearms scattered around the area that constantly respawn to make up for the lack of substantial powers. Huh, why me? If anything, Rabies deserves credit. It could make sense too. Like say, back when Quickfeet managed to garner many followers, he had them make it in his honor. Or something. 2. The Brawl City Wildlife Preserve - A park built by... well, it kind of just came with the city. There aren't any animals...or kids. Or attractions. Its really just been sitting there...collecting dust. WAIT - there is a pony! Wait...somebody was supposed to feed that thing...right... Ah, I actually have an idea for this. As much logic as it defies, perhaps the BCWP has pretty much every species our Earth does, and some exclusive to Brawl. This is because the BCWP has various different biomes living in harmony, in close proximity. How? A wizard did it. YAY GANDALF Oh yeah it should be bigger or something too. Srsly it's smaller than Brawl City and I'm sure it's a sizable city, but that just don't seem right to me. I'll need to work on a map of that. How the biomes are positioned. >_> Demon's Temple - This is where all of the Satanic Brawlers come to worship the Brawl Devil (character created by me a long time ago...ring a bell?) as well as various other demonic entities such as Abigor, Chortle, Anglorkien, and Grimpresence (Noticeably, Illidon is not considered a "demon" that can be worshiped in such a shrine). It is located in the far northeast corner of Lake Brawl, which has been purposefully ignored by the Brawler hierarchy despite their vast military power (Oh wait a minute...) Wait how is Grimpresence on here but no DiabloKing? BAWWWWWWWWWWW Planet 0100100010111010010011101 - A kind of "glitch" world that irrevocably is responsible for SOME KIND of crisis or event in the White Void. Notable records include Grimscott's hat removal, McJesus's error fragmentation, Jacobdg (what a failed being), DryChris's power decrease, Zarth's subsequent deaths and returns in the Brawl Galaxy, Illidon's "Astro and Ortsa-killing" abilities, BaltOmega, time disruptions, and hell, probably even the Great Deletion. More information is to be recorded...though none of our researchers have been able to return in physical form... I don't like this. Yeah, sure it's lulz, but it feels like a slap to the face of any sort've origin I bothered making for my own characters, like Furious Haberdasher.
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Post by The Omnipresence on Sept 20, 2009 1:36:05 GMT -5
The Solar System Much of the galaxy still needs to be charted, and so there is the least amount of information about the planets here. Oh hey there going to tell you about the ideas I had for some of these planets I made. My idea for the planet is that all life on it is bonded to it psychically, like one giant hive mind. Those that are unforturnate to land on the planet are slowly consumed by the psychic power. And theres a cult somewhere there too. The planet is called "0100100101110010011011110110111001110011011100000110100001100101011100100110010100100000" for a reason. It's a robot planet, decades ago it used to be a completely automated mining colony. But the machines that worked there eventually became self aware and had a revolt. Now they own the planet and renamed it to "0100100101110010011011110110111001110011011100000110100001100101011100100110010100100000". We're pretty peaceful with them now, but since many of the planets inhabitants harbor hatred for organics and the environment is extremely toxic. You won't find many organics there unless they have some important business to attend to. Yes the entire surface of the planet is made up of lava, but the core is actually a fully inhabited ecosystem filled with life and ruins of an ancient civilization. It's rumored that the planet was ripped inside-out due to some experiment gone awry. I guess that's an alright explanation. I was just thinking "THE EARTH IS FLAT" like many people in the middle ages did at the time. This is a planet made up of ghost from wrecked spaceships and destroyed planets, for some reason the dead like to gather here. While some may have gone insane over time you may find some that are willing to have a chat. That sounds a lot like the Peragus mining facility from KOTOR II.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2009 17:16:04 GMT -5
Heh.
Don't the "Underworld"(sewers and underground warehouses of Brawl)
Also known for being riddled with DZ activity, rituals, ect.
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Post by Kromax on Sept 20, 2009 17:27:00 GMT -5
I vote for a religion and a church in Brawl City
Zuulism, they all believe zuul is god and every Sunday Zuulist watch Ghostbusters.
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Post by Hat Salesman on Sept 20, 2009 21:55:30 GMT -5
Kissass much?
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Post by McJesus on Sept 20, 2009 22:05:56 GMT -5
Ghost you magnificent bastard, you sly cat you. I applaud you for this. Did we mention MadMan, Howlette and likely others are caretakers/rangers of sorts for the BCWP? Zuulism, they all believe zuul is god and every Sunday Zuulist watch Ghostbusters. uu are a luuzer
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Post by Grimscott on Sept 21, 2009 7:17:23 GMT -5
Well, ladies and gents, this bastardized enough for your tastes? Feedback appreciated. Anyone has better ideas on positioning and w/e please feel free to do so.I vote for a religion and a church in Brawl City. Oh hai.Zuulism, they all believe zuul is god and every Sunday Zuulist watch Ghostbusters. Don't you mean Gozer? Look, I know Zuul seems to have bought the entire building in the NES game, but this is just silly! Plus why they would watch a film where their god is pwned by mortals? /inb4PassionoftheChristjoke
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Post by Zarth on Sept 21, 2009 11:24:30 GMT -5
Inter dimensional rift: A hole in space formed from the irregular orbit of the void interacting with Earth and the sun. To the naked eye it only looks like a shimmer of liquid in the middle of no where, but when looked at it with inferred, or X ray vision (through a machine) A strange hole in space could be seen linking to another dimension much like ours but slightly different. But for some reason it takes you to another time and location as well. Zarth accidentally found this rift one day, he sent in a few explorers to find out where it leads. When he saw an unharmed Earth and the void, he ordered a fleet of ships that he accompanied to set up an out post near by to explore the area. their have been repots cosmic sigitures that were the same as the risft located all over both dimentions but non of them have have actually been located yet for they are very hard to get a loxck on because of the ever shifting energy signals released by them. Grandkadea: Zarth’s home world a peaceful planet transformed into a armored fortress against enemy attacks. Armed with 4 giant mechanized defense rings, armed with hundreds of thousands of weapons, below that a high orbit grid of planetary defenses and BELOW THAT another low orbit defense grid. In the outer most part of the planet, further then the rings were hundreds of thousands imperial war ships armed with the some of the strongest weapons the Grandkade empire has to offer. Below all the defenses, the planet is completely covered in giant sky scrapers, flying cars, ships, and freighters make their way between them along orbiting traffic lanes. The planet is populated with over 72 billion civilians. Beast Earth: At one time it was just like Grandkadea. But a Deadly parasitic virus that had been accidentally mined in a mining expedition a few light years away destroyed that. The planet has now been mutated to the extent that it people forget that they are actually looking at earth, after going through their studies and reading up on how earth was once the home world of the human race. Now all that resides on earth are a large variety of disgusting, cruel creatures. Everything, down to the last blade of grass had been converted into some thing alien. Every last living thing and non living thing, this parasite did NOT discriminate against anything that was one the planet, it grew through machines, getting into their circuits, reconfiguring them in some way, and once it finished it was able to move the machine around like it was it’s own skeleton. The parasitic disease at first looks like nothing more but a strange weed like plant, able to spread and extend its grasp, web like roots covered each and ever continent, the veins spread along the sea floor, piloting the oceans, mutating and converting the fish with in them. Here’s a part from my book that explains what humans the mutated humans look like. (Book still need to be edited so sorry if their are any erros in this paragraph.) Three of the scientist that worked in that area of the building had changed, most of their had had been burned away, their cloths raggedy and black from the fire, but their skin, their bodies were weirdly shaped, their skin had taken on a purple colour, odd muscles budged, one of the scientists left arm had change dramatically to a weird giant mutated slimy swollen hand, muscles that a human body isn’t suppose to have were wrapped and had bonded along to it’s arm from the shoulder, close to 30 centimeters in diameter. Its hand did not have any fingers, but two giant thick claws that were blood red in colour, it’s other arm was still some what normal, the skin on his arm still looked normal but the veins in that arm were bulging out, his shoulder muscle was starting to swell, and the skin pigmentation in it’s was starting to change to the purplish colour, their faces were mutated, mutating at different speeds, one could be made out as a woman, veins were crawling up her neck underneath her skin, her mouth had started to transform. All most all of her human teeth had fallen out; her mouth was filled with blood and drool, 2 sets of sharp fang like teeth started to bud under her gums. One set just below where her human teeth were, and the other set budded out in the inner were coming through the inner part of her gums, facing her tong. Her eyes had changed to a piercing bright yellow colour. Her nose looked like it was being sucked in on it’s self. The other two were men, one of them had half of their face already mutated, and his head took on a strange shape, a slightly longer bone structure and a thinner jaw bone. One half Barnibon: The planet where Zarth found his armor. A planet that was tinted pink from all the deadly gasses in the atmosphere, the oceans were like acid, the native plants were poisonous, the ground was like a soft claw, littered with sand traps,. But under that the planet was rich in a rare type of ore that was able to deflect 80% energy weapons. Strange and mysterious structures were located all over the planet in random locations. The planet has 4 moons, each one connected to a giant temple holding a powerful artifact that the species that has now left it all behind and went into hiding just too up serve how life progresses with out them called them the prisons of the 4 manufactured war gods. (MWG) One of these artifacts were taken by Zarth, another had been taken by Darckal. There are many mysteries about this planet, there always seems to be a greater purpose to everything that had been left behind. The species had also left many over arifacts behind on many other random barron planets across the galaxy. And a few on void's side of the rift. these are all located on the other side of the rift. I had to make it becasue it just didn't make sence where Zarth came from and how he found the void if He's from the future. So yea, he's from another dimention. on the other side of a rift that leads to another location in the future. (The void doesn't exist in his dimention.) Pirate city: A rustling bustling, crime filled, drunken pirates dancing run down city. Tallest building is about 3 stories. Population, 5000 (always shifting due to sword and hobo fights.) Located on the other side of brawl lake.
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Post by Hat Salesman on Sept 21, 2009 14:34:01 GMT -5
Oh hey, look, shit you made up in ten minutes. that no one has ever heard of and will not impact anything ever.
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Post by Zarth on Sept 21, 2009 14:48:54 GMT -5
Oh hey, look, shit you made up in ten minutes. Wrong, a lot of this stuff i've made up long ago, some of it I'm still plannig and still adding new thigs to it, the olny new thing that i've made up recently is the rift. that no one has ever heard of Thats the point of this thread, to pitch new ideas and to see if the others like it. will not impact anything ever. Thats up to them, a lot of the stuff we make we never use sooo.....
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Post by The Omnipresence on Sept 21, 2009 15:47:24 GMT -5
I like reading some of the things Zarth writes, gives some depth to things.
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Post by Hat Salesman on Sept 21, 2009 16:27:39 GMT -5
To his characters, they're not things that any of us would actually use.
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Post by Zarth on Sept 21, 2009 16:34:31 GMT -5
To his characters, they're not things that any of us would actually use. how would you know? you could always go and fight on zarth's planet or through the rift. You can go and fight in any of those if you wanted to. Just because they are related to Zarth doesn't mean you can't use them. If i didn't want you guys to use this stuff i woudn't have posted it in this thread.
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Post by ghost on Sept 21, 2009 16:54:02 GMT -5
To his characters, they're not things that any of us would actually use. I know. I like reading his stuff too, I mean, I try to add depth too thank you very much Omni. But you're constantly going on this tangent of "Super Paint Brawl is just a minor step from my character's great epic series - that's why he's toned down - but he's badass in my story". I'm not questioning your powers of persuasion, but come on - All of your stuff is like this one big epic story about Zarth, everything else is expendable. I'm glad to hear you have an interest in writing a story, I'm glad you have a character and plot you're proud of, and I'm not disencourgaging you on continuining to build your ideas but please - try and make them relevant, or write the story elsewhere. Don't use SPB as your crutch, espicially considering that since you're a "Veteran" you drew your first Zarth picture in a thread full of "shitt-ily drawn stick figures". Just like with a lot of people who seem to feel that they're characters "don't belong in our universe anymore". I'm on a roll. I' think I'll pick on a few more people now. EDIT:
YOU WANNA KNOW' WHAT REALLY GRINDS MY GEARS?
I'm getting agitated with how the White Void isn't GOOD enough for Brawlers anymore. Everybody seems hellbent on making their characters "oh so badass" because they "came from another dimension" but then they toned their powers down because the mods and regulars here (myself included) would yell at them for surviving EVERY attack like it was nothing. If you want to be a Gary Stu - take it outside.
I'm going to flat out point this out: Grent, Zarth, and DryChris are some that come to mind.
Grent's is KIND of cool because its not a "Samurai Champloo-esque character personality" and I mainly see him use Bloodlust anyway (who I think is a much better character anyway). But Gunsmith shares this character, he came from another universe and got stuck here. Which isn't too bad, he's rarely seen, and he's not in possession of all these different powers.
Zarth - you revise your stuff more than McJesus does, Zarth always needs to be this fragment of some "godly power" like you have some kind of inferiority complex, you always feel the need to make him bigger and better, like how McJesus went from being the best stick figure drawer to almost always drawing McJesus full body, and look where that's left him - tired, unorganized, and unable to finish a lot of things. Do you want that?
Dry Chris - seriously...do you really think you're clever? You're character has a girlfriend/wife named Jessica Love with tomboyish powers, he wears a crown with BARBED WIRE and a C printed on it, he's always "talking street or smack", always being a dick, and he has no impressive things about him. "Owns his own universe, but decided to come to ours and toned his pwnage levels down?" C'mon, really, think like Mega and Liteice. They wanted to have ninjas and supermen and in the end they couldn't organize everything they wanted to do and lashed out with it, berrated for their nonsensical ideas. Do you want that?
You might fool some, all three of you, but I know this - you want to make characters that are all-powerful and superior simply through their titles or origins, but you can't because of how SPB is designed. You're trying to push a 578lb loaf of bread through a CHEESE GRATER.
Take me for example. Ghost has NO powers? Yet he's always doing something weird, I take that very seriously. How so? He's a character based off the Joker, who always cheats death and proves to be more dangerous than someone like Doomsday or Darkseid. In the end, I use my knowledge of movie references, anime, cartoons, ingenuity, and my own wit to fight. I'll even bow down if it serves the humor. I'm not "the son of the Joker of Earth-53 or anything". And FAB as well, while tough, his individual weakness is that he has a kryptonite, and that he doesn't last very long, and he can be hurt. He's not a "God Of the Pink World" just an insane symbiote close to Carnage.
Madvideogamer = Has a portal device. Not the best example since everybody knows Portal, but still, he wasn't "An insane video game player fro mthe 5th dimension in possession of technology that could warp reality, but accidentally broke it and it can now only fire portals".
Grimscott = before she the Hancock rule was in effect, she just used a scythe and was funny.
McJesus = He draws well, and his character makes shit EXPLODE. He got "wtfpwned" by his wife in life and came back as a combustion angel. Special origin? No.
Destructin = His character is an intense fighter, not too serious and not too harsh, a homegrown Brawler who happens to own an indestructible gauntlet and is awesome, almost never giving in.
MFR = HE'S A DEMON. His arms are painful and bulky, but its not the fact that he's a demon that makes him scary.
Bulet = He has Gunsmith's powers, but overall, he was rarely used and I remember Bulet using Pencil-Guy or whatever, a guy that used a pencil to fight. Nothing too special.
So really America, can't you JUST be Americans instead of jacking into the Matrix for once??
I guess what I'm trying to across is...FEAR THE SUPERMAN (TV Tropes and Idioms-joke).
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Post by Zarth on Sept 21, 2009 18:21:05 GMT -5
To his characters, they're not things that any of us would actually use. I know. I like reading his stuff too, I mean, I try to add depth too thank you very much Omni. But you're constantly going on this tangent of "Super Paint Brawl is just a minor step from my character's great epic series - that's why he's toned down - but he's badass in my story". I'm not questioning your powers of persuasion, but come on - All of your stuff is like this one big epic story about Zarth, everything else is expendable. I'm glad to hear you have an interest in writing a story, I'm glad you have a character and plot you're proud of, and I'm not disencourgaging you on continuining to build your ideas but please - try and make them relevant, or write the story elsewhere. Don't use SPB as your crutch, espicially considering that since you're a "Veteran" you drew your first Zarth picture in a thread full of "shitt-ily drawn stick figures". Just like with a lot of people who seem to feel that they're characters "don't belong in our universe anymore". I'm on a roll. I' think I'll pick on a few more people now. EDIT:
YOU WANNA KNOW' WHAT REALLY GRINDS MY GEARS?
I'm getting agitated with how the White Void isn't GOOD enough for Brawlers anymore. Everybody seems hellbent on making their characters "oh so badass" because they "came from another dimension" but then they toned their powers down because the mods and regulars here (myself included) would yell at them for surviving EVERY attack like it was nothing. If you want to be a Gary Stu - take it outside.
I'm going to flat out point this out: Grent, Zarth, and DryChris are some that come to mind.
Grent's is KIND of cool because its not a "Samurai Champloo-esque character personality" and I mainly see him use Bloodlust anyway (who I think is a much better character anyway). But Gunsmith shares this character, he came from another universe and got stuck here. Which isn't too bad, he's rarely seen, and he's not in possession of all these different powers.
Zarth - you revise your stuff more than McJesus does, Zarth always needs to be this fragment of some "godly power" like you have some kind of inferiority complex, you always feel the need to make him bigger and better, like how McJesus went from being the best stick figure drawer to almost always drawing McJesus full body, and look where that's left him - tired, unorganized, and unable to finish a lot of things. Do you want that?
Dry Chris - seriously...do you really think you're clever? You're character has a girlfriend/wife named Jessica Love with tomboyish powers, he wears a crown with BARBED WIRE and a C printed on it, he's always "talking street or smack", always being a dick, and he has no impressive things about him. "Owns his own universe, but decided to come to ours and toned his pwnage levels down?" C'mon, really, think like Mega and Liteice. They wanted to have ninjas and supermen and in the end they couldn't organize everything they wanted to do and lashed out with it, berrated for their nonsensical ideas. Do you want that?
You might fool some, all three of you, but I know this - you want to make characters that are all-powerful and superior simply through their titles or origins, but you can't because of how SPB is designed. You're trying to push a 578lb loaf of bread through a CHEESE GRATER.
Take me for example. Ghost has NO powers? Yet he's always doing something weird, I take that very seriously. How so? He's a character based off the Joker, who always cheats death and proves to be more dangerous than someone like Doomsday or Darkseid. In the end, I use my knowledge of movie references, anime, cartoons, ingenuity, and my own wit to fight. I'll even bow down if it serves the humor. I'm not "the son of the Joker of Earth-53 or anything". And FAB as well, while tough, his individual weakness is that he has a kryptonite, and that he doesn't last very long, and he can be hurt. He's not a "God Of the Pink World" just an insane symbiote close to Carnage.
Madvideogamer = Has a portal device. Not the best example since everybody knows Portal, but still, he wasn't "An insane video game player fro mthe 5th dimension in possession of technology that could warp reality, but accidentally broke it and it can now only fire portals".
Grimscott = before she the Hancock rule was in effect, she just used a scythe and was funny.
McJesus = He draws well, and his character makes shit EXPLODE. He got "wtfpwned" by his wife in life and came back as a combustion angel. Special origin? No.
Destructin = His character is an intense fighter, not too serious and not too harsh, a homegrown Brawler who happens to own an indestructible gauntlet and is awesome, almost never giving in.
MFR = HE'S A DEMON. His arms are painful and bulky, but its not the fact that he's a demon that makes him scary.
Bulet = He has Gunsmith's powers, but overall, he was rarely used and I remember Bulet using Pencil-Guy or whatever, a guy that used a pencil to fight. Nothing too special.
So really America, can't you JUST be Americans instead of jacking into the Matrix for once??
I guess what I'm trying to across is...FEAR THE SUPERMAN (TV Tropes and Idioms-joke). I just brought those areas up because I though that it might have been a good idea. it's not like im going to draw his fleet of ships and what not in every pic or something like that. and that paragraph was just to help explain what the humans of eartth in the other dimention looked like, thats all. and I dont have a inferiority complex, i just try to be as in deoth with zarth as I can becaus i'm never real happy with what i've in the past. so i'm always remaking his roster. his powers havent changed from when I first came here.
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Post by McJesus on Sept 21, 2009 19:19:19 GMT -5
DISCLAIMER: SINCE WE ARE NOW SOMEHOW TALKING ABOUT ZARTH AND WHATNOT, THIS IS OFFTOPIC. I SUGGEST SOME SORT OF 'NEW' TOPIC BUT IM NOT SURE IF ONE EXISTS. KTHX
*raises hand* I LIKE INTRAHYPERLIMINALDIMENSIONAL RIFTS. I like the fact that Zarth has used this to take over many times in the same place, set up interdimensional tollbooths and the like. I like how Zarth comes across as a guy who is trying to take over existance. Not just the universe, but alternate dimensions.
I also dig that it occurs to me now that Zarth would logically be trying to take over Brawl, but he encountered resistance. Someone mentioned Zarth being a major player in the game? Hell I think Zarth should be one of Brawl's main enemies. Guy is trying to enslave us.
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