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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 28, 2010 23:04:44 GMT -5
LIFE STILL SUCKS AND YOU STILL DIE
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 26, 2010 22:38:10 GMT -5
Another poem! The reason why. Its hard to say goodbye. You never really understood. Same as the death, war, and corruption. People killing one another in the "hood". Why the violence. Why lack of unity. Brain is numb, too intense. Theres no continuity.
The world destryoed. A teenager annoyed. The best I can do. Is lie and say I'll be with you. Whe the world goes to ruin. And the sky turns sanguin. Eveyone will look back. At the world we'd been in. The meteors falling. All we're doing is stalling. Through this I wish it was me that you were calling. In the end I'd try to get to you if I had to get there crawling.
While I still wish for your soft caress. People still call in destress. But you don't negate me. They will still hate me. Although I get sadder and sadder. I know all my problems don't really matter. I'm in perfectly good health. You deserve all my wealth. I probably don't deserve it, aimless teen like me. Problem is that we will never see. Too bad. So sad. But theres nothing I can do for you.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 25, 2010 21:15:26 GMT -5
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 25, 2010 19:44:31 GMT -5
Poetry in general is annoying how about that. I don't like you.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 25, 2010 19:20:13 GMT -5
All poetry is done, unless you do like
a I went b to play ball b in the hall c today d I had fun a Then I sent d bunches almost a ton a for a tent c hurray c lets parade d or we can run b but I'll fall a My head I have a dent.
And that just doesn't make sense.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 25, 2010 18:53:04 GMT -5
also double post but I wanted to post this poem I wrote. I thought it was good... Comments? A brain is useless if its always stuck on one channel. You can't think of something too much, your brain can't handle. You've got to focus, set your mind free. Of the shackles and jail cells that your coherence must flee. Struggle on the inside battle on the out. Still the rivers will flow and continue on their route. You know the world really isn't as it seems. To get inside you just have to pull on its corrupted seams.
Realise your insides must rise to the big lies right infront your eyes. Flying through the sky with the clouds zooming by. Goodbye. Try to see through the haze. You've still got plenty of good days. Don't think about something too much. But I hope with me you'll stay.
The sky is falling. A microburst. Maybe just a fog cloud. Or is it your world crashing down. Your world begins the sky still falls somewhere. There are pigs yet to be flying, but I'll call you when we get there.
Save the population It's bittersweet. People dying from the cold and people dying from the heat. Overpopulation, salvation, whats the difference? There are people dying for just a couple of cents. What about China, North Korea, East Germany. People in rich town don't easily see. The brainwash and corruption these countries all have in common. The people bow down sunday just listen to your sermon. People accept their lies they just accept them as truth. Everyone seems to accept whats convinient in youth. That doesn't mean that you should believe it too. If we believe different we can make a change, just me and you.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 25, 2010 15:47:17 GMT -5
Looks alright.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 25, 2010 15:43:53 GMT -5
Did you guys know I've had my username since neopets when I was 7 or 8?
I had Elementel, because I didn't know how to spell elemental. Then, that account got banned, and I used Elementell.
And that's where the name came from.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 24, 2010 22:14:08 GMT -5
Whatever you say, Drychris1337.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 24, 2010 11:02:54 GMT -5
Who wants to help me overcome my self-esteem issues? I have decided to join drama. Yeah, I joined robotics(lol but serious) for that. Try joining a club, pressure on you to succeed helps you get higher self esteem, even if you lose.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 22, 2010 22:08:30 GMT -5
oh good thing before grims hard drive crashed it hit reply.
That was very nice of it.
It's like how people reply after saying candlejacks name, I mean how the fu
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 21, 2010 20:55:39 GMT -5
I call the prostate.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 21, 2010 20:41:48 GMT -5
The Jazzmasters Puerto Banus Aw yeah
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 21, 2010 20:05:29 GMT -5
Oh thanks man, this is a good show eh?
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 21, 2010 19:19:18 GMT -5
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 21, 2010 18:57:03 GMT -5
Chill out everybody
It's just a forum don't get upset
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 21, 2010 18:56:06 GMT -5
But...
Why?
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 20:38:24 GMT -5
Man, that is so offensive! Whatever happened to the term "reality impaired"? Psh, that rule only applies in MSN world.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 20:24:23 GMT -5
Guys remember when des drew the most epic sticks ever seen? To be honest I think I liked them more than your fullbodies. THEY WERE JUST SO FUCKING COOL Sticks are history, gotta get with the times bud. Reason for Editing: Though everything would be much easier with sticks, but I gotta grow out of it.Nah I totally understand, but I mean your sticks just made me change my pants every time I saw a 500x2500 pixel image filled top to bottom with glorious unmistakable violence.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 20:19:34 GMT -5
You crazy guys you.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 19:34:25 GMT -5
Guys remember when des drew the most epic sticks ever seen?
To be honest I think I liked them more than your fullbodies.
THEY WERE JUST SO FUCKING COOL
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 19:32:59 GMT -5
Why not add a tie to his stick form? I mean I know you want more, but that's a starting point! Yeah, but drawing a tie seems kind of hard on a stick. I can try though.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 19:29:19 GMT -5
Why does everyone keep going on about NEXT GEN BRAWLERS? It's dumb. You're dumb >:c
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 19:16:47 GMT -5
Or we could just ignore it.
Let the next generation brawlers sort out this mess.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 19, 2010 19:15:07 GMT -5
Ehhhhhhh I just don't think it's him, you know? Wings and fedora just don't quite fit. I know right. I NEED SOMETHING THOUGHHHHHHHHH What would fit his personality and still make him able to be recognised no matter who draws him though? I'm keeping the devil beard soul patch thing.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 18, 2010 20:05:54 GMT -5
I'm drinking essentially diet orange juice. I'm not impressed Wha Since when does that exist?! It's pretty much orange juice and water. it's okay I guess.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 18, 2010 17:51:43 GMT -5
I'm drinking essentially diet orange juice. I'm not impressed
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 17, 2010 23:32:33 GMT -5
I want to revamp mentell, I want him to be not an average stick when I draw him, fullbody he'll have a tie and shit. Anyways, I wanted to change stuff so I made him have wings, a fedora thing, and eyes that change color compared to his mood. He'll still have his gun, which I'll change the look of later. Comments? Good night.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 17, 2010 20:53:16 GMT -5
Haha what a badass.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Oct 17, 2010 20:51:48 GMT -5
no wait ill make something first I call making the next obstacle After Rety I mean
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