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Post by taylor on Jun 1, 2008 16:52:31 GMT -5
THE MORNING AFTER It's 1 a clock in some ravaged motel that no one visited. It's alongside the road that connects basin city with brawl city. Outside there are two cars, one is just a small Volkswagen, and the other one a slick mustang from back in the 70's. The stars shined brightly that bight, as a man and a woman making love. As orgasmic screams of a woman and a man withdraw into the night, Alongside the bed there's a red shirt with a little yellow guy on it, and at the other side, there's a black hoodie. The next morning, 5 A.M. The sound of a young man hurling comes from the bathroom, the girl is awakened by the regurgitating sounds as she ask how he's doing. The young man returns to bed and they start to talk. "who are you, a goddess?" the young man asked, as the young woman replied with a giggle, "the name is mom" she says. "but you can call me....Goldie.". "Hmmm, Goldie" as he enjoys the smell of her perfume, he soon fades away. back to sleep. 7. A.M. All of a sudden, a loud alarm goes of, which they think takes forever, it's just a alarm clock. Why is there a alarm clock in a fricking motel, They both wake up, but they enjoy the last moments with each other. "I...I have something to tell you" the girl says, almost crying. "whats wrong? the man asked? "I'm scared. scared when I'll leave that door, I'll never see you again.". The man said, "We can't outrun our destiny, but we can change it". They huddle by each other and close their eyes...  Sorry, i'm not the best in stories, at least i took an attempt at trying something else |
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 1, 2008 16:58:01 GMT -5
"the name is mom" she says.  .... "but you can call me....Goldie.". "Hmmm, Goldie" Must. Resist. Urge. To. Facepam. World. In. Two.  |
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Post by Deadly Virus on Jun 1, 2008 16:58:11 GMT -5
A mom X john story? 0_o
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Post by taylor on Jun 1, 2008 16:59:35 GMT -5
"the name is mom" she says. .... "but you can call me....Goldie.". "Hmmm, Goldie" Must. Resist. Urge. To. Facepam. World. In. Two. dunno, i think mom could be hot, but goldie sounds like such a nice name... and facepam? no, momXmaverick story. |
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 1, 2008 17:06:07 GMT -5
dunno, i think mom could be hot, but goldie sounds like such a nice name... and facepam? Well, it's just I'm trying to set her up as the character who would never fall for ANYONE. Though the fact that this story exists means I should work on my character development. Whoops, meant to type "Faceplant."  |
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Post by Balto-Boy on Jun 1, 2008 17:54:14 GMT -5
Well that was... I won't lie, that was odd.
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Post by Hat Salesman on Jun 1, 2008 18:03:15 GMT -5
... I don't think I should have read that. That was disturbing served in epic proportions.
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 1, 2008 19:02:19 GMT -5
basin city "but you can call me....Goldie.". Heh, I saw that. Must. Resist. Urge. To. Facepam. World. In. Two. dunno, i think mom could be hot, but goldie sounds like such a nice name... and facepam? You want her to spank you don't you? |
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Post by taylor on Jun 2, 2008 0:18:16 GMT -5
basin city "but you can call me....Goldie.". Heh, I saw that. dunno, i think mom could be hot, but goldie sounds like such a nice name... and facepam? You want her to spank you don't you? i thought it haf a good response to sin city. Also, spanking not applied, we're just strangers. Well that was... I won't lie, that was odd. DP* sure! MOAR EROTICA GALORE! ... I don't think I should have read that. That was disturbing served in epic proportions. TP* (heh teepee) perhaps "keeping your virginity and never having sex" is applied in you book. This isn't 2Girls 1Cup. Modified cuz you triple posted. >_> ~GrimscottThanks anywayz ^w^~TaylorHey! If anyone's going to have the last word, it's me! ~McJesus |
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Post by McJesus on Jun 2, 2008 3:06:56 GMT -5
..odd.
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Post by bulet on Jun 2, 2008 6:39:41 GMT -5
Fuckin' wierd... But yet, good. |
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Post by Aperaptor on Jun 2, 2008 6:50:14 GMT -5
Am I the only one who laughed?
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Post by rabiesisme on Jun 2, 2008 10:17:08 GMT -5
lmao at the pic.
Anyhoo, I liked it. It was... different.
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Post by bulet on Jun 2, 2008 10:20:12 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby*
Or not...
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Post by McJesus on Jun 2, 2008 10:28:08 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby* Or not... I don't see why we can't. ;) |
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Post by bulet on Jun 2, 2008 10:50:24 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby* Or not... I don't see why we can't. ;) *Does stuff in calculator* If MJ was 2 years older he would be considered an official pedophile. Congrads, you must be very proud. :| Ruby is going to SO flip out when she sees that post, you mut be VERY proud! |
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Post by Deadly Virus on Jun 2, 2008 11:07:06 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby* Or not... Pff, you just wanna jack off to a pic of McJ and Ruby having sex >:C |
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Post by rabiesisme on Jun 2, 2008 11:16:18 GMT -5
What happened to Grim's thread is NOT going to happen to this one. She made a Trin X Rabies X Mcjesus story, ad it ended up in tons of pages of "hey don't do this with my character" posts, that were actually just hints that they wanted it. It was like, 6 pages of random crap and one page of story.
Either way, cut it out. If you want to continue talking about the subject, do it in the random thread, or make a chit-chat thread about it.
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Post by Hat Salesman on Jun 2, 2008 17:54:51 GMT -5
Hmm? I just read that little post under the story. Maverick?
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Post by rubyxoxo on Jun 2, 2008 18:23:56 GMT -5
*twitch twitch*
WTF?!?!
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Post by Aperaptor on Jun 2, 2008 19:26:44 GMT -5
You people act like this burns your eyes.
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 2, 2008 19:29:53 GMT -5
You people act like this burns your eyes. Maybe it does, there could be some odd medical condition where your eyes burn at the slightest hint of sexual intercourse. . . .Or not. |
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 2, 2008 19:27:52 GMT -5
Maybe it does, there could be some odd medical condition where your eyes burn at the slightest hint of sexual intercourse. . . .Or not. It's not the sex, it's the fact that it's all so out of character it burns my eyes... |
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Post by rubyxoxo on Jun 2, 2008 19:30:24 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby* Or not... HOW BOUT YOU PEOPLE JUST SHUT YOUR MOUTHS FOR ONCE HUH? I MEAN REALLY! *NAG NAG NAG NAG BOTHER BOTH BOTHER* GOD!  |
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Post by Hat Salesman on Jun 2, 2008 19:31:27 GMT -5
Park it, Ruby. We all go through puberty. Don't bash Bulet because of it.
He's obviously aroused.
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Post by bulet on Jun 3, 2008 10:16:11 GMT -5
Park it, Ruby. We all go through puberty. Don't bash Bulet because of it. He's obviously aroused. I HATE WHEN PEOPLE USE LOGIC TO OWN ME! D: |
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Post by Aperaptor on Jun 3, 2008 20:31:16 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby* Or not... Pff, you just wanna jack off to a pic of McJ and Ruby having sex >:C Well, you put that very bluntly. What happened to Grim's thread is NOT going to happen to this one. She made a Trin X Rabies X Mcjesus story, ad it ended up in tons of pages of "hey don't do this with my character" posts, that were actually just hints that they wanted it. It was like, 6 pages of random crap and one page of story. Either way, cut it out. If you want to continue talking about the subject, do it in the random thread, or make a chit-chat thread about it. I read that, and I am depressed that there was no BaltoxSheepshifter (lol@ balto getting freaked out). Before this becomes a derail, Is that it to the story? Or is more on the way? |
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Post by taylor on Jun 5, 2008 3:00:12 GMT -5
Me thinks we should make more stories like these... *Looks at McJesus and Ruby* Or not... I don't see why we can't. ;) THIS THRED NEDS MOAR SECKS!!!! |
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Post by bulet on Jun 5, 2008 5:21:39 GMT -5
I don't see why we can't. ;) THIS THRED NEDS MOAR SECKS!!!! AND WHEN EXACTLY ARE YOU GOING TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER?! LESS TALK, MORE WRITE! |
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Post by Hat Salesman on Jun 5, 2008 15:50:03 GMT -5
Bulet, stop hoping that you'll be in the story with Ruby. IT WON'T HAPPEN.
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