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Post by Deleted on Jun 4, 2008 20:40:13 GMT -5
It' funny how us brawlers are always the cretans of Brawl City. Also, really nice chapter Sheep.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 4, 2008 20:51:55 GMT -5
It' funny how us brawlers are always the cretans of Brawl City. Also, really nice chapter Sheep. It's because we tend to blow everything up.
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Post by Aperaptor on Jun 4, 2008 21:03:20 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Just glad I wasn't in it cause I have at least 2 characters I wanna get out before hand.
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Post by RobotKilla on Jun 4, 2008 21:11:33 GMT -5
I think it's refered to Omnipresence, not omniscience.
wtf is omniscience?
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 4, 2008 21:13:18 GMT -5
I think it's refered to Omnipresence, not omniscience. wtf is omniscience?Omniscience is knowing everything. Being Omnipresent is being everywhere. Being Omnipotent is being all powerful. /VOCABULARY
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jun 4, 2008 21:45:17 GMT -5
I think it's refered to Omnipresence, not omniscience. wtf is omniscience?Omniscience is knowing everything. Being Omnipresent is being everywhere. Being Omnipotent is being all powerful. /VOCABULARY And now you know... and knowing is half the battle.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 4, 2008 22:25:50 GMT -5
And now you know... and knowing is half the battle. The other half is... MERCHANDISE!
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 4, 2008 22:31:30 GMT -5
And now you know... and knowing is half the battle. The other half is... MERCHANDISE! Yo Joe!
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jun 4, 2008 22:40:23 GMT -5
The other half is... MERCHANDISE! Yo Joe! Don't say that! You'll go into a coma!
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 4, 2008 22:43:37 GMT -5
Don't say that! You'll go into a coma! Cobra-la-la-la-la-la-la-la! That better?
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jun 4, 2008 22:52:12 GMT -5
Don't say that! You'll go into a coma! Cobra-la-la-la-la-la-la-la! That better?If you like turning into a lizard yeah I guess so.
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 4, 2008 23:01:22 GMT -5
Ha, I just realized I haven't really said anything about this story. So, right. You're doing great and I love where this is going. Also, this story feels more realistic than the others somehow. Cobra-la-la-la-la-la-la-la! That better?If you like turning into a lizard yeah I guess so. *sigh* I just can't win with you, can I?
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jun 4, 2008 23:09:21 GMT -5
If you like turning into a lizard yeah I guess so. *sigh* I just can't win with you, can I? No you can't, I always win, even when I lose.
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Post by McJesus on Jun 5, 2008 0:11:19 GMT -5
It's because we tend to blow everything up. *whistles non-chalantly*
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 5, 2008 15:47:32 GMT -5
Damn Madman!
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Post by Deadly Virus on Jun 7, 2008 19:13:20 GMT -5
What teh fuck? Businessman? IS THIS SOME KIND OF JOKE? >:C
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Post by McJesus on Jun 7, 2008 20:28:43 GMT -5
You update less than I do..
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 7, 2008 21:05:31 GMT -5
You update less than I do.. Not by much though... Anyways, I take so long because I'm thinking things through. I'm not just typing as I go, I'm thinking of the best way to express ideas.
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Post by McJesus on Jun 7, 2008 21:55:17 GMT -5
You update less than I do.. Not by much though... Anyways, I take so long because I'm thinking things through. I'm not just typing as I go, I'm thinking of the best way to express ideas. I tend to do a mix of both.. I sit back for a few days and wonder how I should go about writing the next chapter.. Take your time Sheep, I'm enjoying this.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 7, 2008 21:56:28 GMT -5
Take your time Sheep, I'm enjoying this. Oh, maybe I should rethink what happens to your character then...
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Post by McJesus on Jun 8, 2008 9:24:33 GMT -5
Oh, maybe I should rethink what happens to your character then... Uh, sure. Go ahead.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 9, 2008 19:08:15 GMT -5
Mini chapter, because I feel bad for not giving you guys a full chapter last weekend. I spent the weekend at a friend's house, and chain-playing GTA IV and watching Youtube Poops together was less taxing then conjuring the mental bubble I need for writing. Chapter 3 FillerRageblood woke up with a throbbing head. He needed more sleep than his 8-hour workday would accommodate, but one can’t take a day off saving the world. Rageblood stumbled to the bathroom, washed his face, brushed his teeth, and went through the normal morning routine. At one point, he had the thought “Where is the theme music and opening credits?” FillerA quick scan of the living room informed Rageblood that CaptainChip and Virus had spent the night. Rageblood walked over to where Chip lay on the couch. “Chip, get up. Time for work.” Chip grumbled and rolled over. Rageblood sighed and went to his computer. A screensaver of a sleeping Virus was on the monitor. Rageblood woke both the Computer and the Virus with a single move of the mouse. “Wake up, you guys, I’m making coffee.” He told them before proceeding to the kitchen. FillerHe was halfway through the first pot of coffee when CaptainChip came in. “Hey, Rage.” He said. He got milk from the fridge and poured himself some cereal. Rageblood sat next to him and offered him some coffee. “So, which firm today?” CaptainChip asked Rageblood. “They want us at the central one today, to congratulate us about the Grallse job.” Rageblood replied. “Think they’ll give us a vacation this time?” “No.” “Oh yeah…” FillerThe Virus came in then, dressed in his fake business suit. “Well, I’ve got to go. East firm wants me for another job. See you guys later?” He said. “Yeah, later.” Rageblood told him. FillerFive minutes into the second pot of coffee, the phone rang. Thus began the battle. The constants, Chip and Rageblood, proceeded to give each other their best “I’m not getting that” stare. They both knew who was calling, and neither of them wanted to suffer the pain of talking to him. “Look, Rage.” Chip said, “Either only one of us suffers, or he leaves a message and we both suffer. Which will it be?” “That’s up to you.” Rageblood said through his teeth and the ringing of the phone, which seemed to be even louder. “I’m not moving, so you have to.” FillerThe phone’s mechanical voice ended the showdown. Transferring to messages. A monotonous voice came over the speakers, a voice devoid of all emotion , any accent, any hint of what the person on the other end was like. “Mr. Rageblood, you are there. I know it.” It said. “Nice job, now we both have to suffer.” Rageblood muttered in Chip’s direction. FillerFor a minute the room was silent, Rageblood and CaptainChip looked at each other in question, what was wrong? The voice on the phone spoke again. “Mr. Rageblood, am I to assume from that previous comment that you find conversing with me a chore?” FillerRageblood turned white. He knew it wasn’t beyond ‘his’ power to hack a phone via the data waves and put on speaker, Rageblood needed to be more careful around in anything ‘he’ was involved in. “Sir, we were just working with the stove, CaptainChip burnt his hand on the stove and spilled the pot of scalding water he was holding on me. My comment was directed at him for that reason.” It wasn’t the best lie Rageblood had ever told, but he thought it would satisfy the voice on the other end. FillerAfter another pause, the monotonic voice continued again. “It matters not, a burnt hand will heal in a few days. Right now you both are needed in the central firm. I expect you in two hours.” A click told them the phone had turned off. Warmth seemed to return to the room. CaptainChip laughed “Man, I swear I could see ice coming from the receiver!” Rageblood shrugged and drank more coffee. “Why do I feel like I’ve just lost an argument?” Filler“Because you just did, you got OWNED.” Chip teased as he ducked into the bathroom to change into his work clothes, leaving nothing but the mirror to receive the blunt of Rageblood’s angry face.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2008 19:40:12 GMT -5
Lol, you'd never expext to hear that from Chip. lololol
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Post by Balto-Boy on Jun 9, 2008 20:47:26 GMT -5
Still got my attention with this. Excellent story, my good sir.
Also, wouldn't this be "Chapter 3"?
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jun 9, 2008 20:49:00 GMT -5
Also, wouldn't this be "Chapter 3"? Crap, thanks. It's probably like that because I started Chapter 3 on a different computer, then deleted it because I thought it sucked. So I thought I did three chapters already. Anyway, School ends tomorrow so I'll have a super-huge chapter 4 up by the weekend or sooner!
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Post by Undeadlaw on Jun 9, 2008 20:53:07 GMT -5
loving how this is coming n so far can not wait for the next chapter.
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Post by McJesus on Jun 10, 2008 5:11:23 GMT -5
Still loving it. Write more!
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Post by benavides20 on Jun 10, 2008 5:21:33 GMT -5
So, who exactly are the underrated brawlers then? Well, you, for one. I've got Produce in there, Mr. Me's characters appear here and there, Purplecat's there, so on and so forth. This is a pretty small community, so there aren't a lot of people who aren't well known, so I'm going with characters who have a lot more poteinal than people think they do. me? i am bearlyed remembered
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Post by bulet on Jun 10, 2008 5:32:16 GMT -5
Rageblood CaptainChip Virus Do I see a patern emerging here?
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Post by SwordKill on Jun 10, 2008 15:35:39 GMT -5
Great story, let's have more, eh?
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