Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2008 20:19:06 GMT -5
This story is not a one character story by the way. I will be sure to have many characters in it. If anyone wants to be a story line drawer, pm me.
I figured since everyone else is doing stories, you know.
To some, an alley is the only place where you can get a smoke without being disturbed. Captain Chip was part of that minority. Not even soldiers are pure souled. Chip pulled out a Brawlboro cigar, and smoked sweet death. The small glare could be seen from the end of the alley. He continued until he heard a peculiar, eerie noise.
He ignored this sound, and turned his head slowly. But, every few minutes, it became louder. It became so loud, Chip stood up and barely whisper "Hello?" He received no answer, so he repeated it in a more forceful tone. He was frightened now, so he creeped towards the end of the ominous alley. As he neared the end of dark hallway, something grabbed his foot, and knocked him down.
The creature had a firm grip on Captain Chip. It made a noise so terrible, it would make the deaf cry. Chip's heart was beating at a breakneck pace. There was only one thing on his mind, and that was to get away...alive.
Chip released himself from the creatures claws, and he crawled back very quickly, like a crab shimming away from a pelican's fatal bite. He then remembered that he had his desert eagle with him. So, he thrusted it out from his deep pocket, and he pulled the trigger very rapidly.
The bullet hissed as it flew through the air and hit the spawn of Satan. Unfortunately for Chip, the powerful projectile didn't even shake the creature.
The monster then stretched it's huge mouth, forming a wide smile that revealed all of it's yellow, razor sharp teeth.
"Fool..." it muttered in a scratchy bass voice.
This was all Chip could handle, so he dropped his weapon, and he ran away in hope that he could save his hide. But, the demon stabbed into his shoulder, and pulled him back.
"Now we can't have you running away, not before dinner is served."
The beast opened his mouth to substantial size, revealing more treachrous teeth, and it bit into Chip's right arm.
"GAH!" Captain yelled in extreme pain. The predator continued to chew parts of Chip's body, all resulting in the same scream from him. This continued until Chip made his final, most excruciating yell.
The creature got up from all fours, and walked back intop the darkness, leaving Chip's mutilated body behind for the alley rats to consume.
"Bon Appetite."
I figured since everyone else is doing stories, you know.
Introduction
To some, an alley is the only place where you can get a smoke without being disturbed. Captain Chip was part of that minority. Not even soldiers are pure souled. Chip pulled out a Brawlboro cigar, and smoked sweet death. The small glare could be seen from the end of the alley. He continued until he heard a peculiar, eerie noise.
He ignored this sound, and turned his head slowly. But, every few minutes, it became louder. It became so loud, Chip stood up and barely whisper "Hello?" He received no answer, so he repeated it in a more forceful tone. He was frightened now, so he creeped towards the end of the ominous alley. As he neared the end of dark hallway, something grabbed his foot, and knocked him down.
The creature had a firm grip on Captain Chip. It made a noise so terrible, it would make the deaf cry. Chip's heart was beating at a breakneck pace. There was only one thing on his mind, and that was to get away...alive.
Chip released himself from the creatures claws, and he crawled back very quickly, like a crab shimming away from a pelican's fatal bite. He then remembered that he had his desert eagle with him. So, he thrusted it out from his deep pocket, and he pulled the trigger very rapidly.
The bullet hissed as it flew through the air and hit the spawn of Satan. Unfortunately for Chip, the powerful projectile didn't even shake the creature.
The monster then stretched it's huge mouth, forming a wide smile that revealed all of it's yellow, razor sharp teeth.
"Fool..." it muttered in a scratchy bass voice.
This was all Chip could handle, so he dropped his weapon, and he ran away in hope that he could save his hide. But, the demon stabbed into his shoulder, and pulled him back.
"Now we can't have you running away, not before dinner is served."
The beast opened his mouth to substantial size, revealing more treachrous teeth, and it bit into Chip's right arm.
"GAH!" Captain yelled in extreme pain. The predator continued to chew parts of Chip's body, all resulting in the same scream from him. This continued until Chip made his final, most excruciating yell.
The creature got up from all fours, and walked back intop the darkness, leaving Chip's mutilated body behind for the alley rats to consume.
"Bon Appetite."
TO BE CONTINUED.......
