Erastok's Battle

[Hat Salesman]

Prologue

IndentErastok sipped his herbal tea. There was no sense in telling Lucy to push. She knew what to do, having already had 2 children. Alteon, Spectre... Cunning little bastards, he thought as the liquid warmed his lips. The cookie jar had gone missing several times since Alteon's birth, and after Spectre's, so many more times... He heard crying. So the baby had come. He stood up and held Lucy's hand. "You did it again, babe." Lucy only smiled and looked happily into the eyes of the newborn that had been delivered into her arms. He looked so much like his father, with his black hair and pale skin... Erastok was holding back tears when the wall blew apart.

Should I continue this?

Edit: Before it starts, remember, this is a short PROLOGUE.

[cobyrox]

erastrok cryed and then he said to his wife save me then he fell down he had a peice of glass jabed in his arm and he died then joana came up and healed him and he was thanking her when he got hit by a huge rocka nd got his arm messed up so when he went to fight the dragon he lost and died

the end

[kaseous]

Jun 9, 2008 16:13:52 GMT -5 @cobyrox said:

erastrok cryed and then he said to his wife save me then he fell down he had a peice of glass jabed in his arm and he died then joana came up and healed him and he was thanking her when he got hit by a huge rocka nd got his arm messed up so when he went to fight the dragon he lost and died

the end

In other forums you're not supposed to continue storys for the other person in fanfics.

That may just be the other forums, seeing as how I've only been here for a day, I thought I would share my experience.
You appear to be new also.

[Hat Salesman]

Actually, Coby is a complete moron and should be shot on sight. Would you do the honors? *Hands shotgun*