The Mellee Llama: every hero has a story

[danyllama]

CHAPTER ONE
THE BEGGINIG OF A HERO
On a sunny day, in the outscurts of brawl city there was a young boy named Danny.Danny lived on a farm with his parents, his farm was not just any farm it was a llama farm. one day while danny was out patting and feeding the llamas he saw a small figiur in the distance. As the figure aproached he relised that the figure was an alpaca *plays dramatic theme*. from the fence the alpaca threw a spear from his mouth stabbing the llama, making it explode therefor unleashing all its awsomeness.
TO BE CONTINUED...

[The Omnipresence]

Is it supposed to be 'mellee' or did you misspell that?

[Hat Salesman]

Jul 22, 2008 10:21:39 GMT -5 The Omnipresence said:

Is it supposed to be 'mellee' or did you misspell that?

It's Melee.

[danyllama]

well i think miss spelt it, coz I usualy spell it mellee but im not sure if thats actually how "melle" is suposed to spelt, but oh well i ment to spell it double l.

[danyllama]

sorry for the double post but i wanna get on with the story
CHAPTER TWO
NO MORE NORMAL
Danny awoke in his bed that evening his parents looking over him.
"you've been out for quite a while now" his father.
"are you ok ?" his mother then asked.
"i feel fine" Danny said as he leaped out of bed.
Later on Danny decided to go for a bike ride. While on his ride through the outback, his bike stummbled on a rock, he quickly swurved the handle bars to aviod falling off but he still did. As he got up he noticed his bike handle bars were bent and as he looked at his hands to see if they were bleeding he saw they had turned black and hard.
He ran home to tell his parents what had happened but as he arrived a pack of alpacas arose from behind. he dodged quickly as an alpaca charged at him, as he dodged he grabbed the alpaca at the back of the neck and through it at the other alpacas.
one of them got up and rammed Danny through the wall of his house. He scraemed in pain and as he did a orange and yellow laser flew from his mouth send the alpaca flying.

TO BE CONTINUED...