Post by ghost on Jul 31, 2008 21:20:01 GMT -5
Unless it's something not highly valued, I'll most likely be putting all of my Brawl-related stories on FictionPress.
This story might replace Microsoft Paint Brawl. Mainly because it just seems disorganized and like I was trying to do too much too fast. THIS story will keep the idea that Microsoft Paint Brawl had, all the same characters will be there. They both start from "Beginning Brawl" to "Present Brawl". (No, you don't get any presents. You're not that good yet.)
Brawl is somewhat more in depth with character history, exampled through references and rather thin sentencing. There maybe a few more spelling grievances, but that's mainly because the chapters are straighter, less compact, and travel instead of being outside proper format.
Which do you like better?:
Brawl!
or
Microsoft Paint Brawl.
I personally like Brawl better, but it's your choice.
[E] The summary that won't fit on FP; (Yes, Rabies is still the first character mentioned, and to short things for you, the drunken man is the "bastardized, street sensei" while the dead one is his previous master who was killed under mysterious circumstances.)
From there, Rabies will first be dubbed the Chosen One and receive his Metal Arm before being brought to understand his place in the universe, and things about the universe he never knew before. This eventually leads to the conflict with Newground(s), which brings us to the White Void, where things go totally batshit. You know, a normal day. And of course, we've got an even cast of protagonists and antagonists to go along.
This story might replace Microsoft Paint Brawl. Mainly because it just seems disorganized and like I was trying to do too much too fast. THIS story will keep the idea that Microsoft Paint Brawl had, all the same characters will be there. They both start from "Beginning Brawl" to "Present Brawl". (No, you don't get any presents. You're not that good yet.)
Brawl is somewhat more in depth with character history, exampled through references and rather thin sentencing. There maybe a few more spelling grievances, but that's mainly because the chapters are straighter, less compact, and travel instead of being outside proper format.
Which do you like better?:
Brawl!
or
Microsoft Paint Brawl.
I personally like Brawl better, but it's your choice.
[E] The summary that won't fit on FP; (Yes, Rabies is still the first character mentioned, and to short things for you, the drunken man is the "bastardized, street sensei" while the dead one is his previous master who was killed under mysterious circumstances.)
From there, Rabies will first be dubbed the Chosen One and receive his Metal Arm before being brought to understand his place in the universe, and things about the universe he never knew before. This eventually leads to the conflict with Newground(s), which brings us to the White Void, where things go totally batshit. You know, a normal day. And of course, we've got an even cast of protagonists and antagonists to go along.
