Wrath Of The Gods! (Fan Fic Story)

[ProDuce]

I Thought up A great idea Of a story and decided to carry it out, so sit back, read, enjoy and leave some comments for me to read.




The Wrath Of The Gods


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Chapter 1
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There was gun shots to be heard along with screams of terror, there was explosions all around and suddenly a building fell to the ground and hit the white floor of the void, dust flew up every where along with the blood of a woman trying to protected her children from harm.

A figure suddenly shot across the area and pick the woman up by her belt and whispered in her ears “ Don’t be scared old friend, you can meet your husband in the after life now!” he dropped her and roared with laughter as his hands glowed bright red and a massive explosion shot the woman into nothing more than vapor dust, her scythe had flown away next to her big green hat that laid still on the sideway where her beloved children watched in horror at the red menace!

Suddenly a strange explosion went from underneath the manic man and he when flying into the air laughing and shouting with his might “You will all perish under my might, the wrath of a god is upon you, the strength of the holy has left you. Now you shall die under the hands of…” everybody looked up in awe and fright as he finished his sentence, “Mcjesus…” there was suddenly a roar and a rumble form under the ground as it started cracking and building collapsed, every person in the land of brawl was running, looking for places to hide and be safe.

Mcjesus stood awhile and sniggered to him self as a blue portal opened up next to him. He clambered his way in and disappeared without a trace.

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Miles away, by a famous landmark known as ‘The Caverns’ there was a slight shuffle in the ground as a young boy, about the age of 16, was exploring the huge damage done to the cavern in the past. “That was weird” said the young brown hair youth “I swear I felt the ground move” he suddenly looked at the floor now with his water blue eyes then shook him self a bit, “Stop day dreaming Blue! You haven’t got all day” Blue stood up quite franticly.

His brown waving hair caught the sun and his bright blue hoody glinted like the ocean and his jeans shone under the muck he just lent in by the cavern. Blue Himself was a rare breed of sheep shifter, known far and wide for his sheep-ing ability as well as his super strength.

Now that the sun shone else where Blue leaped into The Caverns hoping to uncover the mystery of what had made this giant gap in the void, for as far as him and other commoners go it just popped out of no where one day after a major brawl had token place. Most say it was the match between mighty warriors that destroy the whole void and was saved by a hero and his halo healing up the void till only a scratch was left, Blue himself knew that this wasn’t possible for no brawler could possible hold such power or it would have been deleted by another force known as the Mod Gods which worked in mysterious ways that no one dared question it, more in fear than in faith.

Blue was still falling, hoping to hit the ground soon so that he could continue his adventure that just began but as soon as he saw the shining spiked up floor he regretted ever wishing for the floor, being quite a quick thinker, he pointed out his hand as a blue light gathered in front of it and slammed out a massive sheep that was used like a massive fluffy pillow to protected him from the spikes. As he slammed into them they where crushed under the weight of the giant sheep and the peer pressure of being broken.

“well that was fun” grinned Blue as he now turned to see a light within the distance of The Cavern, a bright orange glow came from it and formed a shadow of some one quite tall now. Blue, now sensing danger, leaped behind a bolder of some kind and awaited what came out of the orange glow.

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Mcjesus Stepped out the other side of his portal and noticed he was alone in the Cavern, he stood still and wondered why his partner had sent him here, he was silent for a moment until he heard some thing trip and cause a load more noise than it had wanted, now with a flick of his hand blew the wall in front of him to see thought the smoke, a young lad with spiky black hair and a strange gun device thing strapped to his hand, “Aw! About time you got here MvG” said Mcjesus with anger,
“What do you mean ‘about time’ I was here before you, ya donut!” cried MvG “and the Almightily leader says you’ve been getting cocky lately, not finishing ya work on time and being sloppy”
“Well you’re the one to talk, all you do is sit around hugging your cube all the time! And if the master thinks I’m sloppy, then why is it that you, of all people, are the one calling me here!!”
“I’m calling you here to warn you that the master isn’t pleased with ya work and that he might think of… lets say, replacing you… but that’s not the only reason, I’ve also got ya next assignment, do this properly or be gone! Ya here me!” Mcjesus was getting annoyed now and was about to slam an explosion at MvG until he heard a rock slide out of place. “We have an ease dropper MvG” said Mcjesus with caution looking at a bolder that had seemed to disturb him now. “where…?” whispered MvG as they both planned an attack.

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Meanwhile Blue sat listening and tried to get away unnoticed until he scraped a rock and felt like face palming him self for trying to move at all, he could hear them coming now… closer and closer… the only thing left heard was of the bolder exploding into tiny fragments, and a yell of agony.

[The Omnipresence]

Produce you broke the site. So that probably means that this is a good story.

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Fixed for you, sweetie ~MVG

I DIDNT WANT IT FIXED YOU DOUCHE!!!

[destructin]

Awesome, I hope one of my characters pop up.

Can't wait for whats next

[Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags]

So, this is the story you were talking to me about? It's a good start, keep going!

[Jallo at Work]

Good work produce! You used a great variety of adjectives, it looks like you really thought it out.

[Undeadlaw]

good work so far produce can't wait for more my good cap.

[ProDuce]

Yay Comments Anyway heres Chapter 2 Of My Story.



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Chapter 2
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As the bolder turned into a thousand tiny particles, Blue shot out of site before one of the fragments hit him quite severely. He leaped up and slammed another sheep form his hands, as they glowed a bright sunny blue, then another explosion went off as the sheep pounded in to MvG. He flew away, crying in agony as he murmurs to himself before he flew into one of his portals “Why is it always me…”.

Sheep now stood facing his next opponent which looked strangely familiar, a tall, lanky, red skinned fellow, who had a brightly, sun-shining halo underneath his large brown afro. “Well aren’t we the jumpy type” sneered Mcjesus as his hands glowed a bright volcanic red. Sheep now recognized this strong foe who was now shooting beams of explosions at him, sheep shot upwards and threw a fist into the ceiling with immense power so that it started to shatter and fall upon the mighty Mcjesus. The power of Mcjesus roared with anger as his lazar eyebeams blew all the rocks off him and flying into a weak part of the Cavern making the Cavern to start shaking form all the damage and fall apart. Blue looked up at the falling rocks, “Oh shit… here we go again.”

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Back in the shaken and stirred up brawl city, one of there inhabitants was helping up his blonde haired friend who wore some strange blue glowing Bracelets which he called Shield generators, or SGs For Short, “thanks for that Tom” said the blonde one as he took the tall brown haired figures hands and looked around the ruins of brawl city, “hay ProDuce, mind explaining why Mcjesus destroyed Brawl city? Its his home as well as ours… it makes no sense” Questioned Tom Mitch, as he searched the scene for other Survivors that might be alive amongst the rubble of Brawl City. “Nothing does any more SankeSkull, nothing ever does…” Answered ProDuce who had found an young Teenager who had died under the pressure of the building, the dead teenager was wearing a gray hoody and had blue jeans on, his 3 pointing up bits of hair had been soaked in blood.

“Damn!” shouted ProDuce as he saw another of his companions dead under the rubble, “What is it ProDuce?” said Tom as he turned to see the gory and bloody figure of what use to be a fellow brawler. “Agh! He got John… that’s never a good sign”
“Your telling me, we have to stop Mcjesus before he ruins and kills the whole of Brawl-Kind.” ProDuce’s SGs now glowed bright blue as suddenly a strange blue energy beam rippled out of the air and laid it selfs on the gorund next to John. Tom now lifted john onto one of the shields to send him to the pile of dead bodies. “Come on, lets go Tom, I can’t take no more of this… lets check that no one was hurt out side of brawl city.” But this wasn’t what he planned, he just wanted to huddle up in a corner and cry for those he lost…

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Blue Looked up at what could have been his demise if he didn’t move it, but he was still shell shocked at the fact that Mcjesus could ether blow him up, or watch him get crushed, either way Blue hated the odds. But Suddenly out of no where came another beam from above him, a golden, phoenix sort of flaming beam, that was shot from the same colored gauntlet that was glinting in the sun like a giant, golden, forest fire. The massive beam shot all the rocks aside and took the startled Mcjesus by surprise as he was covered in another load of rocks.

The golden gauntlet was connected to a young boy, who has some blood running down the left side of his face that went slivering over his big grin. The boy had shining black hair like a majestic raven and was wearing a nicely loosen green shirt and some black baggy trousers. “Hay you down there, yes you, Blue Bird, keep out my way or you will end up like your pen pal buddy over there! YA GOT IT!” shouted the menacing new guy.

Blue felt kind of threatened then snapped out of it shouting back at the angry guy “I don’t take order from no one, especially from a black haired punk that still play with fire, I mean come on, be original or some thing!”
“Did ya say something Blue Bitch!” he answered. Blue was getting angry as well now but suddenly an explosion came to the formally standing again Mcjesus, so he held he fight with this mystery guy for a few moments longer so that he could live to fight that battle.

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ProDuce was kicking around a rock for a while until Tom reached him at the Brawl City gates, “Ready to go?” asked Tom
“Ready as I can be” answered ProDuce who was becoming bored of this run around chicken race with Mcjesus, “cheer up buddy, we will find him soon enough and put him where he formally came from” Tom said trying to get ProDuce motivated “yeah… lets hope…” Suddenly Tom and ProDuce heard another explosion form far off, “That’s him!” said Produce, running off with out Tom, “Lets RUMBLE!” shouted Tom as his skin turned into a mankey swamp like green and his teeth turned into sharp yellow fangs, his eye turned blood shot whilst his pupils grew into a deep black pool of despair!

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The new guy was jumping wall to wall like a super hero form a comic, teasing his foes and shouting cocky things to anger his opponent, “cant catch me bitch!” he said before leaping away from another on of the explosion. Mcjesus yelled in anger “stand still you worm! And fight like a true man and stop acting like the coward that you are!”. Blue watched upon this strange battle from behind another bolder, hoping for a good shot at Mcjesus but suddenly he was sucked into a blue portal with out answer. “WHAT THE FUCK!” screamed Mcjesus, “let me go you stupid portal!” he started to run with speed away form it, but the more he tried the more he was sucked into it, “this isn’t over worm boy!” shouted Mcjesus when he gave in at last.

The black haired guy fell to the floor now and looked at blue, “well you are useless when in combat.” he had said to Blue
“ME! I was trying to get a clear shot, unlike you Mr. lets anger the powerful opponent until he blows us all to bits.”
“For your information, my name is Markus and you owe me a coke for saving your sorry ass”
“You what!! I was doing fine till you came along!”
“sure, sure” said Markus mockingly, suddenly there was another slam onto the ground of the cavern that was nearly collapsed, Blue and markus turned to see a blonde haired guy on a big energized shield along with a zombie looking fellow that had blood dripping form his yellow-stained teeth. “PRODUCE!” shouted Blue at the top of his Lungs that made the cavern shake and start to fall to pieces, “Nice going ya brown haired bimbo” said Markus to the astonished Blue.

[destructin]

Does marckus really say alot of naughty language?

Anyway, this is awesome, keep it coming.

[ProDuce]

Aug 19, 2008 15:19:55 GMT -5 destructin said:

Does marckus really say alot of naughty language?

Anyway, this is awesome, keep it coming.

Erm, i think hes just like that in my story lolz

[Undeadlaw]

Another good chapter, keep up the work pal once again can not wait for more.

[Deleted]

Wow, this has some good imagery, and a good storyline, keep it up.

[ProDuce]

2 Chapter within one day, im chuffed! lol. Enjoy!



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Chapter 3
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As Mcjesus was flung out the other side of this strange portal world that always seems to make his temper worsen, he glared up to see he was in hell, quite literally. The flames was consuming there victims and let them scream, wishing for death, which will never come. The fire is always a blazed on the rocks under the command of one person alone, Abigor, some say he is a ridiculously cruel bastard only content on killing and gathering power, others say he’s the dead soul of the gods, but most people just believe that if you mess with him, you end up in the flaming depths of hell.

Mcjesus stood up now, noticing he was surrounded by 8 shadowy figures, one was massive with tentacles, others where normal size, but then there was one massive guy on a throne. “Mcjesus, I believe you haven’t even started the task that was given to you! Do you want to be destroyed? Because if that’s the case I’ll be more than willing to help you on the matter!” boomed a voice form the throne, it was so loud that the other figures around him grew scared and there knees knocked. “That’s MvG I bet” thought Mcjesus when he heard the knees clicking. “My great master and lord” started Mcjesus as he took a bow, “I couldn’t start because I was being distracted by these lil kiddies who consist on out doing my patients, if you just let me go back and…” Mcjesus was cut off by the booming voice in the shadows now, “SILENCE! I’ve had enough of this and your excuses, we need more souls damn it, I need an army! I hope you know that we have already got an alliance with the Virus infantry and they are ready to move in at MY command, so don’t give me this cock and bull story about KIDS PUTTING YOU OFF YOUR DUTYS!!!!”
“But Sir…” Mcjesus said, trying to continue his speech of my he can’t begin his job properly, “Shut it Mcjesus! I’ve had it up to here with you Shenanigans! And you shall pay for it, but I do believe you have a job to complete, so we will deal with this later! UNDERSTOOD!”
“yes master” mumbled the annoyed and upset Mcjesus.
“And take him with you to make sure you don’t get in no more trouble, but I will deal with the kids…” suddenly an orange figure steeped out of the shadows, he had tiny white wings attached to his temples on his head, he start to introduce him self to Mcjesus, “the name is QuickFeet, you won’t be forgetting it any time soon I hope!” Mcjesus grumbled as another portal opened up to the newly team of gore, and they disappeared into the blue mist of the portal world.

“You!” Bellowed the shady figure on the throne. “come forth and speak your name!” suddenly a tall, lanky figure steeped out of the shadows and came forth with tenicals on his abck that zipped into his back, his eyes where narrow and he didn’t look to please, “The name is UnDeadLaw, you lordship” he said quite plainly.
“good…” said the figure on the throne as he inspected him, “you shall be my assassin and wipe out these meddling kids, take Cthulhu with you, he will assist you with in your journey!”
“yes my lord, as you wish. I will do your bidding” answered undeadlaw as he turned around to see his new companion, a giant monstrous thing stepped out and was looking very grumpily at the fact he was leaving hell again to do his masters bidding, but as all monsters of the underworld, you have to follow the orders or enjoy torture. This thought made the monster even more depressed now. He had giant dark green octopus tentacles hanging from his head, massive wings stuck out his back and with one swoop lifted him in the air, his eye where dark mushy yellow, his muscles where beyond believable size!

Undeadlaw was not happy about working with this creature, it was bad enough working under an ignorant boss let alone working with a slimy octopus monster. But be as it may, he had to jump upon this monsters back and let it do the traveling as he sat there and watch out for those he was tracking, within an instant they where flying though the flaming gaps of hell to the outa reaches of the void.

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ProDuce shot his arm up now, as a blue energy barrier was made around him and Tom, whilst blue slammed his hand up in the air and made another sheep, this time it was placed on two boulders with Blue and Markus underneath it. All the rocks bounced off them and suddenly the whole cavern came upon them as ProDuce cried out, “I can’t hold this any longer!” suddenly there was loads of ProDuces, appearing from nowhere, just mist forming under them as they appeared in the dusty Cavern, they all jumped up and held the ceiling away from every one so they can run free to the void.

Blue was first to react by de-summoning the sheep and running like a mad man for the exit of The cavern, but he was immediately over token by an inch by Markus. “He’s not getting the better of me” thought Blue as he dashed ahead of Markus and closer to the way out. “He didn’t just do that did he!” thought Markus as he started to even up with Blue, they both dashed for the exit, getting faster and faster until they slammed into the Cavern wall and fell upon the opened aired floor of the cavern. They both laid there wearily and started to frail around on the floor.

ProDuce caught up along side of Tom, who had his eyebrow arched with a look saying, What The Fuck, towards Blue and Markus. But ProDuce just lifted Blue up onto one of his shields and sent him above the Cavern as Tom did the same to the faintly conscious Markus.

As soon as the whole gang was at the top of the Cavern a sudden dark aura surround them, and in a few split second a misty hell portal appeared, flicking and dancing and being engulfed by flames! A massive green Monster road out with a strange lanky teen demon on his back. “WHO ARE YOU!?!?” shouted Tom at the new arrivals.
“We are you doomed, we have been ordered to kill you off… starting with you” answered the lanky guy on the monsters back who pointed at Tom. “Oh Shit…” said Tom, mostly to him self.

[Deleted]

What a twist!

[Undeadlaw]

I... AM... LOVING... THIS!!!

This story is really turning out great so far keep it up!


_{yey am in a fanfic}

[jallo]

AWESOMENESS.

[McJesus]

Oh my god.. there are so many typos and grammatical errors it's hard to read..


But that's me.

[ProDuce]

Aug 19, 2008 19:55:53 GMT -5 McJesus said:

Oh my god.. there are so many typos and grammatical errors it's hard to read..


But that's me.

damn, knew that would happen

[destructin]

Oh, it just gets better every time.

[ProDuce]

Wow, heres the next chapter, hope ya enjoy it!




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Chapter 4
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QuickFeet was running though the white dusty deserted void with a moaning Mcjesus on his back, “How embarrassing is this! Being carried around by an orange rat!” Grumbled Mcjesus as he bashed a fist into QuickFeets back, QuickFeet stop immediately now and let go of Mcjesus, leaving him flying though the air and slamming into the cold dusty ground. “Never complain about getting a ride, just be glad your not 6 feet under. The only reason I’m helping you is for the master.” said Quickfeet as he noticed form a distance Mcjesus opening his hands. Suddenly there was an explosion underneath QuickFeet, as he went into the air, as soon as he realized he was plummeting to the floor he made a tiny tornado underneath him to steady his balance, “Your ganna regret that bitch!” he shouted at Mcjesus

Mcjesus slammed his feet into the ground and made an explosion from under him, he flew up high and punch Quickfeet across the jaw, they both flew back, Mcjesus landing on his feet, Quickfeet plummeting to the ground. “I’m going on ahead, you try and catch up and ill bust you down to the floor again!” Mcjesus started running off now as Quickfeet rose up slightly then collapsed.

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Tom was looking up at his challenger with his zombie like eyes, making up a quick tactic before they began fighting. Suddenly Cthulhu’s tentacles grabs Blue and ProDuce and lobs them far beyond him self, undead law fell down to the ground and landed lightly. “looks like Cthulhu wants to have a 2 vs. 1 battle going on here, I think the odds are still on my side” grinned Undeadlaw as strange metallic tentacles appeared out of his back. “lets get this party started, OH but wait, your friend here is barley able to move with that massive whack to the head, look like ill kill him first” Undeadlaw bellowed loudly as he laid the cards down. Tom looked angrily down at Markus now, then back to Undeadlaw, he had no choice but to fight for both there lives… on his own.

undead law leaped at him now, Tom swiftly moved sizes away from him then tried to swipe at him with his silvery sharp claws but undead law participated this and did a back flip over Tom and then picked him up by his foot alone then slashed his three other tentacles at him and sent him flying up in agony, he leaped after him but was stopped by a golden beam, he looked down to see Markus was sitting up right with his Gauntlet aiming at him, as he tried another one of his beams. undead law swiftly invaded this attack and threw him self at the weak Markus but he was caught off guard on the way there by Tom who slashed at Undeadlaw’s eyes now, he had been blinded and couldn’t see a bloody thing! He screamed with riving pain now! But Tom took this as an advantage and tried to snap his shark teeth into his nicely untouched and unscarred skin.

Suddenly Cthulhu shot a slimy green sticky tactical at him and send him back to the floor along side Markus. ProDuce saw his chance and a blue blur appeared behind the monster and slashed across his tentacles and set him self free along with blue who was now awoken by surprise. “What the fuck is happening here?” shouted Blue to ProDuce
“Well the tooth fairy popped around and asked for tea then I made her angry by telling her teeth looked bad from all that chocolate, so she turned into the Wicked Witch of the West and flew away, WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU THINK IS HAPPENING!!! WE ARE BEING ATTACKED!!! NOW HELP OR DIE BY YOUR OWN WILL!?!?” Said ProDuce who was becoming annoyed with these silly questions and games… he had to catch Mcjesus before time ran out.

“That’s it…” ProDuce whispered to him self, “I’ve had it” suddenly there was a massive uproar as Markus and Tom where picked up by there arms now, both unable to do any thing, but ProDuce came and rammed him self into Undeadlaw, freeing them both, suddenly there was 50 more ProDuces jumping on top of Undeadlaw “DOG PILE!” yelled the top one, when Tom and Markus looked at the mighty monster called Cthulhu, they noticed he was being over run by hundreds of produces who was putting shields over the monster to stop him moving around, Tom and Markus ran over to Blue who looked astonished still trying to take this all in. Suddenly there was a yelling noise form every single ProDuce “Get the hell out of here! I hold them off and catch up later!” They all nodded to each other and ran off without ProDuce. “Do ya think he will be ok Tom?” asked Blue with concern,
“I have no idea Blue, but we all must put our hopes into him. No matter what!” Tom answered with passion and faith in ProDuce.

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The bunch of ProDuces on Undeadlaw was now sent flying, from an outburst from the thousands of tentacles upon Undeadlaw, “I wont be able to keep this up” Thought ProDuce as he invaded an attack “the shields are also weakening, I’ll have to run for it…” ProDuce nodded to him self and started to back away from Undeadlaw, sending more clones of him self at this never ending slaughter, produce now put his hand out, every other ProDuce did the same, it sparkled blue now, suddenly bursts of shields popped up ever where and shots at Undeadlaw whilst every single one hoped onto another shield and flew away.

Cthulhu was now free from his shielded prison and was now shooting his slimy tentacles at all the ProDuces, but the ones he hit kept going up in white smoke. He just couldn’t find the original, Undeadlaw had the same problem as Cthulhu, they where both angered by this fact now. Undeadlaw had gotten away from there previous shield attack by slamming his tentacles at them so now they felt weak and rather useless, he couldn’t take another hit like that. He hated the fact, but he had to let him fly away in order to stay alive. “lets go Cthulhu and set up camp some where, we need to re-gather and re-plan.” Undeadlaw turned away now, walking into the shadowy part of the Void, Cthulhu followed miserably and sulkily.

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ProDuce continued flying with his clones hanging around until he knew he was far away from his Assassins to be safe enough to be rid of the clones, they all disappeared into smoke in a matter of seconds. He sighed now and search the horizon for his fellow companions, but they seemed to have been long gone by now. “Curses…” Grumbled ProDuce, as he now realized he was alone with no direction to follow. But suddenly there was a flash of orange in the distance of him, it looked like a normal victim of robbery, so being the kind hearted soul that he usually was, he jumped off his shield and ran over to the man, he had very tiny wings attached to his head, and was wearing a greek-like outfit, he look innocent enough and by the looks of the massive holes in the gorund near him, he must off fort with Mcjesus.

“He MUST know where Mcjesus went!” thought ProDuce as he stared at the weak and limp body on the floor. “well looks like the gods are on my side” said ProDuce as he went to see if the greek-ish man was ok. But in actual fact, ProDuce’s statement couldn’t of been more wrong…

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Tom noticed that they where far enough now and that ProDuce must of fort the battle and have got away by now… that or he’s died. At this thought running though his head, he looked at the floor and shed a tear then shook his head, “Must not think like that! He’s alive and I know it!” Tom thought and hoped that this was true. Suddenly he looked at his new companions, Markus was in front of him leading the way, but to where? Blue was next to him looking more confused than ever and was looking at Tom and Markus for answers, but he got none. He had never felt so helpless within his small life span. Then he heard Tom shout something at Markus, “Hay! Where are you taking us Markus!” said Tom, his voice full of concern.
“To Vomit Kingdom, you are after Mcjesus right?” replyed Markus, and at the question Tom nodded whilst Blue just thought to himself “Am I after Mcjesus?”
“Well we might find some news about Mcjesus in Vomit Kingdom, I have a very close friend there. And hay, if ya count ya blessing we might Mcjesus there!” Grinned Markus now as he continued to lead the way, Tom was satisfied with this answer and hoped ProDuce would find them there…

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The orange Greek was awake now, staring at ProDuce with wide eyes. “Hay, need some help?” said ProDuce as he noticed that the man was awestruck, “Don’t be afraid, I have noticed you where in battled with the mighty Mcjesus, count your self lucky that you aren’t dead. But fear not I’m not on the evil side.” at this comment ProDuce notice a flicker of flames inside this orange guys eyes at the name Mcjesus, suddenly he shot up and landed on his feet looking proDuce up and down, “so he’s one of the kids that is after Mcjesus… he looks like a fool” he giggled to him self now, “hay what’s your name?” asked the orange one.
“ProDuce, your good sir. How about you?” replied ProDuce.
“Oh I’m Quick… I’m… Clive” he said quickly, incase this dumb looking fellow will figure him out, you can never judge a book by its cover… “Well Clive, are you going after Mcjesus? Do you even know where he went?” Quizzed ProDuce, and was praying for a miracle to happened. “Why I have to say ‘YES’ to both those questions, he’s headed for Vomit Kingdom. Come on we can’t waste much time. Hop onto my back.” OroDuce was so glad and happy about this fact but as soon as he was on Clive’s back, he felt sick as if he was on a roller coaster ride. “SLOW DOWN!?!?!?!” he yelled, hoping for him to hear him but he didn’t.

[destructin]

Hahaha, this is getting badass, and lol at Vomit kingdom.

[Deleted]

Another great chapter ProDuce! ;D

[Undeadlaw]

Aug 20, 2008 19:27:19 GMT -5 @thesnakeskull said:

Another great chapter ProDuce! ;D

i second that notion my good fellow. God i am so badass in this lol

[ProDuce]

I swear this is going to lead to the best chapter yet!!!

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Chapter 5
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Mvg had already teleported to Vomit Kingdom and was wondering how long Mcjesus and the Quickfeet could take, for one Quickfeet could of ran here in a matter of minutes but with Mcjesus he’s probably fort with him, and that slowed them down, they should, at the maximum, take an hour to get here. If not, then they are most likely dead or soon to be.

He looked around now, he was standing on what looked like dried up sand, but by going by its name it was most likely dried-up vomit that had harden enough to stand on, MvG shuddered at the thought. “Blasted Vomit king… he doesn’t even have any people under him to rule upon! So why call your self ‘King’ if your not really a ‘King’” moaned Mcg as hear a massive explosion in the back ground and saw the flying Mcjesus edging closer to him. “About time” he Grumbled as Mcjesus landed next to him.
“There was traffic” grinned Mcjesus as he saw MvG look around for Quickfeet to appear any time now.
“So where is Quickfeet?” asked Mvg With An Arching eyebrow at Mcjesus,
“What? The orange rat? He was slowing me down so I ditched him.” answered Mcjesus as he noticed MvG sigh and shake his head to him self, “beggars cant be choosers I guess” he said as he stopped shaking his head. “Now can we get back to matter at hand, and I’m sure Quickfeet will turn up soon enough, most likely just to kick your ass, but any who…” MvG was cut off by a screech from Mcjesus,
“BEAT ME UP!?!?! don’t make me laugh! He couldn’t beat up a handbag.” yelled Mcjesus. “Any way, what this all about? Why am I in the most downgrading city known to brawl?”

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ProDuce’s legs where starting to ache badly, where Clive was holding them so hard, “probably making sure I doesn’t fall off” thought ProDuce, humoring himself, although at the back of his mind it kept speaking louder and louder, Quickfeet one of the special Greek God brawlers, and he had fort with Mcjesus and knows where he is. Don’t be so dumb! HE’S EVIL!! ProDuce just shook away these thoughts and told himself that it was just pure coincidence that Clive was at the wrong place at the wrong time and that Mcjesus had yelled out his destination by his own ignorance. And it serves him right. He’s ganna get it now!

But suddenly Clive yelled back at him now. “Hay, stop day dreaming you idio- I mean… look ahead! Its Vomit Kingdom!” Clive turned back to the front now and was slowing down at the appearance of the golden yellow town. “that was quick!” said ProDuce, feeling silly after saying so, ‘Of course it was quick! I was riding a bloody light speed brawler!” thought ProDuce face palming himself in his imagination.

Without warning Clive stopped and flipped ProDuce off his back, “that far enough for you…” Clive whispered as he turned to face him with a wild look in his eyes.
“What ya doing Clive?!?” said ProDuce quite franticly, “He ganna kill ya duhh, should listen to the back of ya brain more often!!” Said his thoughts.
“The name isn’t Clive you douche bag! It Quickfeet.” said the newly named Quickfeet. This had brought ProDuce’s flash back of when the name was mentioned. He had been the one who had made mass murdering with another part of the brawl called Pirates Bay, there had been an expedition over there to find out if there was pirates or gold and money or if it was all a big myth, apparently when they got there the pirates had be slaughtered and then on the spot they joined the pirates, one was able to escape though, his name was SwordKill.

ProDuce now looked up at Quickfeet in a whole new light now. “Now our time has ended but I dare say you have been better company than that BLASTED MCJESUS!” Shouted Quickfeet, then ProDuce saw it again, the fire in his eyes when he said Mcjesus. ProDuce acted quickly now.
“You won’t be able to kill him you know” Mocked ProDuce
“Kill who??” said Quickfeet witch a curious glance at him, “There is no one I can’t slaughter and rip off the face of brawl!”
“You need me to kill Mcjesus!” Grinned ProDuce, who was enjoying the look on Quickfeet’s face, an odd twitch going over his eye.
“Why would I want to kill Mcjesus” The flames was in his eyes again.
“Because you hate him, so you should join forces with him and let me sneak up on him, then you won’t get the blame from your bosses” Finished ProDuce, whilst he looked on at Quickfeet thinking it over.
“Now that is a good offer, but there one floor in your little scheme, how can I trust you?!” he asked with caution. ProDuce laughed now,
“It should be me asking that question, not the other way around, but any way you probably aware that Mcjesus won’t be there for long, he’s never any where for long!” ProDuce pointed out.

Suddenly Quickfeet gripped him and started running again, flipping ProDuce onto his back, “You better do this right! Ya moose!” he yelled as they started running off to the yellowy horizon.

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Markus had already reached to the peek of a yellow mountain, whilst Tom and Blue was still climbing and running out of energy, “Oh please hurry up you slow dogs! Why I bother with you two I don’t know!” grumbled Markus as he watch his companions struggle to keep up. “Your both just totally slow, I can understand why Tom might be, because he just had a awesome fight and saved all our lives, but you! No your just unhealthy and un active.”
“ME!?!?!” yelled blue who had now got over his awestricken once Tom told him what has happened whilst he was knocked out.
“Of course you, who else would I be talking to, ya better not be as dumb as you are unfit” Bellowed Markus, enjoying himself to no end. “this is starting to become a hobby for Markus” thought Tom as he watch the two boys start yelling at each other AGAIN!

Tom suddenly noticed an orange blur in the distance, he knew it was danger for them, but suddenly there was a loud explosion as floods of sick or puke or vomit came flying over like a tidal wave in a rough ocean, they had but 2 choices, run like Frick and they caught into it, or just sit there and get caught into it! Hard choice, thought Tom as he noticed the other two hadn’t noticed, so he left it that way with a grin on his face.

He turned and started running away from it but he noticed he was heading straight to the orange blur, “Trapped!” said Tom as he was already one fifth of the way down the giant mountain. But suddenly he noticed ProDuce on the orange blur, “What the…” Tom said as he noticed that the orange blur was a super fast brawler and it looked like he had befriended on his way here. Tom now waved quite franticly at ProDuce, suddenly ProDuce lifted his head to see him and waved back then held a serious expression again, and ponited behind Tom. Tom turned around to see Mcjesus fly over him on the sick tidal wave that had by now over token Blue and Markus!

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From a distance on a remote cliff sort of area, a brown Wolf was watching this all happen form his binoculars, another person appeared out of the cave behind them, it was tall person with a half robotic face and a mech eye, he was holding a some what big gun on his back, “seen him?” asked the robotic one.
“Yep.” answered The wolf/Dog creature as he took away his binoculars and turned behind himself to where the cave was and shouted, “hay flea bag! Get up, he’s here!” after about five minutes of moaning, a massive pink/purple cat appeared with weary sleeping eyes holding a book of some kind, he yawned and said “you could of at least let me look at my ‘Collection’ before we when off”
“There was no time, he’s here now and we must act now or lose our selves a precious time to strike! We must revenge our comrades now!” yelled the mech eyed one.

Suddenly they all turned and when to get there stuff, the brown one now stood up in the sun which now glimmered off his blue trousers like a wavering sea, he turned and grabbed a small stick off some kind, then sliped on a small brown glove. Whilst the robotic one had come out of the cave with a small pistol of some sort in his hand and a rifle on his back as well as a machine gun in his right hand. The purple cat-like one came out with a small magazine, then he looked up to see 4 glaring eyes on him, “What? Aren’t I aloud to read some Porn whilst we walk!” he grinned at them now whilst the Tall Robotic one said,
“Some times that guy creeps me out…” the brown one nodded in agreement and started to leap down the side of the small mountain they had set up on.

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Before Mcjesus had shot loads of explosions at these weird Vomit creatures that had tried to stop him attacking the Vomit King, and then create an avalanche of puke, MvG had teleported into where the King was and gripped him and had token him away whilst he spat his acid like Vomit at him, then held up a strange card saying “WhAt thE FucK aER U DoinG?!?” it was obvious that this non talking vomit king couldn’t write whilst he was being carried around, but he had jumped into the portal with the king down to the domains of hell where the master congratulated him on a mission success, then asked what became of Mcjesus and Quickfeet. MvG had told him how he suspects that Quickfeet was betrayed by Mcjesus then is after Mcjesus to kill him. And the Master had nodded of approval at this, “Now the only choice is whether we should Help Quickfeet Kill Mcjesus or vice versa…” He pondered on the thought, whilst back in Vomit Kingdom, Mcjesus had known that the Vomit King was down in hell and had shot the floor making an avalanche to escape but had noticed on the way down, the meddling kids and that damn orange rat! And he also sensed some thing else coming, but it wasn’t after him that much he knew already but he decided to concentrate on the problem at hand. He had turned to see the vomit creatures following him still! “Damn!” yelled Mcjesus as he tried figuring out a plan.

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Further away and no where near the Vomit Kingdom, was Undeadlaw and his helpful partner, Cthulhu. They where also taking portal back to hell, hidden underneath a rock, it was the same one they had used to get out of hell a while back, but they where hoping MvG would be down there to teleport them to their targets. As they flew though the small hole that had now enlarged to be one massive portal to hell, they spotted that the master was expecting them, and had MvG mordantly open a portal for them to fly in, the Master didn’t know why, but he trusted them both to his full consent. And so Undeadlaw and Cthulhu flew though this new portal putting there confidence in there bosses decision, they flew though the bight blue lights of the portal world into the orange lights of the exit, and fell out into a large sick like mountain side, where Quickfeet was running up it with one of his targets on his back, and Mcjesus flying down on an avalanche and his other 3 targets in the middle of them both. And Undeadlaw exspect more company coming that was going to be joining them.

Undeadlaw on Cthulhu’s back was flying at great speed at all of them as well! To join in before more trouble came. But suddenly out the ground, all around them came massive worm like things, they where waving around all weirdly, suddenly there was a massive shout from Tom, Mcjesus, ProDuce and Markus, they all shouted “REAP TENTICALS!!!!” they all knew this was going to bigger battle than anything.

[Undeadlaw]

Good work produce keep it up pal.. the next chapter it going to be great! i can sense it.

I love blue's and Markus's rivalry.