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Post by gnnfnfer on Jan 11, 2008 0:53:29 GMT -5
A dramatized retelling of, so far, the biggest thread on this forum. So as to form a sort of POT PLOT to it, things I've reworked are the designs and storyline so as to remain within continuity. Some things I switched around to just super-glue a plot together. Some pics are better than others, due either to lethargy, time, and/or the fact I may have not been able to draw it perfectly (using ImageShack). Anywho...enjoy. MSP Movie 1: The Quest To Stop Omni
Intro PROLOGUE: ArrivalChapter One 'Ruler of the World' Chapter Two 'Located'  Chapter Three 'Here I'm Not' Chapter Four 'Apprentice'  Chapter Five 'Irony'
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jan 11, 2008 1:00:10 GMT -5
Why must I turn my neck 90 degrees to read some of it?
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Post by ₦ῒ↑ʁo on Jan 11, 2008 7:16:13 GMT -5
you do know his name isnt rengade it's rialto. renagade is just his "code"name.
ohh yeah that's right i forgot to type anrthing for the sacond time i pasted that.
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 12, 2008 12:56:19 GMT -5
A dramatized retelling of, so far, the biggest thread on this forum. So as to form a sort of POT PLOT to it, things I've reworked are the designs and storyline so as to remain within continuity. Some things I switched around to just super-glue a plot together. Some pics are better than others, due either to lethargy, time, and/or the fact I may have not been able to draw it perfectly (using ImageShack). Anywho...enjoy. I'm guessing that's Yacazuma on the roof? |
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 12, 2008 13:00:58 GMT -5
Dude...massive pic quoting right thar
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Post by bulet on Jan 14, 2008 10:26:36 GMT -5
took tha words out of my mouth ;D
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 14, 2008 12:44:39 GMT -5
Dude...massive pic quoting right thar Yeah that was before I stopped. >.< I'll go fix that up. |
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Post by RobotKilla on Feb 15, 2008 16:29:49 GMT -5
Where's the part where I become a traitor?  ?? |
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Post by ghost on Jul 30, 2008 10:36:34 GMT -5
Chapter Six
No Hope "Now my apprentice..." the Omnipresence hissed, approaching a mysterious, violet object dampened by the mac's projection, "While you ...eXTRACT your revenge, I shall take care of the rest of their base. Come and stop us if you will, that is, if you still possess enough atoms to exist."
The Omni hologram faded.
The red-coated man gritted his teeth, a furious cloud of flames blossomed along the sides, windows, and walls of Nitro's house.
"Dammit!" Rialto screamed, collapsing to his knees, face a river of tears.
In a bolt of red lightning, the man vanished. Robotkilla and Kevin helped Rialto to his feet, as Sheepshifter and Dethrarpist braced themselves for combat. A rupture in the earth made Sheep spin, fist with him, slicing through air where RKthrilla had been standing seconds earlier.
Kra-POW!
Two, size 13s marked tiny, crooked lines into the base of Sheep's temple, sending him crashing into the earth. Detharapist searched the air, raising his hands to the air. This man was too fast...
A black, slick oil began to emit from his hands. Slowly, it progressed outward, swallowing the landscape in a pure, inescapable shade that was suddenly illuminated by a fierce red.
The specter grinned, witnessing RKThrilla's wicked smile shapeshift to an irritated scowl as stretches of tomato flames were visible throughout the cloud of darkness. Arms flailing behind him, RKThrilla dived outward into the darkness, only to be promptly shot back out.
"No escape, sir." Detharapist morphed into a patch of the blackened earth, reappearing above RKThrilla.
Kevin and Rialto, recovered, paced over with Robotkilla, as did Sheepshifter who rose seconds later. RKThrilla beat his elbow into the ground, causing a small explosion of flame. It paneled, in microwave effect, and shot across the walls of the shade.
Detharapist shrieked as the darkness was scorched, and quickly motioned his hands in chant-like motions, summoning the shadows back into his cloak.
Blue gasped, "Guys, he's gone!"
The group saw this also, RKThrilla's broken body had once again vanished. Detharapist shook his head, "No. I can't sense him. His energy would be spiking into the air like his element if he were her-"
"And you see, THAT'S just it. Why would RK betray us? And since WHEN did he gain pyrokinetic abilities as powerful as those?" said Robotkilla in anger. Most of them stood there silently.
But before Detharapist could possibly offer an answer, the ground around them heated. The earth meters around them exploded in a beam of phoenix energy, rock and gravel slamming into all of them.
Sheep caught himself on one of the many flying rocks, carrying him to the other side of the field they were in. Detharapist imploded into his cloak, reappearing behind Robotkilla who was clutching a bloodied arm. Rialto's orange bandanna was visible between two rocks, and as he emerged, Kevin lunged down from the large boulder he had traveled safely down on, yanking his katana from the stone.
High above them, following the trail of dissipating crimson and soon evaporating crimson light was a sleek, taupe, four-legged spider-like machine with a single venetian "eye" at it's center.
The center eye charged again, bubbling with ripples of crimson light, forming tiny sphere of energy as the main weapon charged.
"FIRE!!!" the sinister vehicle's captain announced, heard by only Kevin and Detharapist's ears.
"RUN!" the bistre-clad ninja ordered, with no argument from Sheep or Robotkilla who immediately dashed away from the burning remains of Rialto's house.
The specter whirled around, Rialto stood alone as the giant, mechanical monster towered over him, the center eye glimmered directly above him. Rialto's single eye met his, Detharapist nodded and turned back after the others. The ruined man's eyes locked with the polarized one of the machine, and were blinded as a red fold of light enveloped him, disintegrating the earth.
As the laser finished, a large, steaming grey crater rested in the same location. The laser recharged, and the robot spider continued it's march, two more traced it's same path, as did a trio of fighter jets, and two battalions of dark-armored soldiers. |
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Post by McJesus on Jul 30, 2008 10:41:36 GMT -5
You really gotta stop starting new fanfics. Hell, you're taking over old ones now.
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 30, 2008 11:50:56 GMT -5
Nope, he made this.
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Post by RobotKilla on Jul 30, 2008 12:05:11 GMT -5
wait... where was this part?
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jul 30, 2008 13:09:20 GMT -5
wait... where was this part? He's taking creative liberties. |
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