Undeadlaw
Master
Fuck you all..
I Think I Have A Drinking Problem..
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Post by Undeadlaw on Mar 6, 2008 11:55:17 GMT -5
The Rise Chapter one – The awakeningThis story starts with how a powerful entity became to be. This is the storey of the being you know as Undeadlaw. Undeadlaw’s farther if you could call him that more his creator was the lord of the 9th realm, by creating a powerful being Sharindarth (the lord of the 9th realm) hoped to become the lord of the 20th realm. The 20th realm is the most powerful and feared realm off all, none dare to rise against its army. There brutality is matched by no other. Sharindarth called upon the forbidden magic to help create Undeadlaw, his wish was granted the monster was created. Undeadlaw Helped his master rise through realm after realm destroying all who apposed him, killing thousands upon thousands of men, his powers could not be matched. Until that day when the battle with the 18th realm began…… Hope you enjoyed the first chapter bare with me with pelling and grammar as i am dyslexic.
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ProDuce
Guv'na
The Producer[M0n:-5]
Bow Before The Cloning, Nature Loving, Cell Generating Team Trio!
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Post by ProDuce on Mar 6, 2008 11:59:48 GMT -5
Love it!! ;D I WANT MORE!
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Post by SwordKill on Mar 6, 2008 15:09:45 GMT -5
Undeadlaw’s farther if you could call him that more his creator was the lord of the 9th realm, by creating a powerful being Sharindarth (the lord of the 9th realm) hoped to become the lord of the 20th realm Man, that might be the longest and most poorly punctuated sentance I have ever seen. It should have been: Undeadlaw’s father (if you could call him that, better described as his creator ) was the lord of the 9th realm . By creating a powerful being 'Sharindarth ' (the lord of the 9th realm) , hop ing to become the lord of the 20th realm.
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Post by McJesus on Mar 6, 2008 16:26:10 GMT -5
Hey Swordkill, why don't you tutor/spellcheck Undeadlaw's posts or something through pm's, and we'd have our first fan fiction collab (of sorts) ?
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Undeadlaw
Master
Fuck you all..
I Think I Have A Drinking Problem..
Posts: 932
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Post by Undeadlaw on Mar 6, 2008 21:30:00 GMT -5
Man, that might be the longest and most poorly punctuated sentance I have ever seen. It should have been:
Undeadlaw’s father (if you could call him that, better described as his creator) was the lord of the 9th realm. By creating a powerful being 'Sharindarth' (the lord of the 9th realm), hoping to become the lord of the 20th realm. [/quote]
If you check back i did explain i am dyslexic witch mean i am poor of writing spelling and reading and i do find rather hard. but i would rather you pm me and tell me rather than say it out loud on the forum its a problem i can not help. But i would appreciate the help from you guys through pm's.
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Post by The Omnipresence on Mar 6, 2008 23:57:00 GMT -5
The Rise Chapter one – The awakeningThis story starts with how a powerful entity became to be. This is the storey of the being you know as Undeadlaw. Oh I thought this would be a story about me, as I am the only powerful entity in existence. Also my head is getting larger.
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Post by McJesus on Mar 7, 2008 3:41:03 GMT -5
Also my head is getting larger. Exponentially! We need to get to the bottom of this. Pm me.
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