Post by RobotKilla on Mar 7, 2008 16:39:31 GMT -5
Meh Firzt Story ;D
Chapter One: The Rivalry
I sat there, nervous, listening to the forest chatter and noise. For why had his parents abandoned him in this trechorous dungeon of trees? He may never know, all that matters is staying alive; for whos what beasts lie within the walls of wood and leaves. I got up from my resting space to look around. Nothing at first. Suddenly, two luminious red, death defying eyes stared back at me. A sudden chill ran through my spine and mad me shiver in fear. For a breif moment, the eyes stared at me and I stared back. Then, as if time had stopped for the time being, the beast jumped out at me. Without thinking, I picked up a fallen apple and threw it at the pouncing savage. To my suprise, the apple suddenly combusted once it hit the thing that was approuching. Once it fell to the ground I got a clear sight of the fiend. It was Balto-Boy. At the time, I never knew this brawler, but I had a strange feeling he would haunt me for the rest of my life. After recovering from the explosion, Balto got up and stared at me. He saw my fear. To my suprise, he growled and took off, instead of taking another shot at the attack. From this day on, Balto was my rival and no one would stand in my way until I destroy him.
plez coment!!! ;D
Chapter One: The Rivalry
I sat there, nervous, listening to the forest chatter and noise. For why had his parents abandoned him in this trechorous dungeon of trees? He may never know, all that matters is staying alive; for whos what beasts lie within the walls of wood and leaves. I got up from my resting space to look around. Nothing at first. Suddenly, two luminious red, death defying eyes stared back at me. A sudden chill ran through my spine and mad me shiver in fear. For a breif moment, the eyes stared at me and I stared back. Then, as if time had stopped for the time being, the beast jumped out at me. Without thinking, I picked up a fallen apple and threw it at the pouncing savage. To my suprise, the apple suddenly combusted once it hit the thing that was approuching. Once it fell to the ground I got a clear sight of the fiend. It was Balto-Boy. At the time, I never knew this brawler, but I had a strange feeling he would haunt me for the rest of my life. After recovering from the explosion, Balto got up and stared at me. He saw my fear. To my suprise, he growled and took off, instead of taking another shot at the attack. From this day on, Balto was my rival and no one would stand in my way until I destroy him.
plez coment!!! ;D
