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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 9, 2008 1:15:55 GMT -5
Based on a chat story.
THE BEGGINING
It all started as a baby, he was abused by his uncle, rageblood. He always caused problems for him, and messed him up later.
"Damnit WheelJack!"
"DONT SPIT ON ME EVER AGAIN" Rageblood says, as he furiously hits wheeljack.
Wheeljack crys loudly, and grimscott comes.
"Whats wrong wheeljack?" Says Grimscott in a loving tone.
"Unca Rayblud" He trys to say.
"ABUSING HIM AGAIN" She yells as she bursts into tears.
She never really liked Rageblood anyway, but he was Elementell's brother, and he was staying here for a couple months.
Well, months turned into years.
As wheeljack matured, Rageblood continued to bother him, and abuse him.
Although, something else happened to him at these few years, some crazy councilor.
There was a school shooting, at this point his life would change forever.
Almost everyone was killed, all but him, he was very lucky, and although the shooter was never caught, they suspected ChaoticBlood, a vicious killer.
As days turned into months, the months rolled by and next thing you know he was a preteen.
"how was school today, wheeljack?" Says Elementell.
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Post by McJesus on Mar 9, 2008 1:28:44 GMT -5
Preteen: BAWWWWWW
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Post by madvideogamer on Mar 9, 2008 1:33:36 GMT -5
I starred as WheelJack in the Chat!  |
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Post by Xinxinix on Mar 9, 2008 7:36:14 GMT -5
I starred as WheelJack in the Chat! Everything I know is a lie! |
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Post by bulet on Mar 9, 2008 10:57:21 GMT -5
yeah! cant wait to see more!
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 9, 2008 11:00:59 GMT -5
Busted.
"It was great! I met all kinds of new people today!"
Said Wheeljack in an enthusiastic voice.
"thats great sweetie" Said grimscott.
"Er... Can I go over to jimmy's house and do something he said was really fun?"
Says Wheeljack.
"why sure honey, whatever you want" Said grimscott happily.
*3 days later*
"Mom, Im going over to Jimmys." Said Wheeljack in an apithetic tone.
"Ok..." Said grimscott, wondering why he was acting like that.
"probably some stupid club thing", whispered Elementell as they both giggled.
About 5 year later...
"Hey wheeljack, how was your science test?" Said grimscott in a hopeful tone.
"You got an A, right son?" Said Elementell
"I flunked it" said Wheeljack as he stumbled up to his room.
"Son, did I just smell beer on your breath?" Said Elementell in a sadistic tone.
"Er..." Said Wheeljack.
"So this is why you have been failing..." Said Elementell as Grimscott bursts into tears.
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Post by bulet on Mar 9, 2008 11:05:30 GMT -5
elementell=dad
grimscott=mom
rageblood=uncle
amirite?
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 9, 2008 11:09:16 GMT -5
elementell=dad grimscott=mom rageblood=uncle amirite? Yup, also, I already have the whole story written, I am just posting it one day at a time. TO MAKE YOU ALL SUFFER  |
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Post by ProDuce on Mar 9, 2008 11:36:16 GMT -5
elementell=dad grimscott=mom rageblood=uncle amirite? Yup, also, I already have the whole story written, I am just posting it one day at a time. TO MAKE YOU ALL SUFFER YOU EBIL MAN!!!  |
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Post by bulet on Mar 9, 2008 12:16:01 GMT -5
Yup, also, I already have the whole story written, I am just posting it one day at a time. TO MAKE YOU ALL SUFFER YOU EBIL MAN!!! EVIL TOO! |
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Post by Grimscott on Mar 9, 2008 16:05:40 GMT -5
YOU EBIL MAN!!! EVIL TOO! How else are we gonna get our kicks besides making you suffer? |
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Post by ₦ῒ↑ʁo on Mar 9, 2008 17:47:26 GMT -5
i wanted to be in it!
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Post by madvideogamer on Mar 9, 2008 18:16:03 GMT -5
You didn't really do anything to help nitro, all you did was try to mess it up.
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Post by ₦ῒ↑ʁo on Mar 9, 2008 18:48:11 GMT -5
You didn't really do anything to help nitro, all you did was try to mess it up.  How dare you! i can to help and imma prove it. |
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Post by Grimscott on Mar 9, 2008 18:50:58 GMT -5
You didn't really do anything to help nitro, all you did was try to mess it up. How dare you! i can to help and imma prove it. MVG is right. |
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 10, 2008 19:58:24 GMT -5
Dont fuck with Elementell.
"Why Wheeljack... Were we bad parents?" Said Elementell sadly.
"No, its just, I found it under rageblood's bed and..."
"RAGEBLOOD!" Yelled Elementell, as he ran upstairs and looked under his bed, only to find what wheeljack was saying was true.
As rageblood walked in, to see all three of them standing there, and Elementell with a bottle of his vodka.
"Explain" Roared Elementell.
"I... I, I uh..."
"Get out" said Elementell.
"wha?" Said rageblood.
"I SAID GET OUT" He yelled as he threw Ragebloods things on the floor.
"Pack up your things, and get out of my house." Said Elementell.
"But, where do I go?" Said Rageblood trying to sound as innocent as possible.
"I dont know, and I dont care, but get out of my house in 10 minutes or I will MAKE you leave." Said Elementell.
He refused, and started to swing at the boy, and he broke his nose and knocked out a tooth too.
"THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT YOU LITTLE SHIT" He screamed, and he attempted to punch him more, and he ended up pulling out a knife.
"Honey, watch out!" Elementell yelled as he went for the shotgun.
"HELP US" They screamed as Elementell threatend Rageblood with the shotgun he had.
He Swung at Elementell, and he stabbed him really bad in the arm, and Rageblood got his brains blown out.
"I-I... I just- I killed... Ho- How did I... What did I do..." Elementell said, stumbling.
"I just... I just killed my brother..." As Elementell weaped, and grimscott and wheeljack sobbed together, they decided that they had to move, and fast.
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Post by madvideogamer on Mar 11, 2008 13:41:38 GMT -5
Ohh, this is a great rewrite!
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Post by megaman12345 on Mar 11, 2008 14:38:12 GMT -5
so what i just wrote got deleted huh? it was a joke sheesh.
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Post by rabiesisme on Mar 11, 2008 14:40:45 GMT -5
Stay out of their story >:C
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Post by megaman12345 on Mar 11, 2008 14:47:37 GMT -5
...ok ok. still in my honest oppinion this story is good.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 12, 2008 15:43:30 GMT -5
Dallas, TX.
"Three tickets to Dallas, TX please." Said Elementell.
"here you go sir have a nice day" Said the ticketer person.
"but, You are going to have to wait, see, there is a storm coming, and we cant let anyone into that area untill 3 days from now." She says as a TV report was coming on the TV across the room.
"There seems to be a murder case, for the loving uncle of one, was shot and killed." Said the reporter.
"Bah, loving" Elementell said In an annoyed tone.
"we have to hide!" Said grimscott in a frantic voice.
And so they hid for three days, and what a harsh three days it was...
"CMON GUYS WE HAVE TO GET ON THAT PLANE!" I yelled as we ran for the plane.
Elementell jumped on the plane first, helping wheeljack up, and finally we got grimscott right before they took off.
"phew, that was close." Said Wheeljack.
"lets get seats" Elementell said.
"But, there are none" Says wheeljack.
"guys... did we board the wrong plane?!" said Elementell
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Post by madvideogamer on Mar 13, 2008 21:10:47 GMT -5
New chapter?
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Post by bulet on Mar 14, 2008 6:37:11 GMT -5
im loving this story! moar please.  |
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 14, 2008 6:39:50 GMT -5
This was rushed, and it takes away some of the seriousness of the story. Dallas, TX part 2!"Err... no? says wheeljack "oh lolk " says elementell with his lolwuts mixed with his lulz. "how the hell does you say " Says grimscott. "OMFGLOLWTF?" Said wheeljack. And so, the randomness went on untill they got off the plane. " " they all said. Right as elementell was walking off the plane HE HAD A HEART ATTACK D: "Honey!" yelled grimscott. grimscott goes to get help. "Are you alright dad?" said wheeljack |
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 14, 2008 20:50:22 GMT -5
This story sucks.
Im locking this peice of shit I wrote.
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How dare you! i can to help and imma prove it.