Super Paint Brawl: The Journey Begins

[Kromax]

Super Paint Brawl
Kromax Chronicles
The Journey Begins

Disclaimer: This story takes place 20,000 years before current paint brawl, so unless you brawlers were there back then, I will not include other characters besides mine, it tells the story of my brawler before he lost his hand, and put himself into a spell-coma.

Prologue

“Many believe I am just some kid that got lucky and got special powers, they, are wrong.” Kromax sat upon the cliffside as he quietly said these words. “I was born, 20,017 years ago, I had to seal my body in a coma for 20,000 to keep the world safe, I woke up when Mcjesus cracked The Cavern back open, it took me months to finally get on the surface, I found a team of brawlers, but still no sign of my brother, I’m sorry, I’m getting ahead of myself, let’s start back where it all began..."

[McJesus]

Bro you need to make much longer chapters. Oh and Astro has been alive for several millenia so he might be able to make a cameo.

[Balto-Boy]

Mar 26, 2009 4:23:06 GMT -5 McJesus said:

Bro you need to make much longer chapters.

Seconded. And I smell potential here...

[Kromax]

It was mostly a intro, not technically a chapter, but a prologue, I'll kick the story off when the chapters begin.


Astro? Hmm... he may make a small cameo, but maybe for only a small bit, but possibly, I may make him a core character


Thanks Balto! ;D

[Kromax]

OK, now the story begins with a 2 1/2 page chapter, enjoy!

Chapter 1
Worldly Introduction

An average sized man stood upon what many now know as the border to the white void, but it wasn’t a void, but a large, grassy plain, reaching out for miles. Small settlements and a mountain or so were seen; it seemed peaceful, until of course, when the beasts came.

The man, wearing a white robe from the waist up, with pieces of cloth covering bits of the light Grey pants, a hood went over his face, and a sword inside a sheath with was attached to his back by leather strands that ran over his chest, Stood on the border. The beasts that dashed from behind the hill towards the border ran for him, the main barely made eye contact as he drew his sword, the very bland steel sword had a silver handle and a light Grey blade. The man put the sword near his hand as he moved his hand up and down in front of it, almost touching it. The blade starts to turn shadowy, and soon, it’s just a thick blade shaped shadow.

He barely looked up and muttered a single word. “Die” the moment he said the word he was gone in a flash, dashing into the hordes of Shadclaws and Goraks (Two beasts who live in that area.) the second he got close enough, his blade faded though a Gorak’s chest and then became solid inside of him. The Gorak did not bleed, for there was no stab, but every opening, ears, nose, and the mouth were filled with blood. The blade faded out again and then became solid, it was a pretty clean kill, no blood, no stab marks, just a bloody face, and pale body.

After the kill, the man looked up, aimed the tip of his sword at the rest of the horde and muttered the word”Boom” as he said this, a shadowy wave blew the beasts back behind the hills. Inside the shock wave, The man did the same thing he did to the Gorak to everyone of them, after the attack… “Pretty simple… heh, easy fifteen kills, not a single problem.” In his cockiness, the man made a thin cut on a Shadclaw, and it bled about double, maybe triple as much as the face.” Oh shi-“

The thick smell of blood attracted hundreds, maybe thousands of beasts, from Shadclaws, to Goraks and even some Morshaks. He was overwhelmed, as he got ready for an attack, a huge shock wave blew each corpse and living beast back a few miles, as the blast hit the man he muttered some strange words “Sha-rindo” and his feet froze to the grounds. After the blast, the man unfroze only to hear an angry yell” Kromax!” The man, Kromax, dashed over to the man and started to talk “Look I’m sorry Master Sin, I got a little cocky…”

“It’s alright Kromax; I’ll have some soldiers deal with border patrol when they get back.”

“Well, why don’t we do it?” Kromax asked.

“We have an expedition into The Cavern; apparently they found some strange door at the bottom.”
“The bottom? That will take forever!”

Master Sin sighed as he opened a portal behind him
“Heh, I knew that…” Kromax said feeling pretty stupid.

After venturing though the portal, the two end up at the bottom of a deep cavern, and in the direct middle of the area, is a strange metal panel, with two dots leveled in the middle that makes the form of a horizontal line.

“So, we are supposed to go under that panel?”

“You sound surprised, you should be used to this stuff by now.”
“Heh.”

Among the two were a few men in armor, called soldiers, and a couple of men in mage robes.

“So, what’s the plan? Do we just crack the thing open? Or do we have to do something to open it?”

“Just crack it open with your sword.”

Kromax obeyed and stabbed his sword into the panel, and it cracked right open, revealing a dark area.
“Students first” Sin said as a joke.

“Fine fine.” Kromax said as he readied to jump down.

Kromax leaped down into the hole as Sin followed him.

[McJesus]

A few mistakes, but it's not horrible. :)

[Kromax]

I spell checked it, I know their is a prob with paragraphs, but anytime there is big line spaces, it's a new paragraph.

[McJesus]

I meant grammar, some sentences not making sense and so on.

[Kromax]

They are un-educated, I did that on purpose, although if its not in quotes I screwed up.

[Balto-Boy]

Hmmm... not bad. I'd say you could be a bit more descriptive, but overall it's alright.

[Kromax]

Ya, I forgot to give details on Sin, I'll do that next chapter.

[Balto-Boy]

Mar 28, 2009 0:14:50 GMT -5 Kromax said:

Ya, I forgot to give details on Sin, I'll do that next chapter.

You might wanna do that with the beasts, too. 'Cause I have no friggin idea as to what they're supposed to look like.

[Ele Mantel]

Oh, I just imagined them to be monsters like from devil may cry.

[Kromax]

Sorry for taking long, I've been caught up with schoolwork, I'll have it up soon.

[McJesus]

Don't bump to say you'll have it up soon, bump it to POST YOUR CHAPTER WHEN ITS DONE

[Kromax]

Bump? it's the first topic on the list, that wasn't a bump.

[McJesus]

It still applies, don't post to say you'll have something up soon.

[Kromax]

Then good sir, I will only post to post content, like right now.

Chapter 2: The Ascent

For a moment, the land was pitch black, then, in almost an instant an entire landscape the size of the white void was visible. As they slowly drifted down, Sin’s Black robe rippled in the strange winds, as well did his grey hair. Thanks to a slow fall spell Sin casted on the two, they avoided smashing down into the dry landscape. A few buildings stood around, small lava pools joined these buildings of the landscape. Kromax seemed sad unlike usual when he hides his emotions with the shadow of his hood, but he couldn’t help but look sad at this dying land.

“So, let’s explore, name and get this place charted on our map, I need to get back to training.” Kromax said with a strange tone.

“Since when do you like training?” Sin questioned.

“It’s nothing, let’s just go.” Kromax said with a normal tone.


The two reached the ground, and in a moment, strange beasts with red skin, large wings, horns, and the limbs of a human, flew over the two heading towards the building in front of him. The two ran towards the building but not making too much visible movement to avoid being spotted.

The door of the building was the same as the one they dropped in to, Kromax, not thinking right, blew the door apart, strangely not alerted anyone.

“What are you trying to get us killed?!” Sin snapped.

“Don’t worry, we’ll be fine.” Kromax said relaxed

After some bickering the two went deeper into the building. Only to find something unexpected

*BAM*
A fist smashed though the wall, the two ignored it, and went on to see a door not too far from the fist, they turned their heads around the corner to see what happened.

“You idiot! Stop messing with the Gork eggs, they are highly explosive!”
“Sorry boss, I just wanted to speed up the preparations, the elves already released a few attacks on us.”

“That’s why we need all our troops and weaponry in working order and not in flames!”

The two men arguing must be a soldier and some kind of commander.

“Gork? Isn’t that short for Gorak?” Kromax Asked Sin.

“Yah, didn’t know they were explosive though.” Sin responded.

After a few minutes, a whistle went off and the eggs were loaded into trucks as they arrived, some eggs were picked up by the strange winged beasts and they flew off along with the trucks, two or three guys stayed behind.

“Ok, we got all the bombs loaded up, and our weapons are en route to the pit, what should we do with this base?”

“I got that planned ahead, I planted 5 Eggs all over the base, they’ll go off in a few minutes”


“What?! Why have we not left yet?”

“Let’s go then!”

As the two heard this, they bolted for the doors, and then BAM, the first bomb went off, collapsing the tunnel, blocking the way out.

“Damnit!” Kromax yelled as he smacked his fist against the wall.

“Calm down Kromax, you just have to focus and stay calm.”

Sin then closed his eyes, and focused on the wall. In an instant a huge shock wave blew the entire hall apart. Kromax looked in amazement for a moment, and then realized he had about 10 seconds until the whole place went to a worse hell than the place was already in.

The walls collapsed as they dived out, and the building start to pulse with energy, Kromax, thinking fast, grabbed Sin and using a levitation spell flew up to the hole, which had moved somewhat to the left, they sky-rocketed though, and after a few moments, Kromax was incapacitated.

[taylor]

Mar 28, 2009 0:19:24 GMT -5 Kromax said:

Hmm, they may not come into the story again for another 5 chapters, they are gonna most likely be under the the cavern for awhile, I'll do something for details on them.


(E): This picture should give you a good idea, as you can see, my new brawler sludge, is a Morshak.

Huh?