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Post by rabiesisme on Mar 26, 2009 1:54:44 GMT -5
You're not supposed to put spaces between the tags and the link to your file. Quote my post and see.  Hope you enjoy! The main fighter/gang leader:  no picture?: click here: spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/250309/82936_Chris_C._the_Hedgehog.jpg Name: Chris C. The Hedgehog Powers: Almost anything (except the power to revive others) Weakness: (He can't die...technically...he'll obviosly come back) Overdose of enemy attacks Story: Chris C. The Hedgehog is a god-like hedgehog that decided to hang around on Earth since Heaven started to become so boring. He never pick fights...that often.  No picture? Click here: spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/250309/82247_The_Chris_Cast.jpg Names: (left to right, up to down) Chris Nevadi, Chris Wormistro, Chris Da Stick, Chris The Terrorist, Glassclock, Digital Glassclock, Glasslock, Digital Glasslock, Geared Glassclock, Nuclearn, Chris The Canadian. Powers: All - Melee weapons, guns, explosives, war weapons. Chris N. and Nuclearn - custom weapons; Chris W. - few special powers and custom weapons; Glassclock, Digital Glassclock and Geared Glassclock - The B, Clock Power, special powers; Glasslock and Digital Glasslock - The Glorton Powers, special powers; Chris The Terrorist - custom weapons, few special powers; Chris Da Stick - Flash powers, technology powers, few special powers; Chris The Canadian - custom weapons, patriotism, few special weapons. Weaknesses:(they are invincible like the main leader, so technically they don't die) Overdose of attacks, big blows, drugs Story: Chris Nevadi: He is a fighter and fugitive from the Sheriff's opression. Chris Wormistro: He is strategist and a cannibal. Chris Da Stick: He is a one-man everything man and is very polite. Chris The Terrorist: He is a terrorist and has a quiet side of him. Chris The Canadian: He's a happy-go-lucky patriot and veteran of the SPCC Civil War. Nuclearn: He is the Head of Criminals and Villian Of Evil (C.A.V.O.E) Glassclock: He is a clock controlist. Glasslock: He is a lock controlist. Geared Glassclock: He is a clock accountant. Digital Glasslock: He is a lock technologist. Digital Glassclock: He is a clock technologist. Sorry if you don't see the pictures and you have to click on the link.  Look...I do [ img ] spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/250309/82936_Chris_C._the_Hedgehog.jpg[ /img ] and it was supposed to appear in the preview...but it didn't...anyways enjoy looking at the links provided  |
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Post by rabiesisme on Mar 26, 2009 2:02:09 GMT -5
I just told you. Don't put spaces between the tags and your file name. [imgtag]linktofile[slashimgtag]
Quote my post, copy it, and then edit it in your first post.
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Post by McJesus on Mar 26, 2009 4:03:01 GMT -5
Might I say that you might do fine on this site, but your main is silly. You can't have all powers because that's called godmodding. Stick to a few things that don't make your brawlers stupidly powerful. You can have awesome powers, just don't pile them ontop of each other.
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Post by drychris1337 on Mar 26, 2009 19:38:05 GMT -5
Might I say that you might do fine on this site, but your main is silly. You can't have all powers because that's called godmodding. Stick to a few things that don't make your brawlers stupidly powerful. You can have awesome powers, just don't pile them ontop of each other. I guess the main guy shouldn't be a fighter..at least a part of the forum... |
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Post by NG-master the II on Mar 28, 2009 10:37:54 GMT -5
Ew, generic jpeg format Sonic the Hedgehog based character.
EDIT: Ugh godmodding, fuck.
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Post by destructin on Mar 28, 2009 11:21:22 GMT -5
Godmodding equals no good.
Sonic Fursona equals no good niether.
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Post by Psibat on Mar 28, 2009 14:20:07 GMT -5
Still godmodding btw
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Post by drychris1337 on Mar 28, 2009 14:35:10 GMT -5
What the fuck is it then? BTW...Super and Dark Super Chris C. aren't god-like...they're just more powerful.  |
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Post by Psibat on Mar 28, 2009 14:37:02 GMT -5
You have too many powers
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Post by drychris1337 on Mar 28, 2009 14:40:28 GMT -5
Which one? Super Speed, (Obviosly War Weapons and Melee Weapons - they don't count), Telekenisis, Elementbending, The power to turn into Super Chris C. and Dark Super Chris C. and Teleportation. isn't that much...or is it...this is do f*cking confusing. |
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Post by Yacazuma on Mar 28, 2009 14:40:47 GMT -5
But seriously, stop saving as JPEG.
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Post by drychris1337 on Mar 28, 2009 14:42:02 GMT -5
But seriously, stop saving as JPEG. I'll save as I want...why complain about something so pointless as that? |
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Post by Psibat on Mar 28, 2009 14:43:03 GMT -5
Which one? Super Speed, (Obviosly War Weapons and Melee Weapons - they don't count), Telekenisis, Elementbending, The power to turn into Super Chris C. and Dark Super Chris C. and Teleportation. isn't that much...or is it...this is do f*cking confusing. That could be split into 4 diff guys Element Bending Telekinesis, Teleportation Super Speed Transformation powers Also Jpegs ruin the quality |
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Post by Yacazuma on Mar 28, 2009 14:45:11 GMT -5
Exactly what Psi said.
Most brawlers tend to have one big simple power, instead of shit-loads of big powers. One power tends to be enough.
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Post by drychris1337 on Mar 28, 2009 14:49:24 GMT -5
Which one? Super Speed, (Obviosly War Weapons and Melee Weapons - they don't count), Telekenisis, Elementbending, The power to turn into Super Chris C. and Dark Super Chris C. and Teleportation. isn't that much...or is it...this is do f*cking confusing. That could be split into 4 diff guys Element Bending Telekinesis, Teleportation Super Speed Transformation powers Also Jpegs ruin the quality fuck THE JPEG AND STUFF....I really don't care. Alright...can the main guy at least have two of those powers...could "runs real fast" be considered godmodding...or "with the Chris Emeralds he becomes Super Chris C." I guess I'll have to throw away the element bending to someone else. |
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Post by destructin on Mar 28, 2009 15:33:32 GMT -5
The reason we want to save as PNG is because it makes the quality richer and more beautiful, Nobody wants to see a blurry picture: JPEG:  PNG:  |
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Post by Psibat on Mar 28, 2009 16:39:13 GMT -5
I'd say drop 2 more powers and you've got yourself a balanced character
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Post by NG-master the II on Mar 28, 2009 23:48:01 GMT -5
Hey asshole, you know nothing about this forum so shut the fuck up and stop complaining or get your ass handed to you.
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Post by Gront on Mar 29, 2009 4:13:01 GMT -5
First of all, stop censoring your speech, it makes you sound like a twelve year old who's afraid his mom will catch him cursing. Secondly, the no JPEGs thing is a forum-wide rule, so you need to shut the fuck up about that one. Third, the general rule is still ONE big power, possibly a secondary power or two. Fix pl0x.
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Post by McJesus on Mar 29, 2009 5:10:46 GMT -5
Okay listen up Chris. There's three things you need to know about Brawl.
First of all, you need to use .pngs. Jpegs compress your pictures and make them look bad. It's png or bust.
Second on the list is copyright infringement. Inspiration and similarities are one thing but having a direct copy of Sonic can land you, us and the Spanish Inquisition into hot water. If you want to ever be even considered for a game, movie or hot dicking cameo, you need to think of something more original.
Third and most important (well character infringement is probably illegal) is godmodding. Godmodding is basically saying your character is god-like, has tons of powers, can't die, and so on in that fashion. Saying you're more powerful is one thing but when your main can create things, teleport, transform into this and that amongst other things, you're being silly.
"I guess the main guy shouldn't be a fighter..at least a part of the forum... "
I would agree with that statement, you need to think of something more original.
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Post by drychris1337 on Apr 1, 2009 23:27:47 GMT -5
I know it's 13 characters...but I will use them all! Screw cutting down. I've already used 5.
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Post by Shackles on Apr 1, 2009 23:46:09 GMT -5
Ah, cool, you added Jessica. I don't think I've actually ever seen her do any real fighting in our series.
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Post by Gront on Apr 2, 2009 8:52:39 GMT -5
Jessica seems to be exactly like Nurse, who is was MVG's character. I recommend changing her up a bit.
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Post by drychris1337 on Apr 2, 2009 20:37:24 GMT -5
Jessica seems to be exactly like Nurse, who is was MVG's character. I recommend changing her up a bit. Elaborate....aka I don't see but the occupation that may seem that they're the same grenty ma boy. |
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Post by Gront on Apr 3, 2009 16:01:17 GMT -5
Jessica seems to be exactly like Nurse, who is was MVG's character. I recommend changing her up a bit. Elaborate....aka I don't see but the occupation that may seem that they're the same grenty ma boy. Call me anything involving the word "boy" again and I will rip your arms out of their sockets. I will not be called "boy" by someone who is most likely no less than five years younger than me. [/rage] They have the same occupation, and you're right, this wouldn't be a problem except for one thing; their occupation encompasses nearly ALL of their powers. They're not exactly the same character, but they're close enough. Also, I take personal offense to your self-proclaimed title of "Expert Creator." I don't know how everyone else on the site feels, but in my opinion you are FAR from an expert in creation. Your main character is a pitifully recolored clone of Sonic with "cosmic powers," which sound idiotically close to Chaos powers. Chris Nevadi is a madness ripoff with a green hat and coat crossed with Blinx the cat, Chris Wormistro is quite possibly the most poorly designed character to date (he's a fucking blob in a top hat), Chris Da Stick is obviously based off of the Animator vs Animation series, Chris the Terrorist is an idiotic idea that (I'm assuming) was inspired by Counter-Strike. And it gets worse from there. Clocks and Locks are inherently uncreative, even if you add a retarded "digital" status. Nuclearn is the most creative character on your roster, but that's not saying much, and he's obviously based on the clocks/locks, if a bit more loosely, and Chris the Canadian is a South Park ripoff. I could probably deal with most (if not all) of these blatant intellectual property thefts if you hadn't given ALL of your characters THE EXACT SAME POWERS. Sure, you gave them all a few unique powers, but if you can list more than "super strength" after "all my characters have the following powers:" you've fucked up in character design somewhere (and even the super strength is out of necessity because everyone has super strength here). At very least, your characters should be combined into a single character who can switch forms; they aren't unique enough to be their own separate characters. Personally, I think you should scrap your entire roster and start over with a unique character.[/wrath] |
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Post by Psibat on Apr 3, 2009 16:08:00 GMT -5
Want he said...
Yeah not very creative roster... Sorry...
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Post by drychris1337 on Apr 3, 2009 18:44:39 GMT -5
...just
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Post by rubyxoxo on Apr 3, 2009 19:14:24 GMT -5
...just Don't hate the guy because he's right. That's just wrong. :3 |
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Post by Psibat on Apr 4, 2009 6:50:12 GMT -5
I'd say he's the one person on this site not worthy of the title "Creator" because we all have original creations, although you appeared to be lacking at least one original one...
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Post by McJesus on Apr 4, 2009 7:11:21 GMT -5
That's enough of that.
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