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Post by ghost on Jun 19, 2009 20:36:14 GMT -5
First of all, if you have ABSOLUTELY no love or so much as interest in fan fiction, than I recommend you just hit BACK now. No, this is not one of my oh-so-silly threads where I introduce some crazy 4th-wall breaking cubism and abstractness that utterly develops a complicated, yet compelling narrative. This is just me calling out for a hand to help proofread something.
Okay, I've been working on the fan fiction I call "Left 4 Dead: Chapter Two". I'm going to submit it to FF.net soon when its completely finished, but I'm not so great with revisement and I don't feel as though I've done or gotten a good check of it yet. So rather than use FF's crappy "beta reader" system, I wondering if any of you would be interest in reading the first chapter and giving me advice/a review/anything that you stumble upon that doesn't quite make sense even if you think its just foreshadowing.
PM me if you want to proofread, no posts in this thread however, and I'll PM it back to you. Remember, it is still a work-in-progress.
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Post by McJesus on Jun 19, 2009 22:53:14 GMT -5
*slams hands on desk* SIGN ME UP.
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Post by themailman on Jun 20, 2009 7:50:13 GMT -5
*slams hands on desk* SIGN ME UP. You just made my coffee spill you asshole.
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Post by Psibat on Jun 20, 2009 8:46:35 GMT -5
Why does it say left 4 day?
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Post by ghost on Jun 20, 2009 11:14:24 GMT -5
Why does it say left 4 day? Because I meant to sat "Left 4 Gay" but my index finger slipped.
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