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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2009 2:30:47 GMT -5
I know, it's short, but it'll improve. Lights. Lights that stricken me from vision, save my judgement. I've tried...tried..so hard, but 'tis useless. The years of torment and remorse have taken hard upon me. At times, I question the value of my integrity. However, I can not just go and forget about my goal. I shall happen, even if I must sacrifice my -if not other's- life. I will avenge him. My god, he didn't deserve it. The avarice hungry sociopath will face his destiny...at my hands. Redemption comes soon, Father.
Chapter 0: Struggle If it was one thing that could of described Dominik Faust, it was the extreme love for music. Hard metal, to be specific. Most of the time, he couldn't even leave his rented apartment for two seconds without carrying along his large electric guitar, which with some training of the eye, could mimic the face of Satan. However, with the obsession to "rock hard", came only hardships in his welfare. Faust was usually the kind of person to spend all of his money on drugs and alcohol. Sometimes, he would even breathe the smokey cocaine on a 20 dollar bill, for kicks. But, in time, he would have regretted his wasteful lifestyle, dearly.
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Post by Gront on Jun 23, 2009 11:52:38 GMT -5
Wow... that was really short...
Didn't really get any inkling of what the plot would be, aside from a revenge plot. Sounds like the very beginning of an intro. Still, I like your writing style. MOAR BIGGER PL0X.
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Post by McJesus on Jun 23, 2009 11:54:34 GMT -5
You need to write more. Alot more.
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