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Post by John12346 on Sept 21, 2008 1:29:37 GMT -5
Chapter 1: The Entrance to The White Void "Wow, it looks like I'm almost there!" said John as he arrived at his final destination on the plane. John was and still is a treasure hunter of some reknown. He would travel to far off place to find the riches and glory. His latest conquest took him to an interesting place called the White Void, which, as he heard, had vast hordes of treasure hidden at every corner.  Before the plane landed, John took a recount of all of his stuff; a few bombs, his backpack, and his large hammer. Putting it all away, he gazed out the window again, wondering what surprises awaited him in this new world. A few hours later, the plane landed, and John got off of it. Looking around, John decided that his first order of business would be looking around for the general townspeople. His search led him to a large building with the letters 'G.M.' on it. Confused, John went inside, to find awe-inspiring battle between two people, with a huge crowd of people watching and yelling some sort of nonsense that made no sense and had no relation to the battle. In any case, John sat down and watched the battle unfold between a red man with a halo and a sort of jumpy-like kid with some sort of gun attached to his arm.  John also noticed the odd variety of people in the crowd; a scorpion-like fellow, a dog-wolf thing, a Scotswoman, etc. etc. etc. A month or so later, when the match finally ended, John took this opportunity to introduce himself. He searched out the leader of the White Void, and eventually found him; the dog-wolf thing he had seen from the battle. Nervously, John approached him and introduced himself to him. After introductions were exchanged, Balto-Boy, the leader, called for a group meeting for the induction of John. You see, new arrivals to the White Void were rare, so people around those parts tended to make a big deal about it. A few hours later, almost all of the people were rounded up, and Balto-Boy began the announcement over the murmurs and whispers. "My fellow Brawlers, we have a new player in the house! Please give a warm welcome to John!" During the applause, Balto-Boy signaled to John to take the microphone. He did so, and began his introduction. "Uhm, hey everyone! Nice to meet you all! My name is John, as you're all fully aware, and I'm in the area because of the rumors surrounding the vast treasures hidden in this land. I'm a professional treasure hunter, you see, and I'm here to do my best!" After that, a few confused murmurs and whispers were exchanged in the crowd, mostly questioning if he had any powers. Balto-Boy picked up on this and took the microphone back.  "Now, I'm sure you're all wondering what a person with no powers is doing here. I don't want any of you to get yourselves worried about this. John is our visitor, and newest member, so treat him like one of your own, alright?" In a still confused state, there is a unanimous agreement between the people. "Alright, John, enjoy your stay here, and make yourself at home," said Balto-Boy. "Alright, thanks a bunch for your help," said John. And with that, John prepared to begin his new life in the White Void... |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2008 1:34:00 GMT -5
Ah good introduction John, can't wait to see what comes next!
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Post by McJesus on Sept 21, 2008 2:19:15 GMT -5
I'm digging this, continue.
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Post by The Omnipresence on Sept 21, 2008 9:46:26 GMT -5
Before the plane landed, John took a recount of all of his stuff; a few bombs, his backpack, and his large hammer. .... They let you take bombs on a plane? Thats pretty amazing right there. |
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Post by rabiesisme on Sept 21, 2008 10:52:23 GMT -5
Before the plane landed, John took a recount of all of his stuff; a few bombs, his backpack, and his large hammer. .... They let you take bombs on a plane? Thats pretty amazing right there. They don't let you say bomb near a plane. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2008 19:32:07 GMT -5
They don't let you say bomb near a plane. |
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Post by Purplecat on Sept 21, 2008 21:21:52 GMT -5
They don't let you say bomb near a plane. you need to watch meet the parents |
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Post by atlasttrulyaghost on Sept 22, 2008 7:12:49 GMT -5
you need to watch meet the parents |
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Post by ghost on Dec 11, 2008 15:42:25 GMT -5
This story can't die. Mama said it can't die.
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Post by John12346 on Dec 20, 2008 22:44:14 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Setting in and Daily Life After bringing his suitcase and materials to his new home, which was free, since no form of money existed at the time, John proceeded to acquaint himself with the regulars around the town, meeting with many unique individuals, such as Sheepshifter, a boy who could summon sheep and turn into them, McJesus, the mysterious red man who John saw during the match a few days ago, Scorpion, a purplish guy who had the claws and tail of a scorpion, and many others.. Everyone there was extremely nice, and powerful. John grew an affection and a jealousy towards all of them. Adversely, the residents quickly grew fond of him. After a while, John seemed to truly be a part of society. John's examination of the town brought him to a somewhat crazy-looking boy, about 1 or 2 years older than him. John, who doesn't do too well with older people, walked up to him nervously, and said, "H-Hi there. My name is John I'm sort of new here, and seeing how the population around here it about 1000 or so, I'm trying to acquaint myself with the regulars around here." The boy, looking back at him, paused for a very tense minute, in thought, before blurting out, "HI THERE! I'm Madvideogamer, or MadGamer for short! Pleasure to meet you! :3" John nearly fell on the floor from the shock of that, but responded, "Wow, the people around here are so nice, compared to that dark world, called Newgrounds, that I came from..." Madgamer, looking at him, confused, said, "But everyone here hailed from Newgrounds. Didn't you know that?" "No," John responded. MadGamer, thinking to himself, said, "So you don't even know about the Great Brawl or anything like that..." "Uhm, I knew about it, but I don't really know the details of the event. What happened?" Upon hearing this, MVG pulled out his storybook and began reading the story of the Great Brawl. It involved how the original White Void began on Newgrounds, and how it originally started with pure, good intentioned souls, like McJesus, Trinidex, Madvideogamer, etc. For a little while, it seemed like a very hospitable place for Brawlers to duke it out. However, after a while, it began. There was no way the light and pureness of Brawl could ever be supported by the darkness that was Newgrounds...  Soon enough, the corruption began, with idiots of destruction, like bigjuicy, among others. They got in, and destroyed the White Void from the inside, leaving all of the pure Brawlers without a home. It seemed that all hope was lost, until Balto-Boy's powerful emotions gave rise to his light form, and a new Void, safe from the fools of Newgrounds, was created. The pure residents found refuge in this bright place, and made their new homes here, with Balto-Boy as their leader. After the tale was told, MadGamer and John conversed on other topics, until they decided to be friends from here on out. It seemed that they shared a lot in common, and wanted to share their experiences with each other. With this, a homedawg connection was formed between the two, which allowed the holders to hear and feel extreme emotion emissions from each other. In addition, they would always know where each other was, in case of emergency. "Well, I must be going, MadGamer. See you later," said John. John walked off and decided that his next state of affairs would be his job; searching for treasure. He decided to take any random adventure to start, just to get a safe measure on what he would have to endure for times ahead. John decided to trek to what appeared to be a relatively hard cave, by legend. When he got there...  It was a straight shot to the treasure as soon as he walked in! "What the shit? This isn't hard at all! The legend must've been wrong." John collected up the booty and left. Afterwards, John decided to travel to a new treasure zone, and when he got there, it was the same thing; a clean path to the loot. Cave after cave, John collected tons of easy, valuable treasures. While John was pretty much set for life, he still wasn't happy. "Where's the adventure? Where's the challenge? Argh!" John thought. John went home for the night, to see what he could do tomorrow about this dilemma. |
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Post by McJesus on Dec 21, 2008 1:52:08 GMT -5
Mysterious McJesus? Hmm..
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