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Post by spawner on Jan 2, 2008 14:32:35 GMT -5
oh, your story in incredible by the way.
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 2, 2008 15:02:14 GMT -5
Yeah and then i held a funeral. That will come up in the next chapter
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 3, 2008 12:05:09 GMT -5
Just got back, and have finally read all of it. AWESOME. keep writing
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 6, 2008 7:14:45 GMT -5
A bit of a quick chapter. I don't have time to make it a really long one.
Previously on 'Team Rofflez':
"W-where am I?" said Swordkill. He was just in white space. Everything was so bright, he couldn't see a thing. "Do not be afraid, child" "Who was that? Were am I?" shivered Swordkill "You, my child, are in heaven"
Chapter six You're a dead man, Swordkill
"Spawner, would you like to say a few words?" Asked Trin. "Erm... yeah" he approached the polished marble square, knelt down and tied Swordkill's bandanna around it. "I... I can't believe you're gone, man. First Conjon, then you... Team Rofflez has fallen apart." He got up, a tear rolled down his face "You were a good man, Swordkill. And wherever you are now, I am sure you are just the same."
"Holy hell! I'm not dead!" Swordkill got to his feet "I'm in the Super MS Paint Brawl! This is ridiculous!" "I know you're upset" came that mysterious voice "but I think that-" "To hell with what you think! I'm not dead!" "You're a dead man, Swordkill! You are dead and buried! There is a funeral happening right now for you!" "Really? You are god, right? So can you show me?" "ugh, everybody does this!" A whole appeared on the ground next to Swordkill. Through this strange window, he could see a bunch of people standing in a field, with nice, healthy grass. "I know them! That's McJesus, and Trin, and over there next to that white rock is Spawner!"
"I just don't know what it's gonna be like without you, buddy" Spawner said "It's gonna be real quiet around the castle" Everybody had left now. Spawner turned around and walked back towards his Lamborghini, and-
"Hand on! When the hell did Spawner get a Lambo?" "He's Spawner, he can-" "Oh yeah, right"
Spawner got in and sped away towards the ruins of Castle Rofflez.
"I can't take this" Screamed Swordkill "I can never see my best friend ever again till he's dead? that'll be in at least 60 years!" He jumped in the air and went through the window towards the earth, "No!" Shouted God, or whoever it was "If you land on earth something really bad will happen!" "like what happens when you cross the beams of a proton-pack?" "Worse!" "Worse than every sentient life on earth being incinerated to radioactive ash?" "No, but-" "good!" Swordkill was now speeding incredible fast towards earth. He inched himself sideways a bit until he was right above Spawner's Lamborghini. Tucking himself into an aerodynamic position, Swordkill picked up speed and crashed through the roof of the Lambo. Spawner looked round at Swordkill. His Jaw dropped, and he immediately began babbling like an idiot "What the? but you, I thought you were... you were!" "Eyes on the road!" Shouted Swordkill, but Spawner was in shock. "Drive, you idiot!" But it was too late. Just as Swordkill said that, they drove off the edge of a cliff. The car hit the beach and crushed up into practically a cube, crushing Swordkill and Spawner dead.
"look who's coming crawling back!" Laughed God "You've really done it now, mate!" Swordkill and Spawner were both lying on their backs, back in heaven. "What do you mean? What was that really bad thing that you said would happen?" Swordkill groaned. "An ancient prophecy states that when the balance between the living and the dead is unbalanced, an ancient demon will come and destroy the living world" "So it's exactly the same as what happens when you cross the beams of a proton pack?" "well, yes" "Come on, God! Give us another chance!" Shouted Spawner, now on his feet. Swordkill stared at him, wondering why he still isn't confused. "Yeah, God!" Shouted Swordkill "Give us a chance! At least let us have a go at this demon!" "No, I am not bringing you back to life again!" "oh, please! I'll make you banana pancakes for breakfast everyday for the rest of your life!" "I live forever" "well so do I, now that I'm dead!" "hmm.... You got yourself a deal, but lets make it a bit of fun, If you survive for at least twelve days, you can keep on living. If you die, you have to make me ten stacks instead of one every morning. Do we have a deal?" Swordkill turned to Spawner, who was already nodding. "We accept your terms, God!"
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 6, 2008 9:50:03 GMT -5
Ghostbusters!
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 6, 2008 10:34:00 GMT -5
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 8, 2008 14:44:42 GMT -5
Previously on 'Team Rofflez':
"hmm.... You got yourself a deal, but lets make it a bit of fun, If you survive for at least twelve days, you can keep on living. If you die, you have to make me ten stacks instead of one every morning. Do we have a deal?" Swordkill turned to Spawner, who was already nodding. "We accept your terms, God!"
Chapter Seven Apocalypse Now[/b] (please note: I couldn't think of any other title)
It was quiet. Too quiet. The white void was empty from brawling. It was just one of those boring days. But something was wrong, never has the white void succumb to anything as silent as this day. Spawner stood up on a rock and sniffed the air. "Nothing" he said quietly "I can't smell anything like the scent of blood" Although he has never mentioned it, Spawner has a very keen sense of smell. He could sniff a wet dog half a mile away. "Swordkill, where do you think everybody is?" "How should I know?" asked Swordkill, turning a page of the newspaper he was reading. "Where did you get that paper?" "Balto-boy" "Balto-boy? Where is he?" "He's over there. Dead." "DEAD!? What!?" Spawner looked round and saw the furry body of Balto-Boy lying in a small area of scorched ground. Surprisingly, the large black patch was shaped like an 'R'. Spawner ran over to him, and noticed that the wolf-man's eyes were rolled back into his head. "Why couldn't I have smelt his carcass?" "Spawner! Behind you!" Shouted Swordkill. Spawner turned around. He gasped. Approaching him, was a very ill RKthrilla. His face was green and his eyes were bloodshot. He ran at Spawner at an incredible pace, and put his hands around Spawner's neck. "RKthrilla! what are you doing?" He croaked "Swordkill! help!", but Swordkill was still sitting down with his newspaper, unable to hear Spawner's cries for help. His vision was growing hazy, he didn't know if he was going to survive. But he felt something cold against the top of his forehead. RKthrilla was pulled away from Spawner by Rabiesisme, who was covered in blood and green mucus. "Rabies! Whats up with RKthrilla?" Coughed Spawner, as he inhaled heavily. But Rabiesisme ignored him. He throw RKthrilla to the ground as his metal armed transformed into a gun-looking mechanism. "No! Don't shoot!" But just as he said that, Rabies aimed and fired. A bright light blew out of his arm as he emptied a clip into RKthrilla. "What have you do-" said Spawner, who was interrupted by: "Spawner!" he turned round and saw Swordkill being attacked by Balto-boy, looking rather like RKthrilla. His face was green, his eyes bloodshot, and his fur was all black and wiry. "Sword! Hang on!" called Rabies, running towards Swordkill with his arm pulled back, ready to strike Balto-boy. But something caught him before he could get there, it moved incredibly fast, like a bullet. Infact, it was Bulet, he had the same features as Balto-boy and RKthrilla. Rabiesisme, who was lying on the ground below Bulet, was tinkering with his metal arm as Bulet approached him. When he got close, Rabies launched his arm like a spring, blasting straight through Bulet's head, covering Rabies with even more green mucus. Swordkill took a swing at Balto-boy with his sword, but Balto's thick fur easily shielded him from the impact. "Swordkill! Duck!" Called Spawner. Swordkill ducked, and Rabies, who was standing behind Swordkill, punched Balto-boy, which sent him stumbling backwards onto the floor. Spawner ran up to Balto-boy until he was about 7 feet away, and threw a small metal sphere at him. It landed next to Balto, and immediately a large, transparent dodecahedron appeared around him. "Got him" muttered Rabies.
"Can you bring us up to speed?" Asked Swordkill "What was wrong with those guys?" Rabies, Spawner and Swordkill were sitting in small den that Rabies had built. "Alright. If you want to go to the bathroom, go now. I don't want any interruptions during my story" He said, before looking at Swordkill and Spawner in turn. "Good. Three days ago a man came to the white void. He requested that everybody would stop brawling, or he would kill us all. Of course we beat him up and left him miles away from the brawl. But then it started. Rodents and other vermin began appearing, hundreds of flies began flying about, and soon, everybody was covered with diseases. The symptoms began as just coughs and puking now and then, but it got worse. They began losing their minds. Not listening to anything. Just staring at things that were not there. Then it got serious. They began attacking people. They used their finger nails and their teeth. They killed them and devoured their flesh. They became zombies" "So what was with that big 'R' we saw where Balto-boy was lying?" asked Spawner "Hang on! I'll come to that!" "ok, continue" "So, where was I? Ah, yes. The Zombies. The virus spread around until me and a few others were the only ones left uninfected. Now you are here. That's good. More survivors. So, after about half of the brawlers turned into zombies, that guy came back and told us of how it was him who released the plague. We tried to get him for that, we charged at him and attacked, but he was too strong. He blew us all away, and killed some of us by shooting us with a sort of laser, the beam was shaped like an 'R'. Those who survived ran away. We were hiding in this hole until you came along. Two men falling from the sky would attract plenty of zombies, so I came to save you.". He sipped at his cappuccino. "So, how do you intend on surviving in here?" Asked Swordkill, still examining Balto-boy, who was trapped in the dodecahedron in the corner of the room. "Well, it was gonna be seriously hard, we have limited tins of food. But now we have you." Rabies turned to Spawner and smiled. "Now we don't have to worry about food" "Rabies!" came a voice from the other room. CaptainChip's head popped out of the door. "It's Trin! He's been infected!" "What? Impossible! We injected him with the inoculation! He can't be infected!" "Well he is! I don't know how but he is!" Rabies turned to Spawner and Swordkill "wait here, I'll be back in a min-" "Graaagh!" CaptainChip was lying on the ground, a large gash on his forehead. Standing next to his unconscious body was Trin, but he was on of the infected. He cried out again, "GRAAAGH!" Before Rabies could change his arm to a gun, Trin pounced on him and began violently scratching Rabies's face with his fingernails. Swordkill unsheathed his sword and ran at Trin, hoping he could stop him from killing Rabies. He pulled the cord at the end, and the chain began spinning. He kicked Trin in the chest, sending him to the floor next to Rabies, and then he stabbed the running ChainSword into Trin's chest, killing him. "looks like we're gonna have to be careful from now on" Gasped Rabies "We don't want that to happen again" "so," Began Swordkill "Who else has survived this 'Zombie Apocalypse, eh?" "I'll show you"
When they got into the 'living room', They saw something that none of them wanted to see. "Oh God..." muttered Spawner. Body part were everywhere. a pile of heads, the brains scooped out, was lying on the coffee table. The only living person in there was crouched in the corner. "They were all slaughtered! Oh God! I tried to warn them! They didn't listen!" They looked round and noticed that it was GrimScott. "what the hell happened!?" shouted Rabies Grimscott looked up, tears were streaming from her eyes. "The Omnipresence said he had created a perfect medicine. It would stop you from turning into a *sniff* zombie. Trin tried it and he *sob* went insane!" "well then" said Swordkill "This is a world with four survivors in a Zombie Apocalypse. We must work together to ensure our survival. This is definitely going in my book" "So what now then?" asked Grimscott, getting up. "well," said Swordkill "I have an idea, it may incinerate us all, but it's worth a shot" He looked at Spawner and smiled "Oh no." "Oh yes, mate"
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 8, 2008 15:54:48 GMT -5
Did all of this really happen?
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Post by spawner on Jan 8, 2008 16:09:46 GMT -5
Yup. All in the NG thread, with a hell of extra story details.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 8, 2008 16:11:58 GMT -5
But then how did everyne come back?
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Post by spawner on Jan 8, 2008 16:14:32 GMT -5
I dunno. It was a subplot, everyone jumped in, when the thread was locked it stopped
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 8, 2008 16:19:47 GMT -5
I dunno. It was a subplot, everyone jumped in, when the thread was locked it stopped That question will be answered in chapter 8
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 8, 2008 19:02:42 GMT -5
Cool story
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 9, 2008 16:56:16 GMT -5
Previously on 'Team Rofflez':
"well then" said Swordkill "This is a world with four survivors in a Zombie Apocalypse. We must work together to ensure our survival. This is definitely going in my book" "So what now then?" asked Grimscott, getting up. "well," said Swordkill "I have an idea, it may incinerate us all, but it's worth a shot" He looked at Spawner and smiled "Oh no." "Oh yes, mate"
Chapter 8 The quest for your life[/b] (WARNING: the following chapter contains HUGE Halo 3 references and/or spoilers)
"Where are we going, guys?" Groaned GrimScott "My feet are killing me!" "We're nearly there!" Shouted back Swordkill. They group had been on the move since the day before, when Swordkill got the idea. He didn't want to tell Grimscott and Rabiesisme what it was, because he knew they would disagree. Spawner and Swordkill were jogging on ahead, whilst Rabies was behind, and Grimscott was quite far behind. "That's it! I'm stopping to rest" "You can't quit now!" Shouted Spawner "We are really close!" infact, at that moment... "Oooff!" Spawner bumped into a wall. But not just any wall, a wall of psychic energy. "What the... we made it!" Beyond the see-through wall was just pitch black. "The black void" Muttered Rabies "I've heard of this place, but I thought it was just a myth... We aren't going in are we?" "You betcha!" Laughed Swordkill "You didn't think we would just stop here, did you?" he walked on by the side of the wall until he gripped a knob sticking out of the wall. "This is it" He said, and he pulled the knob, opening a surprisingly huge door. A great cloud of smoke wafted into the white void. But then, a man fell onto Swordkill, who threw him off right away. "Ugh, what the..." The chap said, sounding like he had just woken up. "where am I? Why is it so bright?" He brought himself to his feet, and dusted himself off. He was a rather tall man, he had long, brown hair and bright green eyes. "Despawner, at your service!" "Wait!" Interrupted Spawner "did you say your name was 'Despawner'?" "Yes, that's what I said!" "What a fun coincidence! My name is Spawner!" "No! Really? Awesome!" He cleared his throat "So... What brings you to my world?" "Your world!?" Came a loud voice from the doorway. "That's an insult to our ancestors!" A Blond girl came running out from the smoke and tackled Despawner to the ground. Surprisingly, the tiny red bowler hat on her head stayed in place, even when she was on the ground. "Get off me, JollyBrit!" Shouted Despawner. Suddenly, her eyes mysteriously vanished from her face. "What the...?" She rolled onto her back and tried to get up. "Now that's not fair" said Spawner. He waved his arm and a new pair of eyes appeared on her face. "Who are you then?" "I'm JollyBrit!" "JollyBrit?" Laughed Grimscott "What a goofy name!" "Hey, that's not nice!" JollyBrit growled, and pointed a gun at GrimScott. "Come on, we'll be having none of that!" Came a rough, low pitched voice. "Who's there?" Asked Rabies, when suddenly a puddle he had his foot in began rising up and forming the shape of a man. "Woah!" Shouted Rabies, he quickly pulled his foot away. "Who are you?" "Difficult." The water-man said "I have many names, what will you call me?" "How about Hydro-man?" Suggested Spawner. "No way! Just call me liquid! That's my birth name. "Whatever you say, Hydro-man!" Smirked Rabies. He got a quick slap in the face, leaving a bleeding slice in his face. "Hey! Back away or I blow your fucking head off!" "Hey, you guys just chill!" Shouted Swordkill, hurrying between them. "now, Hydro-man-" he got a quick slice too, not as bad as Rabies's though "Alright! Liquid!" He wiped his cheek "can you help us find somebody?" "And who might that be?" "Me, I think" Everybody looked round. Somebody was standing quite far away from them. He had a shaved head, he was wearing blue jeans and a pair of shades. He had no shirt on, which exposed a number of piercings on his body. He slowly approached the group. "The name's Sticky" He said, throwing his lit cigarette out of his mouth and onto the floor. "Sticky Harrison" "Ah! Sticky!" Smiled Swordkill "We've been looking for you!" "And we've been looking for you" "I have bad news" "So do I" They both looked at each other for a second, before saying together "Zombie Apocalypse" "We need the STOS" Said Swordkill. "We need it more" Said Sticky. "Where is it?" "What's the access code?" "Wait, wait, wait!" Interrupted Despawner. "What are you two on about? We're all lost" "The only way we're gonna defeat the Zombies and the mysterious 'Demon'" Started Swordkill, speaking rather fast "is if we use the Super Turbo OMFG Sword. We found it together, me and Sticky, when we were young. He knows where the temple containing the sword is, and I know the access code to get into the temple." "Well then, if you and him work together, then we can all use it to destroy the zombies in both worlds!" "...Good point" Said Sticky, lighting another cigarette "Do we have a deal, Swordkill?" "Sure thing. Let's shake on it" They both shook hands, and then got down to business.
They all got down to their knees and observed a map that Sticky was drawing in the dirt. "So, to get to the temple." Began Sticky "First we have to go through the black void. Then, through to the Fab void. Then through marble zone. Then through the McSahara Desert. Then We reach the temple" "Alrighty then, let's move out!"
Later on that day, after the team had crossed the black void, and where now in the fab void, an obsticle stood. At the bottom of a large hill, millions of dancing, prancing, pink guys swarmed. "What are we gonna do now, then?" Pondered Liquid alloud. "Watch this!" Smiled JollyBrit, she ran, headfirst into the crowd, screaming at the top of her voice "OUT OF MY WAY, CREEPS!" However, when she was amoungst the crowd of Fabs, the swarmed her. They pulled her to the ground. The protagonists could only watched as JollyBrit was pulled appart... and became one of them. She began skipping about merrily. "This is a sick place" spat Rabies. "I have a plan" Said Liquid. He stood up tall on a rock and threw his hands in the air. As he moved his hands sideways, the river of Fabs parted, giving way for the group to pass through. "Great! Come on, Liquid! let's move!" Despawner smiled "No, I must stay here, or the river will once again flow. I must stay behind" "suit yourself!"
The team progressed through the Fab Void with ease from there, but another obsticle emerged in the marble zone. A volcanoe eruption. A river of lava flowed between them, and the border to The McSahara desert. "We're gonna have to jump" Said Despawner. "Now's our only chance, before the river bursts its banks. "Alright, everybody! on the count of three, jump! One.... Two... three!" Of course, one or two had to be chicken and not jump. And they were Grimscott and Despawner. "Jump, guys!" Shouted Swordkill. "erm... alright then..." Stuttered Despawner. The river was prety thick now, so this was his and Grimscott's last chance. They both took a step back, but then only Despawner leapt, Grimscott was once again too chicken. "I'm gonna make it!" Shouted despawner, but just as he said that, a huge dragonic sea serpent threw itself out of the lava and snatched him in its mouth, before plunging back into the lava. Then, Grimscott screamed. "I'm not jumping! I'm not jumping! I'm not jumping!" "fine, you just head back to Liquid, we'll continue!" "Okay!" she shouted.
The McSahara desert. So called becuase it has a large number of deserted fast-food restaurants in it. The wasteland was once brimming with fat people. This is not a good place for four fully grown men. They wandered the desert until they saw it. on a large hill. An illeberate temple made from shining metal. "We've made it" gasped Sticky At the main gate, a hooded man stood. He said in a low, croaky voice "What is the passcode?" Swordkill boldly stepped forward and confidently said "Mama Luigi!" "That... is correct. You may enter." Swordkill looked round and saw that Rabies, Spawner and Sticky were all smirking. "I wasn't the one who thought it up! Yeesh!" "Yeah, you guys go on inside, I'll stay out here and see if Liquid Or what's her face, erm... that Grimgirl come back" Said Sticky, lighting yet another cigarette. "Sure, whatever" Said Swordkill
Inside the temple, it was just as illaberate. Large pillars stood, encrusted with jewels and gold. In the center, three more hooded men stood, but one was wearing more jewelery and a large headdress. He looked at Rabies, Spawner and Swordkill. "Leave us" he said to his two lackeys. They left quickly without a word. "So," he began "You have come here for the sword, I presume." He took a step to the side, revealing a very beautiful sword lying on an altar. "Yes, we have come for the sword" Announced Spawner "And why do you require it?" "To destroy a race of flesh-eating zombies" "This sword cannot destroy something individual. It's potential energy has been stored for years. If you release it now, it will wipe everything from the voids." "Well its worth a shot!" said Swordkill, sounding rather serious. They began running towards the altar. "No!" Shouted the monk. Red lasers burst from his eyes, narrowly missing Rabies. "This is my Sword! I will not let you mis-use it like this!" Rabies configured his arm to a gun, and aimed it at the monk, but he was too slow. The beam came and got him, sending him flying against the wall. He bounced off and slid across the polished floor. The monk jumped on the altar, grabbing the sword. "Swordkill..." muttered Rabies "Kick his ass." Rabies's metal arm slid off his real arm. Swordkill knew what he had to do. He slipped it on, it fitted itself into the shape of his hand. He could feel all the mechanics of the arm working through his body. He changed the gun to a large laser. "Spawner! Duck!" Shouted Swordkill. Spawner ducked, narrowly dodging another eye-beam. "Alright" grinned Swordkill "Time to kick ass, and chew bubble gum. And I'm all out of gum" He pointed his laser arm at the monk and fired a long red beam. The monk screamed, and began shouting something. His voice sounded cripled, though. Swordkill released another wave of energy at him. The monk began to spaz. He was almost having a seizure standing up. Swordkill released a final blow, blowing the monk to bits. He ran over to the altar and picked up the sword. He turned to Rabies "You okay man?" "Nope. I think everywhere's broken." "I'll save you, no worries." "No. I'll just give you one more to worry about." He grabbed the blade of the sword. "Send me out with a bang." "... sure..." He raised the sword into the air, a brilliant burst of yellow light blasted out from the sword and went through a hole in the roof. "Get sticky, we're leaving!" Shouted Swordkill. He followed Spawner out of the main entrance, to see an unconsious monk, and Sticky going through a wallet. "Let's go! Now, Sticky!" Shouted Swordkill. "We need to get out of the voids before they are obliterated!" "But what about Liquid and that Scotish Chick?" "We can't save them, we have a few minutes! Spawner?" "Yes?" Replied Spawner "Get us a spaceship, now!" "Sure thing!" A purple flash appeared, and in the light there was a brilliant looking spaceship. Looking a bit like an aeroplane crossed with a rocket. "Get in!" Shouted Swordkill "No need to shout" smirked Sticky "Do it!" "Okay! okay!"
The Ship set off. They looked down on the planet bellow. It was all glowing red, ready to blow. Sticky took to the Pilots seat, whilst Swordkill and Spawner were in the cargo hold. "If we don't make it..." began Spawner. "We'll make it." Finished Swordkill. "It's been an honour working with you, Sword."
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Post by spawner on Jan 9, 2008 17:15:35 GMT -5
Wow, just Wow. your just epic sword. just feaking epic.
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Post by madvideogamer on Jan 9, 2008 18:26:47 GMT -5
This story is so... Amazing.
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 10, 2008 2:46:14 GMT -5
erm... Thanks, guys! I didn't know this story was that good!
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 14, 2008 15:18:47 GMT -5
Previously on 'Team Rofflez':
The Ship set off. They looked down on the planet bellow. It was all glowing red, ready to blow. Sticky took to the Pilots seat, whilst Swordkill and Spawner were in the cargo hold. "If we don't make it..." began Spawner. "We'll make it." Finished Swordkill. "It's been an honour working with you, Sword."
Chapter 9 Crash landing
Swordkill's head was hurting like hell. He felt like he had been up all night drinking. He was surrounded by a bright light. He had flown off from the white void with Sticky and Spawner. And, where could they be? Were they alright? He couldn't do anything in his position, the light was too intense. All he new was he was lying down. Lying on something cold and hard, like metal. "Swordkill... Swordkill..." What was that? Swordkill was thinking, he couldn't open his eyes wide enough to see who it was, due to the light. They spoke again "Swordkill... The sword... temple..." That was all he could make out, he wasn't hearing too well either. He recognized the voice. 'Who is that?' He was thinking. 'I know that voice! Who is it?' He tried to open his eyes. The light was dimming now, he could just about make out that somebody was leaning over him. "Swordkill... he was a..." He knew that voice! He could see the person in his head, with his blue jeans, and black sunglasses. But he couldn't think of his name. "... wake up... Sticky..." Sticky! That was it! Sticky! Sticky was speaking to him, his voice sounded different though, like he was much younger. Sticky spoke again, Swordkill could hear him much clearer this time. "Swordkill, wake up you... You can't... Get those guy outside..." He tried to open his eyes again. He saw another person by the side of Sticky. He tried to make out who it was. Could it be Spawner? "We need to get out of... the whole place... want to die, do you?" Swordkill heard that Sticky's voice became impatient. He tried to say something, he open his mouth and spat out: "Sticky, I-" But he had to stop, an incredible pain came from his throat. "No need to... just... come on you..." said Sticky. Swordkill felt somebody grab his arms, and then he was being dragged. He was turned around and pulled quickly towards the opposite direction he thought he was facing. He thought Sticky was dragging him, but as he was being dragged, he heard Sticky shout: "No you... get away from him! I will... you jerk!" Swordkill opened his eyes again, this time it wasn't anywhere near as bright. Infact, it was very dark.
Swordkill sat up, he wasn't being dragged. His head wasn't hurting anymore, and neither was his throat. It was very dark. It was night. But it can't be night, he was inside the spaceship. It had all been a dream. But it was so real, he could feel all that pain. He got up out of his small room on the ship, and saw that half the ship was missing! from where he was standing, he could see the sky, as if he was on earth. the wall had been violently torn off, revealing wires coming out of the end of the wall. Looks like the ship had crashed.
He made his way to the bridge, where Sticky was asleep, leaning over a panel of big red buttons. "Hey Sticky!" He called to Sticky. "W-what do you w-want?" Replied Sticky, half asleep. "I'm going out, I'll be back in a few minutes, or an hour or two" "Yeah, yeah. Whatever"
The ship, well, actually half the ship, had landed on a small island in the middle of a huge ocean. No land could be seen on the horizon, no matter which direction Swordkill looked. Spawner was sleeping in the cargo-hold. So that means that Spawner was in some other place, maybe his half had sunk into the ocean? But Swordkill knew that Spawner was alive. He could almost sense it.
And he had to find him, fast.
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Post by spawner on Jan 14, 2008 15:27:26 GMT -5
Awesome. Short but sweet
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 18, 2008 15:56:29 GMT -5
His hair continued to fall infront of his eyes, and he had to blow it back upwards. Spawner has HAIR?
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 18, 2008 15:58:37 GMT -5
His hair continued to fall infront of his eyes, and he had to blow it back upwards. Spawner has HAIR? An INCREDIBLE mistake was made. I didn't mean to post. So erase that from your memory, please.
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 18, 2008 15:59:44 GMT -5
An INCREDIBLE mistake was made. I didn't mean to post. So erase that from your memory, please. You can't cover the truth!
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Post by spawner on Jan 18, 2008 16:00:44 GMT -5
His hair continued to fall infront of his eyes, and he had to blow it back upwards. Spawner has HAIR? Yeah i have hair, ive just never drawn it. Maybe i should start, i just dont know a good style thats quick and easy to draw, thats not crap looking.
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 18, 2008 16:02:25 GMT -5
Yeah i have hair, ive just never drawn it. Maybe i should start, i just dont know a good style thats quick and easy to draw, thats not crap looking. Well if you can't decide on a style, you can draw new hair every pic you make, you can spawn hair too can't you?
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Post by spawner on Jan 18, 2008 16:03:50 GMT -5
You have a point there.
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 18, 2008 16:04:20 GMT -5
According to McJesus's character selection screen, Spawner has thick, grey hair.
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Post by spawner on Jan 18, 2008 16:04:47 GMT -5
But the problem with a new hair-do every post would be, if someone draws me in a poster... see what i mean ?
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 18, 2008 16:06:09 GMT -5
But the problem with a new hair-do every post would be, if someone draws me in a poster... see what i mean ? Well decide on one style for posters, and draw hair different on everything else.
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Post by spawner on Jan 18, 2008 16:08:01 GMT -5
Too complicated. People will forget and wonder, whos that guy ?
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 18, 2008 16:10:39 GMT -5
Too complicated. People will forget and wonder, whos that guy ? I'm sure most of the people here know you.
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