Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 11, 2008 22:25:07 GMT -5
Chapter1
Kevin was once only a young boy happily growing up in a mountain rural village,his father was killed in the mines when he was 6, since then his mother worked as a basket weaver to suport the family. Kevin always dreamed of being an soldier, One day he heard some commotion going on outside the village wall one day, he climbed a stack of crates to the wall the gate gaurds were arguing witha group of about 12 people on horses, they were always carrying weapons and were demanding to be let in, the gaurds refused. Shortly after the starngers rode off saying they would be back, Kevin slept that night wondering who those people were and why they need in so bad. Kevin woke up the next day, and decided to go and play hide and seek with his friends in the market, when he heard the warning call, he then heard the horn be drowned out by the clash of metal. The gate guards had engaged the raiders in combat, unfortunately they were no match and were quickly slaughtered. Kevin watched as the raiders swarmed in killing everyone, he froze in shock as he seen his best friend's head being crushed by the raiders horses hooves. The chaos eventually dies out and Kevin slowly climbed out of his hiding place, it was just a sea of blood flooding the ground. Kevin stumbled around the forest outside his village in shock and denial when he saw a small red creature killing a rabbit, Kevin walked over and the small creature turned to him and grinned.
"Hello Kevin......"
Kevin stepped back wary of who this thing was and how it knew his name.
"How do you know my name!?" He asked the red creature
"I know ALL about you... And I can help you extract revenge."
Kevin suddenly started paying attention.
"Ho..How?"
"Close your eyes."
Kevin closed his eyes, he felt a burning sensation and he opened his eyes his vision was red and blurry he could feel his energy draining from his entire body, he blacked out.
Kevin woke up in a clearing five minutes later he stumbled to his feet holding his head.
"Ugh...Where am I..?"
Kevin stumbled up the hill and saw a small camp he was about to walk down when he saw it. That mark, it was the raiders! The rage grew inside him he could feel that sensation flooding back, but this time it felt..... Good.
Kevin walked down to the camp and confronted the group, they looked at him and then they looked at each other. Suddenly one lunged at him with a curved sickle, Kevin's skin started to crawl and he grabbed the raider by the throat, he didn't have any control anymore, the raiders watched on as Kevin crushed the aggressive raiders head within his hands.
The rest of that night was a blur of blood, chaos and destruction. Kevin stumbled into the forest again after that. He collapsed as the demon left his body, taking all his energy with him. Kevin felt his body weaken and he knew he was going to die, he was about to take his final breath when he felt a warm sensation he felt a hand on his back and his energy suddenly rushed back to him, he raised from the ground, and saw light in the clouds fade away. Kevin was about to walk back and try to rebuild his village when there was an explosion and Kevin fell down....Down... Until he landed with a thud on a hard floor. He saw other people fighting for no apparent reason. He stood up and quickly realized the solid reality he would have to fight, or he would be beaten to death.
[e]The explosion was McJesus landing I just had to use it.
Kevin was once only a young boy happily growing up in a mountain rural village,his father was killed in the mines when he was 6, since then his mother worked as a basket weaver to suport the family. Kevin always dreamed of being an soldier, One day he heard some commotion going on outside the village wall one day, he climbed a stack of crates to the wall the gate gaurds were arguing witha group of about 12 people on horses, they were always carrying weapons and were demanding to be let in, the gaurds refused. Shortly after the starngers rode off saying they would be back, Kevin slept that night wondering who those people were and why they need in so bad. Kevin woke up the next day, and decided to go and play hide and seek with his friends in the market, when he heard the warning call, he then heard the horn be drowned out by the clash of metal. The gate guards had engaged the raiders in combat, unfortunately they were no match and were quickly slaughtered. Kevin watched as the raiders swarmed in killing everyone, he froze in shock as he seen his best friend's head being crushed by the raiders horses hooves. The chaos eventually dies out and Kevin slowly climbed out of his hiding place, it was just a sea of blood flooding the ground. Kevin stumbled around the forest outside his village in shock and denial when he saw a small red creature killing a rabbit, Kevin walked over and the small creature turned to him and grinned.
"Hello Kevin......"
Kevin stepped back wary of who this thing was and how it knew his name.
"How do you know my name!?" He asked the red creature
"I know ALL about you... And I can help you extract revenge."
Kevin suddenly started paying attention.
"Ho..How?"
"Close your eyes."
Kevin closed his eyes, he felt a burning sensation and he opened his eyes his vision was red and blurry he could feel his energy draining from his entire body, he blacked out.
Kevin woke up in a clearing five minutes later he stumbled to his feet holding his head.
"Ugh...Where am I..?"
Kevin stumbled up the hill and saw a small camp he was about to walk down when he saw it. That mark, it was the raiders! The rage grew inside him he could feel that sensation flooding back, but this time it felt..... Good.
Kevin walked down to the camp and confronted the group, they looked at him and then they looked at each other. Suddenly one lunged at him with a curved sickle, Kevin's skin started to crawl and he grabbed the raider by the throat, he didn't have any control anymore, the raiders watched on as Kevin crushed the aggressive raiders head within his hands.
The rest of that night was a blur of blood, chaos and destruction. Kevin stumbled into the forest again after that. He collapsed as the demon left his body, taking all his energy with him. Kevin felt his body weaken and he knew he was going to die, he was about to take his final breath when he felt a warm sensation he felt a hand on his back and his energy suddenly rushed back to him, he raised from the ground, and saw light in the clouds fade away. Kevin was about to walk back and try to rebuild his village when there was an explosion and Kevin fell down....Down... Until he landed with a thud on a hard floor. He saw other people fighting for no apparent reason. He stood up and quickly realized the solid reality he would have to fight, or he would be beaten to death.
[e]The explosion was McJesus landing I just had to use it.
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