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Post by SwordKill on Feb 18, 2008 16:02:45 GMT -5
In this thread, you may post storys that you never plan on finishing, or storys in the making. Ones that you just think of all of a sudden, and you must write it down. Also, the 'n shiz' part is because you can also help people out. EXAMPLEZ: Somebody is writing a story, they post what they have so far, and everyone helps out and tells that somebody how to improve, what is good about it, and a mark out of ten.
I was going to post a story about a caveman rock band, but I don't feel up to it at the moment. I PROMISE YOU IT TOMMORROW
NEW RULE:
Storys need to be MSPB related. If it has nothing to do with MSPB, then bugger off.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Feb 21, 2008 17:25:01 GMT -5
Febuary 21, 5:30 PM
Kid loses his blanket, looks for it, and finds it in the kitchen.
Wow, I amaze my self sometimes!
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Post by bulet on Feb 21, 2008 18:01:11 GMT -5
Febuary 21, 5:30 PM Kid loses his blanket, looks for it, and finds it in the kitchen. Wow, I amaze my self sometimes!  INCREDIBLE! ;D |
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Post by Yacazuma on Feb 21, 2008 20:39:08 GMT -5
Febuary 21, 5:30 PM Kid loses his blanket, looks for it, and finds it in the kitchen. Wow, I amaze my self sometimes! So you watch Family Guy as well? |
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Post by Ele Mantel on Feb 21, 2008 21:22:12 GMT -5
Febuary 21, 5:30 PM Kid loses his blanket, looks for it, and finds it in the kitchen. Wow, I amaze my self sometimes! So you watch Family Guy as well? Indeed. /happeh |
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Post by kevmcg1 on Feb 22, 2008 14:14:06 GMT -5
So you watch Family Guy as well? Indeed.  Family Guy is the pwn. ;D |
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Post by rabiesisme on Feb 22, 2008 14:30:48 GMT -5
Family guy sucks.
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Post by kevmcg1 on Feb 22, 2008 14:32:24 GMT -5
Wait... What? Family Guy is my favourite animated show...  |
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Post by jallo on Feb 23, 2008 11:00:05 GMT -5
I just wanna say I made the 1000th post here.
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Post by Yacazuma on Feb 25, 2008 0:25:21 GMT -5
Just. Simply. FUCKING. No. |
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Post by ProDuce on Feb 25, 2008 7:31:36 GMT -5
ok this was a story i was working on, but i had no idea what to do with it, so i gave up. lol.
Quickly the man ran as fast as he could through the thick and dark forest, the trees were bending inwards and looked old and weathered, the bark peeling off in places. At his feet were a few wolves chasing him down like their prey, The rain smashing down on him and the forest, as the night became darker. With out looking he tripped over, rolling down a hill smashing onto the floor breaking a few branches below him. Quickly he rolled onto his feet leaping into the air running again, the wolves leaping after him down the hill. Behind him he could hear the screams from the village he had just ran from. There was a storm in the air, before he could react lightning struck a tree in front of him, quickly it fell right in front of him only just missing him. His eyes were covered by a bright light as the lightning struck the tree, everywhere he looked he could see the bright light. Looking back he had lost the wolves by changing direction but now he had himself trapped in a ring of fire that the storm had caused. With no way out he pulled him self up onto the a tree that had not yet been caught by the fire. Quickly kicking off the tree he leapt through the flames, passing through them quickly so he didn't catch alight. Rolling to the floor with a reaction as quick as lightning he landed on his knees with no pain at all. Rising to his feet he looked around, "I have to get out." He said to him self, quickly running through the forest that was burning he looked back, the wolves were tailing him again but this time there was something with them, a shaded figure, dressed in what looked like a black robe that drifted down from his hood to the floor, but the rain was blocking out most of what he could see. Quickly the man leapt into the air getting further away from the shaded figure landing out of view from the wolves and the shaded figure. Looking into the air then behind him he smirked, "Telepotio." He said smirking still, a thick cloud of smoke covered him then he disappeared as if he was never there. Quickly the figure moved to where the man had leapt, looking around feeling the air he sensed nothing. The rage inside him built up as he shouted, "FIND HIM, NOW! DON'T LET HIM ESCAPE!" He shouted using the rage inside him. The wolves scampered into different directions, sniffing the air, howling as if they had lost their prey.
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Post by ProDuce on Feb 25, 2008 11:29:19 GMT -5
what ya think?  |
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Post by Fan of the word quickly on Feb 25, 2008 13:47:40 GMT -5
what ya think? It's amazing. |
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Post by Yacazuma on Feb 25, 2008 18:43:22 GMT -5
what ya think? One word and one word only. Paragraphs. |
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Post by Ele Mantel on Feb 25, 2008 21:05:14 GMT -5
what ya think? THATISONEHELLOFAWALLOFTEXT LEARNTOSPACEOUTYOURPARAGRAPHSLOL |
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Post by McJesus on Feb 26, 2008 5:57:58 GMT -5
Never ending story! Just continue from the last person who posted.
I'm.. a simple guy. Never wanted any trouble, never wanted any responsibility. Just wanted to coast through life and chill out for the most of it. Guess that all changed when I got hit by a car. This is the story.. the biography.... no.. the legacy of my life. This is the story of McJesus.
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Post by spawner on Feb 26, 2008 10:38:35 GMT -5
Wait, what ? You want us to do your story ?
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Post by Ele Mantel on Feb 26, 2008 11:45:51 GMT -5
Never ending story! Just continue from the last person who posted.I'm.. a simple guy. Never wanted any trouble, never wanted any responsibility. Just wanted to coast through life and chill out for the most of it. Guess that all changed when I got hit by a car. This is the story.. the biography.... no.. the legacy of my life. This is the story of McJesus. When I got hit... My life changed forever, but I managed to survive. Its not untill later when I found out what had truly happened that night. |
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Post by spawner on Feb 26, 2008 13:43:37 GMT -5
Will Stickman was my name. It started off as just another day. Exept for the fact that I died, in a car crash.
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Post by SwordKill on Feb 27, 2008 10:46:23 GMT -5
Will Stickman was my name. It started off as just another day. Exept for the fact that I died, in a car crash. But I didn't die, it was some other guy who LOOKED like me. So, there I was, in the Tesco down the road, when who do bump into? Jack Thompson. |
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Post by SwordKill on Feb 27, 2008 10:58:18 GMT -5
Actually Swordkill, he did die. And i have a drawing,Drawn by McJesus put together by me. Also, its really long. I know, I was just trying to have some variety |
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Post by spawner on Feb 27, 2008 10:59:52 GMT -5
But yeah, just pointing it out.
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Post by SwordKill on Feb 27, 2008 14:20:31 GMT -5
But yeah, just pointing it out. BTW, I don't want to scroll down a helluva lot. Get rid of the pic. |
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Post by CaptainChip on Mar 3, 2008 17:48:10 GMT -5
Will Stickman was my name. It started off as just another day. Exept for the fact that I died, in a car crash. But I didn't die, it was some other guy who LOOKED like me. So, there I was, in the Tesco down the road, when who do bump into? Jack Thompson. I punched him in the face and then went to McDonalds... Just to ask where Burger King was. |
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Post by Ele Mantel on Mar 3, 2008 19:21:13 GMT -5
But I didn't die, it was some other guy who LOOKED like me. So, there I was, in the Tesco down the road, when who do bump into? Jack Thompson. I punched him in the face and then went to McDonalds... Just to ask where Burger King was. I was on my way to burger king... WHEN DUKE NUKEM POPED OUT AND SAID I HAVE BALLS OF STEEL AND RAN OFF. Than I gawt a cheeseburger. |
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Mar 3, 2008 19:49:11 GMT -5
I punched him in the face and then went to McDonalds... Just to ask where Burger King was. I was on my way to burger king... WHEN DUKE NUKEM POPED OUT AND SAID I HAVE BALLS OF STEEL AND RAN OFF. Than I gawt a cheeseburger. Walking back from Burger King, I found a Lolcat, who asked for my Cheeseburger. I gave it to him, and he told me he would follow me and be my bestest friend. ;D |
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Post by madvideogamer on Mar 3, 2008 19:54:20 GMT -5
This Bob, you might know him from that 14 year sleeping in McDonalds. He can't talk to you since he started smoking weed, and now lets take a look at his life.
Since Bob started smoking he got AIDS and quit his job. Bob's friends started going on parties without him, this made Bob sad.
One day Bob found out his girlfriend left him and his family got murdered by a clown at the carnival, this made Bob upset.
After a few years passed his eyes and lungs started to hurt, he couldn't pay his bills and got homeless. Bob was hungry.
After a while, Bob had died and never heard of again. THE END.
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