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Post by Purplecat on Apr 14, 2009 12:22:43 GMT -5
i have a cool subplot idea for my characters but it's hard enough keeping up with my character's main plots in the regular brawl so i shall instead make it into fan fiction. the story begins near future, a couple of years after 20XX
Chapter 1
McJesus Bunker 12. That's my home now. Really glad I got a bunch of smokes before we went into hiding, I don't think i could stand all of this without them. "Hey Grimmy, the place well hidden?" I ask her as she comes back in. "Sure is, took me a second try finding it even. No Wheeljack it didn't take that many trys. Stop undermining me!" great, she's arguing with the turtle, that must mean it's time to light a smoke.
As the cigarette starts giving off it's signature gray smoke i look over to MVG. Whatever happens next this is going to be my team, a crazed girl with a scythe, a turtle, and an insane escape from a lab. Thank me that Angelface is in Bunker 12 too, at least i have one sane person to talk to.
A fizzling sound makes me turn around to the table and see a purple flame on the table leaving a note. This had better be good news. "Hey gang," I say out loud while looking it over "It looks like we have a mission tomorrow, and it won't be easy"
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Post by Grimscott on Apr 14, 2009 17:38:29 GMT -5
Needs spelling/punctuation work, bit short for a first post, but okay to get started. Thank me that Angelface is in Bunker 12 too, i c wut u did thar
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Post by Balto-Boy on Apr 14, 2009 17:49:25 GMT -5
Needs spelling/punctuation work, bit short for a first post, but okay to get started. What she said.
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Post by Purplecat on Apr 14, 2009 20:02:47 GMT -5
thanks guys (knew i sucked at spelling anyway, this could act as practice for writing actual books) first post was short cause i was trying to post it before i had to go to school, i'll try to keep it the shortest part
Chapter 1 continued
Down Function: Wake Up What's going on? Things are dark at first, but i see someone approaching me. Me. I exist. I don't remember existing before, is this the first time I'm here? By the time i start pondering this the strange man grabs me and carries me out of the room through a strange orange fringed hole in the wall.
Hallway after hallway, room after room this orange suited man pulls me through what seems to be portals created by the gun he wields. I notice every once in a while there seems to be other things trying to get to us, or trying to hurt us. In either case they're failing, apparently this guy knows what he's doing.
One last door and he steps out into a bright room with only a floor. Outside. We're outside, and probably on the roof. Is this guy going to jump? Of course as soon as I think that he starts running and jumps off the roof like he's competing in the Olympics. Besides wondering how in hell i know what the Olympics are if i just came into being i watch this maniac shoot at the ground and then again at a different spot. Falling through one and... is it falling up or is it launching? Whatever it's considered he throws me into the air and I'm caught by something that seems to have giant wings.
GrimScott "I'm sorry about yelling at you earlier, things have just been crazy recently" I look down at Wheeljack who's looking up at me funny "Hey, this plan wasn't my idea. Mr. Halo-Pants said we had to do this cause he got a piece of paper from nowhere." Wheeljack just raised a turtlebrow at me and looked back up to the manhole we were waiting under. Apparently there's some important robot thingy that we're waiting to drag to the Bunk.
After a while i look back down to Wheeljack. "Wanna play cards again?" Then there was a thunk noise that distracted both of us, It was the robot thingy. "Hey it's here! Want to poke it with a stick?" Wheeljack of course was insisting that i just drag it back to the Bunk, but I ignored him and poked it with a stick. "Hehehe"
About an hour later I dragged the robot to the entrance of the Bunk. Wheeljack seemed to be trying to tell me something... with his mind. "Hey you're right, we should make sure it's on before we bring it in." I checked the neck first because switches on robots are usually there or... well lets hope the robot builder wasn't a pervert. There was writing on it's neck, maybe if i say that out loud that's what wakes it up. "Down 86"
"Down 86. Main Intelligence Programming Downloaded. Movement Function Programming Downloaded. Self Awareness Programming Downloaded. Life Purpose Programming Not Downloaded."
It talked... "HOLY SHIT IT TALKED THAT'S COOL! TALK AGAIN!" As I started poking it with a stick again trying to get it to talk again the Bunk entrance opened. "So there's the robot, bring it in Grimmy."
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2009 20:42:55 GMT -5
Wow, this is really good so far! I do say, please continue.
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Post by Balto-Boy on Apr 14, 2009 21:42:25 GMT -5
Hehehe. Nice GrimScot segment thar. This sounds like it's gonna be good. I'm sticking 'round for a while.
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Post by Grimscott on Apr 14, 2009 21:47:47 GMT -5
. . . I feel moreso insulted. GRIMSCOTT ISN'T RETARDED WHY IS IT SO HARD FOR YOU GUYS TO GET THAT
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Post by Balto-Boy on Apr 14, 2009 22:25:50 GMT -5
. . . I feel moreso insulted. GRIMSCOTT ISN'T RETARDED WHY IS IT SO HARD FOR YOU GUYS TO GET THAT Quite frankly, my dear Scottson, there is a very fine line between retarded and silly...
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Post by Grimscott on Apr 15, 2009 6:51:09 GMT -5
. . . I feel moreso insulted. GRIMSCOTT ISN'T RETARDED WHY IS IT SO HARD FOR YOU GUYS TO GET THAT Quite frankly, my dear Scottson, there is a very fine line between retarded and silly... And I'm tired of seeing Grim treated as the former. Silence.
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Post by Purplecat on Apr 15, 2009 12:26:29 GMT -5
I just meant for Grimmy to seem Insane. I do not intend to make any brawler look bad in this fanfiction, any action that does so is unintentional (unless it's zarth) and is just the result of me making your brawler act as how i would think they would in the story
Chapter 2 The Clone Wars
Marckus Things have changed a lot recently. First a lot of Brawlers did a disappearing act on us, and now it seems like Brawl is joining some sort of intergalactic alliance without a second thought. I would go down to the void to beat the hell out of people but the only cool brawlers that didn't disappear are either in the hospital or out on important business. Maybe I could get into a random fight with someone, I'll go with the first person who looks at me funny.
"The Government of the White Voids is very happy that the world of Brawl will be joining us. But it won't be just our benefit, it will be yours too. Together everyone can work towards utopia here on Brawl, like we have made on several hundred other planets."
Looking over to the TV store besides me i saw that annoying Nekrozoa knock off Black Suit Guy on the screen. Well Suit Guy, you have just volunteered yourself to an ass kicking and I'm a very bored Brawler.
Down "So your saying the robot has no purpose in life Grimmy?" "Ya, he said so himself, it wasn't programmed in yet." "Well that must be why we were supposed to get it."
I hope at some point they let me in on what's happening, being in the dark gets kind of old. The entrance to what I've heard referred to as the 'Bunk' opens as a brunette woman walks in. A brunette woman with wings. I'd say that things are starting to make sense but I'd be lying. Can robots lie?
"Why am I here?"
The red one looks slightly surprised at first after I talked. "Your here to help us fight the people that made you"
"Why should I?"
He gave me a look I'm pretty certain isn't good. "Because the Government of the White Void is a corrupt and evil system and will be the death of us all if we don't fight back. If we left you with them you'd die in battle or if you be so lucky end up being scraped and used for recycling metal, and you know the worst part? They wouldn't mourn for your loss, they make your kind to be disposable fighters. If you fight with us, well I won't promise things will be great but if we win against the Government you'll have a better life than you could find otherwise."
Well that's an awful lot to think about, and i was born only a few hours ago. At least I know what's going on now.
"Sounds good, I'll fight with you" "Swell, lets just wait for MVG to retur- ah I just thought of something, what if they have a tracking device in the Robot?"
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Post by Balto-Boy on Apr 19, 2009 20:38:25 GMT -5
A wee bit short, but you definitely have my attention. Also, I think I might know who the "robot" is... but I'll wait and see.
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Post by Purplecat on Jun 3, 2009 11:19:12 GMT -5
sorry for delay: school is a bitch but this is my last day, minus the graduation ceremony so hopefully i'll update this more often from now on
chapter 3 (part 1)
down Right now i'm glad robots can't smell. We all were standing outside of the 'Bunk' which of course is hidden in a sewer.
The red guy lit up a cigarette "Alright, once MVG gets back we hightail it out of here" he stared down to the left waiting for him like it wasn't a big deal.
"what if the other robots get him?" I asked the red guy. "If anyone can escape from robots," he said without moving his gaze "it's that crazy son of a bitch"
Then as if on cue the guy that grabbed me from the building came running from the corner and stopped right in front of me. "THIS IS ALL YOUR KIND'S FAULT!" he yelled before throwing me into the dirty water.
I couldn't see a thing through this 'water'. I heard something from above though, sounded like a swarm of insects. I swam back up to the surface and once i got out of the water i saw that everyone was gone. The door to the Bunk was open so i decided to check it out, maybe somewhere in there was a backup plan for if something like this happened.
walking into the bunk i saw two figures looking underneath a metal table. "Hey, what are you guys doing?" they almost simultaneously hit their heads on the table.
"What do you think your d-doing in here?" said the first one coming out from under the table, a pure white figure against the grey wall, the only defining feature seemed to be black eye outlines and light grey writing on the side of it's neck. "why aren't you with the others?" said the other one, the same but with a different number on the side. "well, one of the people down here must have hit my head against the wall, i can't seem to access my life purpose programming" good thing robots think fast.
46:"well thanks to you we bumped our h-heads too. damn it i think it messed up my voice programing, well in any vase i'm 46 and this is 47. what's your number?" 86:"i'm 86" 46:"ah, well 86, they got away but they should be heading to the white void... no wait if your life plate programming isn't working you won't know where that is" 47:"well i'd try calling the other downs but my communication seems to be shot, what about yours 46?" 46:"hmm, nope, don't have it either" 86:"wait, maybe you guys could take mine, without my LPP why would i need it anyway?" i suggested having an idea 47:"that's a great idea, now hold still you two this will be a difficult procedure"
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47:"there, now the only problem is that if your lost no one can track you 86, the BPS(brawl positioning system) is in the communicator, so maybe you should stick with us" 46:"ya, we could be a team, l-like the monster buster club!" 47:"monster buster what?" 46:"must be a tv show or something, not half bad i think. must be picking it up through the communicator. hey where's 86?"
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Post by Purplecat on Jun 18, 2009 16:25:16 GMT -5
chapter 3 the meeting
Balto Damn paper work, as if i didn't have enough going on with all the brawlers going underground and the Down system activation. I guess this is the price of power, and considering other prices i could be paying, i should be happy. But it's so damn boring.
"You busy sir?" I hear as someone knocks at the door. Well it's got to be better than Paper work. "Come on in." John walks in looking down at his clipboard. I'm glad that not everyone abandoned me. "Mr. Balto the meeting with the GoTWV is about to start." "Thanks, better get there then."
Walking to the conference room I was hoping that I would be the first to get there, the void government people kinda creep me out. That Black suit guy looks too much like Necrozoa in my opinion and even though I only met the top leader of the void government once i could tell they don't have Brawl's best interests in mind.
Coming into the meeting and claiming my chair i notice two other chairs taken already, Omni and Zarth are present as well. Great... two people who've tried time and time again to take over brawl, i wonder who else will show up. The Virus sat down across from Omni and I started to get worried. It seems all the brawlers with access to armies are being called to the meeting, are we going to be bumped off or something?
"Hello all, The grand ruler of the government of the white voids is here." Black suit guy announced being followed by Nullian, the person he was introducing of course. It's fitting someone like... her? I'll go with her, is the ruler of white voids because she's one of those albino types, kind of like the Down robots, the only color besides white is two black eye holes on the mask she wears. She looked over the room with her empty gaze and said "It seems Darwin is not present, we'll have to change that."
With a snap of her fingers Darwin, the sneaky lizard creature appeared in the last chair. "Hey, i was coming alright? i just had to get my suit on." Ignoring him Nullian continued with the meeting. "I am certain you all know what's going on, Brawl is entering the Government of white voids tomorrow and no doubt all the goody goody rebels are going to try to take us down. Now, I know you all are on bad terms with each other, but if you all join forces you will be able to win the war that has already started."
"Well that depends if you see it as winning, you could see it as surviving and getting the better end of the stick." Nullian gave Darwin a look and continued "If you succeed in getting rid of the rebel vermin then you will all get great rewards, Balto of course being ruler of Brawl with access to supplies, armies and other such things from the void government. Omni, Zarth, and Virus, you three will get a couple of planets each to your own conquering. And I'm not exactly sure what you want Darwin but i'm sure we could provide you with whatever you want." "Heh, just give me means to continue my operations, otherwise the carnage that the war will bring is all I'll want." "Good, so are we all in agreement on this?"
I had to say something about this "Are you expecting us to just get along and join our armies together despite our history together and the fact we could each separately crush the rebels easily?"
She stared at me for a long time, felt like forever and a half. I didn't show it though, she's the type of... thing that you don't want to appear weak around. The type that would destroy anything cowering without hesitation.
"Zarth, who stopped your great invasion not too long ago?" "GLaDOS P..." "And Darwin, was it not your own creation, Jennifer that destroyed your last 2 bases and killed your wife?" "It was, and just because my wife was an evil clone of her doesn't give that rodent the right to kill her" "Omni, Virus, I don't have to remind you how much trouble Produce and Robotkilla have given you two, and you don't wear that glove for the same reason you did when brawl started do you Balto my boy?"
I slid off my glove and looked down at my paw. It had all the fingers and worked right, even had some fur left on it. Besides that it was completely messed up, damaged beyond repair thanks to the fact it was a magical injury, and i don't notice it as much lately but there's a constant sting of pain.
"Men, i'm not honestly sure we can trust this person, but she does speak the truth on one account. The rebels are a strong breed even when dealing with one, and considering the events about to happen we won't win the war unless we come together like they have. We have after the war to fight over other things once we've wiped them out"
"Nice speech," replied Darwin, who seems to love to talk, "Now comes the hard part, actually doing what we set out to do."
Down "Here's the void, i can't imagine how a robot could get lost from the others and not know where it is."
I looked over to the person that showed me the way to the White void, apparently it's shut off to all but people with clearance, like Down robots. "Eh, well we are the first models so we're not perfect, thanks for bringing me here."
I looked into the white void, an endless expanse of singular color. The rebels are in there somewhere, and I have to find them. damn
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