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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 8, 2008 20:25:13 GMT -5
This is a story i wrote, kind of like a BBS story on Newgrounds, but with all of us in it, set in real life, i think this is some of my best work ever. Plus i made a banner for the story, these are not the only people in the story, i plan to have every user on this board appear in the story at some point or another. [glow=white,2,300]WHITE VOID[/glow] Chapter 1: Meet Blue They called him “Blue” because he was friendly and reliable. Blue was a writer but everyone knew he wasn’t and good at it. (LOL) To keep himself of the street, he did odd jobs around the Winner’s Circle apartment complex where he lived. If you needed your VCR fixed, you went to Blue. He’d fix it, and throw in the first season DVD of whatever TV show he was watching at the time. One day Blue was working on a joint project, he and the local Maintenance Man, who they called “Spawner,” because when he need something, it seemed to appear out of nowhere, he could have been a magician, but instead he was holding the ladder while Blue climbed up to fix up the screws holding the awning together. “How’s it going?” Spawner screamed up the ladder. The doormen glared at Spawner. “There’s a thing I learned when I was in construction, IF HE ISN’T SCREAMING IN PAIN, DON’T SHOUT!” The doorman’s name was Jack, Jack Izmee, but due to his seemingly never-ending temper, they called him “Rabies.” Therefore his named was John “Rabies” Izmee. Rabies is me. As one could expect, Mr. Rabies wasn’t exactly social, most of the conversations he had in his recent lifetime were with either Blue or Spawner while they were working outside. The awning creaked again, and Rabies muttered. “If that thing falls on me I swear I’ll sue the building.” “I’ll fix it right away,” said Blue, coming down the ladder, wrench in hand. “No, take your time.” Said Rabies, who was making an effort to stand under the oldest, rustiest, creakiest pole, expecting the much needed vacation its falling would bring him. “Come on, fall, fall, FALL!!!” Rabies chanted. “You wish.” Said Blue, the three of them laughed, unaware of the pair of eyes watching their antics… The pair of eyes belonged to Jay, a patron in the local McDonalds. Jay watched the trio as Spawner gestured, obviously telling a story, (Spawner’s favorite story subject was his crazy girlfriend.) Jay watched as Blue and Spawner fixed the awning, he watched as another doorman came to tell Rabies that his shift was over, and Jay watched as the trio went inside Winner’s Circle apartments. Jay’s job was done. He had been hired to watch Blue while he was outside the apartment, and now that he was inside the apartment, he was done. Jay stood up and was about to leave when a voice from behind the counter called to him. “Hey, Jay, you leaving so soon? You just got your burger.” It was McJesus; they called him that because he was the best fry cook in the state. The Jesus of fast food, if you will. “Yeah, I’m going.” Jay said. “I have some work to do.” “Come back soon or something…” Said McJesus, waving nonchalantly at the new costumer walking through the door. Jay was pleased with his work, he’d tailed Blue for the required amount of time, Blue didn’t seem to be in any danger, and Jay would get $2000 for making sure. Jay was about to get in his car, when he saw it. Three people were walking down the street, two of them Jay didn’t recognize, but one he did. It was Sticky, the local fake gangster. Sticky would prance around in baggy jeans, waving his club, yelling about how awesome and cool he was, how everyone else was a moron, making random threats, and things of that nature. Normally, Jay wouldn’t care about Sticky, but this time Jay knew any threats made b Sticky would be very real. Jay could see the gun sticking out of Sticky’s pocket. Please don’t, Please don’t, Jay thought. Sticky and his friends went into Winner’s Circle apartments. Jay swore, kicked his car door closed, and ran across the street. The elevator doors were closing when Jay arrived in the lobby, but he heard the destination. “6th floor please.” Jay had to get to the 6th floor first, or Blue, Rabies and Spawner would all die.
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Post by Ele Mantel on Jan 8, 2008 20:36:13 GMT -5
Left out again
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 8, 2008 20:52:57 GMT -5
Left out again This is the first chapter. Your're in the next one. Be patient.
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Post by McJesus on Jan 8, 2008 22:52:22 GMT -5
Yay fry-cook.
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jan 9, 2008 0:08:08 GMT -5
Not just any fry-cook but the JESUS of fry-cooks!
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 9, 2008 0:15:30 GMT -5
YUR NOT JUST A FRYCOOK, your secretly a- Whoops, almost spoiled somethings. ;D You'll see next chapter
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Post by ₦ῒ↑ʁo on Jan 9, 2008 0:20:10 GMT -5
am i in the first chapter?
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 9, 2008 0:29:19 GMT -5
am i in the first chapter? You are, actually. I forget to put it in the text, but your with Sticky.
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Post by bulet on Jan 9, 2008 8:49:45 GMT -5
am igonna be in it soon ;D
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Post by kevmcg1 on Jan 9, 2008 12:59:53 GMT -5
Left out again This is the first chapter. Your're in the next one. Be patient. When can I be expected to be introduced?
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 9, 2008 13:15:01 GMT -5
Wait, aren't we going to have our powers?
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Post by bulet on Jan 9, 2008 13:17:16 GMT -5
Wait, aren't we going to have our powers? patience,patience.OR ELSE lol i always wanted to say that. ;D
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 9, 2008 15:57:24 GMT -5
Wait, aren't we going to have our powers? Everyone has powurs, in some way that would make sense in real life. You'll see how i explain yours in the next chapter.
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 9, 2008 16:18:07 GMT -5
Wait, aren't we going to have our powers? Everyone has powurs, in some way that would make sense in real life. You'll see how i explain yours in the next chapter. Can't wait. ;D
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Post by bulet on Jan 9, 2008 16:19:45 GMT -5
Everyone has powurs, in some way that would make sense in real life. You'll see how i explain yours in the next chapter. Can't wait. ;D oh you posted the pic in dawn of the brawlers.you were at the buss stop some guy comes gives you arm and leaves.end
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 9, 2008 16:21:58 GMT -5
oh you posted the pic in dawn of the brawlers.you were at the buss stop some guy comes gives you arm and leaves.end Yeah, that's the official version of the "story", Sheepshifter probably has his own way of explaining it.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 9, 2008 16:26:23 GMT -5
Yeah, that's the official version of the "story", Sheepshifter probably has his own way of explaining it. Yeah, one that... could... kind of... ... happen... in real life... Yeah...
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Post by bulet on Jan 9, 2008 16:27:03 GMT -5
LIKE WUT!!! please forive me i am in a good mood and when im in a good mood bad things happen.what about rockin rabies.are you goona make a story about him too?
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Post by rabiesisme on Jan 9, 2008 16:33:13 GMT -5
Yeah, that's the official version of the "story", Sheepshifter probably has his own way of explaining it. Yeah, one that... could... kind of... ... happen... in real life... Yeah... A gangster sensei popping up when you're waiting for the bus and giving you a metal arm for no apparent reason can happen. I just can't type that with a straight face. LIKE WUT!!! please forive me i am in a good mood and when im in a good mood bad things happen.what about rockin rabies.are you goona make a story about him too? Shur.
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Post by spawner on Jan 9, 2008 16:39:08 GMT -5
Yeah, one that... could... kind of... ... happen... in real life... Yeah... A gangster sensei popping up when you're waiting for the bus and giving you a metal arm for no apparent reason can happen. I just can't type that with a straight face. Your the chosen one 'n shit. You made me lol.
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Post by bulet on Jan 10, 2008 4:30:37 GMT -5
i liked the way he said dawg and bounce and n****r.lol.
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Post by SwordKill on Jan 10, 2008 11:29:04 GMT -5
The story is great, but I just need to point something out. Sticky doesn't kill people (unless there is a HUGE ASS cash reward). The only time he would kill people is for a ton of money, or if somebody was really pissing him off.
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Post by jallo on Jan 11, 2008 18:29:21 GMT -5
Damn I'm awesome.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 11, 2008 20:29:41 GMT -5
The story is great, but I just need to point something out. Sticky doesn't kill people (unless there is a HUGE ASS cash reward). The only time he would kill people is for a ton of money, or if somebody was really pissing him off. Exactly, Huge FUCKING cash reward is involved, Also, next chapter [glow=red,2,300]RABIES, DON'T GO INTO THE LIGHT![/glow] Chapter 2: One of those days… “What are you reading?” Rabies asked Blue. Blue, Rabies, and Spawner were cooling off in the building’s Rec Room. Spawner was in the corner, playing Super Smash Bros. Brawl on the Wii, Blue was reading a packet of papers, and Rabies had come over to see what it was. Blue held up the packet. “It’s something I was asked to hold on too that guy in apartment #365.” “The MadVideoGamer? The one who went on vacation?” “That’s him.” Blue brandished the packet as he spoke. “It’s an epic story about this crazed demon called TheOmnipresense, and how he’s trying to rip a portal into the demon world, he calls it, ‘The White Void,’ It’s the script for something MadVideoGamer is writing, and I guess he’s paranoid about someone stealing it, so he’s paying me to look after it.” Rabies slumped into the chair next to Blue, “Humph… ‘Portal to the Demon World’ indeed… what a piece of Fiction…” “Fiction? No… ‘The White Void’ is a very real story, a stolen story, a story we’d like back.” Rabies looked up, into the barrel of a gun. It was the three thugs from outside the building. “God Damn it! Bulet! I told you NOT to take out the gun!” Sticky yelled. “Sorry…” Whined Bulet, “But my guns just so shiny and awesome…” Sticky put his hand on his face and sighed. “Oh God… why did they give me THESE guys as partners…” The other thug spoke, “We’re with TheOmnipresense, and we want that script.” “TheOmnipresense is REAL?” Blue yelled in surprise. “Nice going Railto,” Said Bulet, “Next you might as well tell them about project White Void.” “Is ANYTHING in this story fiction?” Blue yelled. Sticky face palmed, “We are so screwed.” Rabies tried a diplomatic approach, “Look,” He said, extending his hand, “I don’t know anything about this Omnipresence guy, and I don’t know anything about you guys, but there might be a diplomatic way to end this, so just put the guns down-“ When he heard ‘Put the guns down,’ Bulet went berserk. “NO WAI, MAH GUN IZ SUPER AWESOME AND BITCHASS!” To demonstrate the point, he fired wildly. The shot spend out of the gun, flew across the room, and buried itself in Rabies’ outstretched arm.
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jan 11, 2008 22:04:32 GMT -5
Lol, Rabies got it in the arm, I think I know whats going to happen to him next.
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 11, 2008 22:08:01 GMT -5
Lol, Rabies got it in the arm, I think I know whats going to happen to him next. Send me a PM then, predict the future.
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Post by madvideogamer on Jan 11, 2008 22:29:38 GMT -5
So am I on vacation though out the whole story?
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 11, 2008 23:04:11 GMT -5
So am I on vacation though out the whole story? Not Exaaaaaactly...
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Post by Ele Mantel on Jan 11, 2008 23:20:23 GMT -5
So am I on vacation though out the whole story? Not Exaaaaaactly... It is quite easy to know the next part about rabies. Although, you could make it a twist that no one expects. Also, are you going to post all the chapters at once or one a day to build up the suspence?!? I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE *suisides*
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Post by Maybe Might Not Be Moneybags on Jan 11, 2008 23:49:23 GMT -5
DON'T DO IT! YOU'RE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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