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Post by Zarth on Jun 11, 2009 14:38:05 GMT -5
I'm starting a new art thread, the other one if full of crap and i can't edit the first few pages or anything, so yea. Index page one: floating alter. 1. Floating alter: left behind by the ones who built Zarth's armor on a dead planet.  |
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Post by McJesus on Jun 12, 2009 1:23:04 GMT -5
*claps* You're learning not to use the pencil tool for 'detail'! This is an improvement, mah boy!
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Post by destructin on Jun 12, 2009 1:25:24 GMT -5
I agree with McJesus, this doesn't look bad. Good work!
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Post by Ele Mantel on Jun 12, 2009 2:34:12 GMT -5
What ever happened to making this account for one thread
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Post by destructin on Jun 12, 2009 3:02:57 GMT -5
What ever happened to making this account for one thread He's just denying it, but he cannot live without his dosage of SPB. Lets just say those are excuses, and he will be here daily, and be a regular again. |
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Post by Zarth1 on Jun 15, 2009 11:02:22 GMT -5
Last drawing i'm going to put up. I thought I should, theres no reason not show it. Anyhoo I'm going to practice with my pencil drawings again. I've gotta get better at it. (this was done late at night so I got a litttle lazy with some small parts lie the pillar holding up the bridge to the far right.) 2. The inner chamber It's the inner pert of the circular area in the first drawing.  Enjoy.  |
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Post by Yacazuma on Jun 16, 2009 9:09:03 GMT -5
Last drawing i'm going to put up. Suuuuure it is... |
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Post by Zarth on Jul 17, 2009 13:09:23 GMT -5
Forget the posts above. I know you guys are going to tease me about them so please just don't bother. What earth will turn into in my book. All deformed and mutated.  kekeke typos |
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Post by McJesus on Jul 17, 2009 22:49:22 GMT -5
north pole seems lacking, with geography like that i'd like to see more islands all up in the continents' grills, the ocean still looks like scribbles (albeit not as bad as your earlier attempts at detail) and those powerline looking things (i know they're not powerlines) seem so slightly tacked on, but otherwise not bad.
also your stars are waaay too uniform
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Post by Zarth on Jul 18, 2009 13:43:58 GMT -5
north pole seems lacking, with geography like that i'd like to see more islands all up in the continents' grills, the ocean still looks like scribbles (albeit not as bad as your earlier attempts at detail) and those powerline looking things (i know they're not powerlines) seem so slightly tacked on, but otherwise not bad. also your stars are waaay too uniformi didn't pay that much attention to the stars, and I'll see what I can do about the north poll. and those lines are continental bridges. (this is WAAAAAAY in the future. Some island could have been swallowed up from the deformation of the continents. I also would have added clouds. but if i did that Earth would look live Venus. (there are a lot of gasses and spores emitting from the organism that now covers the planet. anyway, thanks. |
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Post by McJesus on Jul 19, 2009 2:59:44 GMT -5
oh i just realised that the purple was the land and the pink was the ocean, i think you need to work on differentiating between the two, the land shouldnt be so uniformly 'detailed', yknow?
the intercontinental bridges would logically go on the shortest route between the islands, but thats nitpicking
and dont make excuses for why there arent islands, im not asking for you to cover up holes im asking you to address them and revise. i do that all the time.
and i hadnt thought about clouds, i also think that would likely obscure the planet making for a less interesting picture
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Post by Zarth on Jul 22, 2009 23:07:47 GMT -5
oh i just realised that the purple was the land and the pink was the ocean, i think you need to work on differentiating between the two, the land shouldnt be so uniformly 'detailed', yknow? the intercontinental bridges would logically go on the shortest route between the islands, but thats nitpicking and dont make excuses for why there arent islands, im not asking for you to cover up holes im asking you to address them and revise. i do that all the time. and i hadnt thought about clouds, i also think that would likely obscure the planet making for a less interesting picture Ok... Why would I put islands around Africa when there aren't any? only one i see is Madagascar, and thats by a lower part of Africa which i didn't add in. anyway, I'll probably make a more detailed picture of the planet a little later on and add in some of those islands you want. ( I was a little rust with drawing when I drew this up so yea it looks like crap.) the bridges linked to certain cities anyway, thanks for the criticism. |
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Post by DaringVonContra on Jul 22, 2009 23:29:37 GMT -5
Do you take requests?
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Post by Zarth on Jul 22, 2009 23:34:50 GMT -5
Depends, what do yea want? |
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Post by DaringVonContra on Jul 22, 2009 23:40:32 GMT -5
I want a new wallpaper, One with Rick standing there facing the camera his hand glowing with his trademark purple flame his eyes glowing green with green electricity surrounding them his bandanna ripped as if he has just been in a fight then in the bottom right corner I want Rick written there in cursive. Can you do it? SUCKA!
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Post by Zarth on Jul 22, 2009 23:42:01 GMT -5
Would you like beaten up bloody bodies all around him too?
Also, what would he look like as a full body?
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Post by DaringVonContra on Jul 22, 2009 23:46:25 GMT -5
Sure why the hell not also as a fulbod rick wears a dark blue hoodie with black jeans he has a few cuts and bruses here and there and wears fingerless gloves.
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Post by Zarth on Jul 27, 2009 23:35:13 GMT -5
DVC, you pic is almost finished. on a side note, heres a picture for the 1 week thread, I want to join in but I can because of Saturday I'm going to visit some relatives and i don't know if I'll have access to a computer. bla bla bla, here you go, one of the entrance pics.  |
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Post by xamllew on Jul 28, 2009 3:56:31 GMT -5
Looks good, I've never tried drawing a planet before.
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Post by Gront on Jul 28, 2009 13:21:25 GMT -5
The clouds I think need some more substance to them, and the rocket looks terribly generic, but the stars and the landmasses look good. Perhaps you should try making mountains on the planet's surface the stick out a little on the circular planet outline?
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Post by xamllew on Jul 28, 2009 13:53:13 GMT -5
You might also want to consider giving it a light gradient around it to give it an atmosphere effect.
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Post by Zarth on Jul 31, 2009 21:36:53 GMT -5
The clouds I think need some more substance to them, and the rocket looks terribly generic, but the stars and the landmasses look good. Perhaps you should try making mountains on the planet's surface the stick out a little on the circular planet outline? the rocket is where took man is, thats why it looks that way, I'll add in more colours of grey into the clouds and I'll add in the mountains You might also want to consider giving it a light gradient around it to give it an atmosphere effect. That may take some time to do, but i'll see what I can do. Now then, This picture isn't finished yet, it' supost to have Zarth in the middle but I haveing trouble on how big he should be in the green flame, it's driving me crazy because i want to finish it but i'm running out of time and i'll have to go soon to helpo with packing and what not. So HERE IT IS.  |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2009 21:44:06 GMT -5
Ah that's good so far. One thing though, the lighter part of the cracks in the void seem too light, I would make them slightly darker. Also....  |
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Post by Zarth on Sept 11, 2009 16:38:48 GMT -5
A sub i made in blender. yea, I'm getting back into 3D animation. This is for a class assignment, we were supposed to make a cartoony crappy yellow submarine, but I decided to this instead, teacher likes it so it's good. i slightly customized it so that it didn't look like a generic sub.  |
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Post by xamllew on Sept 11, 2009 17:57:33 GMT -5
Looks pretty great, liking the design. But why such low lighting?
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Post by Zarth on Sept 11, 2009 18:16:46 GMT -5
Looks pretty great, liking the design. But why such low lighting? it just truned out like that when I rendered it, I guess i forgot to move the light source. |
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Post by Zarth on Sept 17, 2009 21:52:37 GMT -5
Quick simple pictur of the REALLY TALL TOWER! By the way, im working on a project of making brawl city 3D it'll be awesome and detailed, streets, windows, doors, lights. YOU NAME IT! it'll be there.  |
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Post by McJesus on Sept 17, 2009 22:19:17 GMT -5
By the way, im working on a project of making brawl city 3D it'll be awesome and detailed, streets, windows, doors, lights. YOU NAME IT! it'll be there. don't get caught up on the details for the love of god! make the mockup first try and incorporate the river and everything and make sure the really tall tower is really really tall. like stupidly tall. godspeed |
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Post by Zarth on Sept 18, 2009 9:00:20 GMT -5
By the way, im working on a project of making brawl city 3D it'll be awesome and detailed, streets, windows, doors, lights. YOU NAME IT! it'll be there. don't get caught up on the details for the love of god! make the mockup first try and incorporate the river and everything and make sure the really tall tower is really really tall. like stupidly tall. godspeed Should I also make it into an animation where I have the cammera fly around so that you can see what the place looks like? or would you just like screen shots?? |
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Post by rabiesisme on Sept 18, 2009 9:59:18 GMT -5
you should make an animation where at one point the placing of the buildings forms a makeshift man stretching his anus
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