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Post by destructin on Jun 29, 2008 16:32:29 GMT -5
Also, do you think I could.... possibly have a bit more dialogue? I'm in this party, and I've only said one line... Ouch. You're not gonna like what's comin'. However, I'll try to edit in some dialogue for your character, but it's gonna be hard to not make it seem like a "I'm part of this conversation too :D"-line. I hope you still continue this..
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Post by rabiesisme on Jun 29, 2008 16:50:37 GMT -5
I do. McJesus just has to draw the pics.
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Post by destructin on Jun 29, 2008 16:53:03 GMT -5
I do. McJesus just has to draw the pics. Is he making any progress?
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Post by rabiesisme on Jun 29, 2008 16:58:24 GMT -5
I do. McJesus just has to draw the pics. Is he making any progress?
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Post by destructin on Jun 29, 2008 17:02:59 GMT -5
Heh...lol
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jallo
Apprentice
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Post by jallo on Jun 29, 2008 19:47:11 GMT -5
Hey, could I get a part in this thing, y'know, anything?
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Post by destructin on Jun 30, 2008 0:27:49 GMT -5
Hey, could I get a part in this thing, y'know, anything? Yeah, thats what I would want too.
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 30, 2008 2:27:59 GMT -5
“ Let’s cut the crap. I know you killed Spawner.” YES! I'm glad that finally got brought up. Also fullbody Quickfeet lulz.
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Post by spawner on Jun 30, 2008 10:03:34 GMT -5
“ Let’s cut the crap. I know you killed Spawner.” YES! I'm glad that finally got brought up. Huh?
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Post by McJesus on Jun 30, 2008 10:21:27 GMT -5
YES! I'm glad that finally got brought up. Huh? Don't you remember? I killed you? No one's really brought it up.
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Post by spawner on Jun 30, 2008 13:38:29 GMT -5
Oh right, Man, it suck's being dead in the first chapter, when i saw my name i was all, =D then i died in chaper 1, now im D:
No chance of a miracle?
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Post by rabiesisme on Jun 30, 2008 13:51:32 GMT -5
Oh right, Man, it suck's being dead in the first chapter, when i saw my name i was all, =D then i died in chaper 1, now im D: No chance of a miracle? OH SNAPS JOO SPOILED TEH EDNING! Lol jay kay. Nah, you're dead man.
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Post by Grimscott on Jun 30, 2008 14:54:35 GMT -5
Oh right, Man, it suck's being dead in the first chapter, when i saw my name i was all, =D then i died in chaper 1, now im D: No chance of a miracle? OH SNAPS JOO SPOILED TEH EDNING! "It's okay, I spawned another guy!"
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Post by rabiesisme on Jun 30, 2008 14:58:35 GMT -5
OH SNAPS JOO SPOILED TEH EDNING! "It's okay, I spawned another guy!" I advise ProDuce to use the 'I had another guy'-line excessively. In fact, I demand it.
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 10, 2008 8:26:57 GMT -5
-The Purge- Chapter Five: Fight with a mirror. Note: Everything written in blue text depicts events taking place at an unspecified time in the future. Everything written in normal black text depicts events taking place in present time. Also, the events written in blue are linear. That means that blue text in chapter 1 comes chronologically before blue text in chapter 2. When I say 'unspecified time', I mean it's not clear how far in the future we are, not that one blue text is 5 minutes in the future, and another blue text is 5 years in the future. It sounds complicated, but it isn't. Recap: Future. Present time.QuickFeet awoke, finding himself trapped in a glass cylinder. He got up and felt the walls of his ‘cell’, his hand sliding over the glass surface. He used the same hand to punch the glass in an attempt to break out, but found that it had no effect, other than almost breaking his hand. The glass was a few inches thick, so attempting to break it wouldn’t work… at least not with his hands. He put his feet farther apart in order to stand balanced and straightened his arms horizontally besides him. He focused. …nothing happened. “That won’t work.” said the hooded figure that was imprisoned in the cornered cell. “This entire room is equipped with power blockers. You can’t control any wind in here.” “ How do you know this?” The hooded figure stood up and walked out of the shadows while removing the hood. A train heading east passed right between the purple clone and the orange Brawler. QuickFeet could still see the clone in the empty space between two train wagons every half-a-second or so, until the clone suddenly disappeared. He had QuickFeet’s speed, so he could have gone anywhere.
The train passed completely, but the clone was nowhere to be seen. As he scanned the area, QuickFeet got into a defensive stance.
Suddenly, he heard the loud noise of the ground shredding open to his left. He saw nothing, only the ground breaking apart and rocks flying up into the air. It was heading directly at him.
After a few seconds, he could see an almost transparent purple figure that was smashing the ground with his every footstep.
QuickFeet responded by sending a wall of air directly at his approaching clone, who avoided the impact by teleporting in a flash of purple lightning.
The clone reappeared in the air right next to QF’s head, but before he could turn, the clone kicked him in the face, sending him flying right towards an incoming train. QuickFeet swiped at the ground causing a downward air strike to lift him out of the locomotive’s way and land safely on top of it. He regained his balance as the train he was on passed his copy, who jumped on it afterwards.
They were now both standing on different wagons of the same train heading east, back to the city.
QuickFeet took a few steps forward, and sent a strong gust at the metal chain that connected the locomotive he was on to the other wagons, breaking it. He waved both his hands from right to left, causing a huge wind to derail all the other wagons, including the one the clone was on.
The other wagons, still attached to each other (not the locomotive) flew through the air and landed in a big explosion. The erupting fire tinted the surrounding area in a red colour that expanded and retreated, like the tides, as the fire flickered.
QuickFeet inspected the scene from a distance, as to see if his foe had survived the impact. Behind the wreckage, he could see the clone rise on his feet. His face showed a few scars, and was bleeding. He opened his ‘stitched’ mouth and let out a loud roar at his orange counterpart. He blasted some air near his own feet to shoot himself into the sky. The clone pulled his hands over his head and formed them into one fist together. He landed where QuickFeet was standing and brought his hands down, but QuickFeet rolled away to the side, making the clone hit he ground instead.
Before QuickFeet could regain balance after rolling, the clone already ran in his direction with his right arm held back, ready to punch. QuickFeet grabbed the incoming fist with his left hand and moved it out of his way to punch the clone repeatedly in the face with his other hand. After unleashing his fist in the purple replica’s face, QuickFeet jumped up and kicked the clone in the chest with both his feet and some added air to make him fly farther and faster. The clone flew over 4 tracks, barely dodging a passing train, but crashed into an incoming one on the fifth track, derailing it. The clone got up from the new wreckage, and lifted both his hands up in the air, causing wind to lift up the train he just crashed into. He motioned his hands towards QuickFeet, sending the train at him, but QuickFeet dodged it by jumping back.
The derailed train was now lying between QF and his clone, causing them to lose sight of each other. All the clone could see was wind carrying the previously exploded and now burning wreckage right at him. QuickFeet had sent the wreckage toward the clone with a motion of both his hands and a lot of wind. The burning metal and a few rocks landed right on top of the clone, crushing him under it. Surely he didn’t survive being trapped under a burning train.
QuickFeet jumped on top of the derailed train that was lying in between him and his adversary. He was breathing heavily from the fight.
He noticed something behind the fire. It was a hovering machine. It had a white exterior and a dark grey lens. It appeared to be a camera recording the whole thing. The flying camera flew through the fire and stopped a few feet from QuickFeet’s face. The lens rotated and extended as if it were zooming in.
Before QuickFeet could react, the camera flew off again and disappeared behind the smoke of the burning train.
QuickFeet jumped off the derailed wagon he was standing on and continued running west, towards the edge of Brawl City.
“ You designed it? QuickFeet asked The Omnipresence. “ Then how come you’re locked away here?” The Omnipresence took some steps forward and grabbed a bar with each of his hands. “This used to be MY building. A few months ago, another shareholder named Daniel Sheppard threw me in here and took control of the company. I’ve been in this cell ever since.” “ So how do we get out of here?” Omni’s face took on a ‘ l:C ’ type expression. “I think the fact that I’m still in here shows that I don’t know…”
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Post by The Omnipresence on Jul 10, 2008 9:51:15 GMT -5
“ So how do we get out of here?” Omni’s face took on a ‘ l:C ’ type expression. “I think the fact that I’m still in here shows that I don’t know…” Yeah, that's something I would say. Now more of this vomit story please.
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 10, 2008 10:34:21 GMT -5
“ So how do we get out of here?” Omni’s face took on a ‘ l:C ’ type expression. “I think the fact that I’m still in here shows that I don’t know…” Yeah, that's something I would say. Totally. Though maybe you'd slip in a "dumbass..." or something? You only realize that it means two things AFTER you decide on the title. :C
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Post by McJesus on Jul 10, 2008 10:54:13 GMT -5
The next chapter is wicked, I can't wait to draw the pictures for that.
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 10, 2008 11:18:28 GMT -5
The next chapter is wicked, I can't wait to draw the pictures for that. Well, ya don't have to wait.
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Post by SwordKill on Jul 10, 2008 11:31:12 GMT -5
You continue to impress me, guys. This is so great!
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Hat Salesman
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Hey hey mama, said the way you move[M0n:-6104]
Well, hello there.
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Post by Hat Salesman on Jul 10, 2008 14:08:05 GMT -5
More. I demand it.
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Post by RobotKilla on Jul 10, 2008 15:07:08 GMT -5
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Post by Grimscott on Jul 10, 2008 15:41:50 GMT -5
The next chapter is wicked, I can't wait to draw the pictures for that. Well, ya don't have to wait. Hopefully that means we don't have to wait too long to get said chapter, eh? Also, why do I get the feeling something bad is going to happen to Omni? D:
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 10, 2008 15:44:48 GMT -5
Well, ya don't have to wait. Hopefully that means we don't have to wait too long to get said chapter, eh? I have no idea. McJ said he wants to draw A LOT of pictures for that chapter. Beeeecause you're a loving and caring person?
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Post by destructin on Jul 10, 2008 15:45:52 GMT -5
Hopefully that means we don't have to wait too long to get said chapter, eh? I have no idea. McJ said he wants to draw A LOT of pictures for that chapter. Beeeecause you're a loving and caring person? Will I still get a chance to come in this story?
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 10, 2008 15:47:48 GMT -5
I have no idea. McJ said he wants to draw A LOT of pictures for that chapter. Beeeecause you're a loving and caring person? Will I still get a chance to come in this story? Yeah, probably.
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Post by destructin on Jul 10, 2008 15:55:27 GMT -5
Will I still get a chance to come in this story? Yeah, probably. C:
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Post by McJesus on Jul 10, 2008 22:17:22 GMT -5
I have no idea. McJ said he wants to draw A LOT of pictures for that chapter. Actually, I was thinking I'll just stay with the regular 2.
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Post by destructin on Jul 10, 2008 22:58:23 GMT -5
I have no idea. McJ said he wants to draw A LOT of pictures for that chapter. Actually, I was thinking I'll just stay with the regular 2. The faster the better.
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Post by rabiesisme on Jul 11, 2008 2:54:47 GMT -5
I have no idea. McJ said he wants to draw A LOT of pictures for that chapter. Actually, I was thinking I'll just stay with the regular 2. Yeah, that's good. Let's just go with that. If you really want, you can still draw other scenes later and put 'em in your art thread.
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